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The book itself has an solid background as well as the world building, the actual combat and everything is interesting but throughout the book we see people keep trying to go to the mc to "save him" despite being way weaker than him, the dialogue between woman and the mc is also extremely cringy....... overall if you cant handle cringe drop it
On chapter 50 and have to say this is the most cliché, cringe worthy novel I’ve ever had the displeasure of reading. You know every single trope that you hate in novels? Edge lord M.C., vanilla NTR, hiding strength? This novel has all of those tropes, plus horrific grammar.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]some errors of she/his overall good story
powers and evolution of mc is epic.. the especially love the gentle love tracks .. though its a harem, i love how author is handling each trach.. i hope author clearly explain why cultivation is not well known in the kind of setting he created .. more clearly ..
One of the BEST I've ever read. I will highly appreciate it if the Author will make a chapter for Cultivation(Genesis and Qi) as well as for the rankings of their weapons and cultivation manuals.
Hello, dear author! I've read your novel and it's really great. Please click on my profile picture, where you can find what you need,I can give you more power stones and comments. I found this book to be a captivating and powerful read. The themes of identity and strength shown through the main character's story is truly inspiring. While there are moments of harshness and tension, the story overall has a strong sense of hope and resilience. This book is a great reminder to all of us to stay true to ourselves, and to believe in our own greatness.
Dear Author, I really really loved the story and it's execution till now(ch 176). Even though there were some cringey moments but overall story setup and internal logic was very much stable in comparison to many other nonsense stories. Though i have only one little complaint that although i love to read detailed scenes in this novel but you seem to focus a bit too much on details that it is sad to see many of chs(that too of high word count) come out as fillers 😔😿 I mean like that arc where Setsuka comes to know about Tenku's involvement with 2 girls in Beijing was written in 3 chs while it could have been written in 1 ch at most. Same case here idol's wish to follow Tenku is spread over multiple chs but could have been shortened. So, in short there are too many irrelevant and useless details in novel😔 So i hope you would improve on this factor. Lastly and most importantly I wish you would complete this story and i promise i would accompany you to end of the journey because I simply loved your story a bit too much😅
so I love the idea of this story and I love how the author is telling it. my only complaint is the last few chapters have felt like nothing but filler. like the author updates once a day very consistently I know exactly when a chapter is going to come out and I'm excited for it because I know what this story could be from the earlier chapters. but this last chapter he legit just ate an omelet.
Definitely my kind of story. An OP Harem MC with a secret identity but at the same time being a kind normal average dude in the public eyes. Fun Stuff. I just hope that the harem plot goes all the way in and doesn't stop midway or the novel gets dropped by author sama. Arigato author for this treat.
the novel is great , one of the better stories I've read till date [ until current chapter ] , please upload more chapters daily!!!!!!!
Read the book upto chapter 138. This book has great potential. The world building is great , the power system and plots are also done really well. The pacing is also okay but would love it if it becomes a bit faster. It's also good that Mc is not foolish or naive and is actually decisive and ruthless against the enemies and don't spare the enemies. Although I feel that the Mc needs some character development regarding his emotions. Looking forward to the Mc learning to trust other ppl more and share his secret with his friends and the girls who love him and also accepting his own feelings for the girls and not supress those feelings and not be strength minded totally. Overall I would like to say this book has been an interesting and enjoyable read. Looking forward to see how the story progresses from here. Keep up the good work author 👍.
i dont like the story development, it change from japanese hero that awaken power to common chinese cultivation. i also dont like the character, and how they do conversation.
The story is good. If you can, get over the shear amount of miss gendering of the mc and the other characters. other than that, the story reads good, and I will be following this story.
couldnt get past the first few chapter , the characters dont speak like real People and the writing structure make it impossible to follow, im sure the author will get better but this is not it
Seriously couldn't the author start the story when the MC was a teenager, currently the MC is killing goblins like playthings and accepting an unknown man's request to become his disciple What stupidity..... The general plot seems similar to the general cultivation novels......
Writining Quality: it’s not the best, and you need to get used to it if you have read better written works before. However it is bearable. Story Development: The author develops the story well, and it doesn not feel slow paced nor too fast paced. (Though i like face paced more.) The author makes great use of many situations in the novel. e.g the character are in a forest and the chap. ends that the mc is in a cave. the next chapter will show how he got into that cave. therefore the Author gives us quality content without using annoying filler to get more chaps. Characters: the characters are pretty standard and nothing too crazy. However, I still like that the mc despite being ruthless and cold isn’t edgy. Therefore you can actually like the mc. The world background: it’s good. nothing more to add. I read this novel in one go and spend all my coins and i am happy with it. definitely recommend it to people who enjoy a lowkey but strong mc. (Warning: There is a risk to drop the novel due to the mc being a little too lowkey. Nonetheless, it’s still good.)
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From reading up to the latest chapter all I can say is the novel is okay, it's a intresting read but also highly predictable and honestly at times feels forced. What I mean about this is that the flow and direction the story is going in feels rigid and rough like it needs polishing. The story is still non the less a great read but at times it still bothers me how every interaction the MC has with a new person feels unnatural in a way.
This story is simply excellent. The writing style is unique and interesting, I appreciate how the author choses to introduce us to the intricacies of the characters and the world system. Something about the character and world building immediately immerses you, and rooting for Tenku suddenly becomes too easy. Definitely read this if you're considering it. It's a worth while addition to my library that I'm looking forward to continue enjoying.
When I read the first chapter, I immediately thought: wow this would be great if there was an image like a manga. there must be someone out there who thinks the same as me. I liked this story, but was a little scared too. I don't want to read at night, because the effect will be the same as a zombie story 😭
What could be more interesting? Nice plots and background.... I love Reaper Stories, they are so much fun. Keep it up author, I can see that this book has a lot of potentials.
The synopsis itself is catchy . I have read some chapters and it is just wow. The author has done wonders. It takes you to another world . Quite different and interesting .
This book deserves a 5-star rating. after reading the synopsis and first 4 chapters, I felt like I was in the novel. I encourage everyone to read this novel.
I'm giving this book a 5-star rating because the author deserves an accolade due to his creative imagination. Reading the synopsis and the first chapter got me completely hooked. The writing quality is top notch. I can't wait to read more about Tenku and his dreams of becoming a Realizer. Kudos to the author 👍👍👍
Tragedy . Mc idiot,naive,noob.Author idiot. ...................................................................................................................
The book itself has an solid background as well as the world building, the actual combat and everything is interesting but throughout the book we see people keep trying to go to the mc to "save him" despite being way weaker than him, the dialogue between woman and the mc is also extremely cringy....... overall if you cant handle cringe drop it
On chapter 50 and have to say this is the most cliché, cringe worthy novel I’ve ever had the displeasure of reading. You know every single trope that you hate in novels? Edge lord M.C., vanilla NTR, hiding strength? This novel has all of those tropes, plus horrific grammar.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]some errors of she/his overall good story
powers and evolution of mc is epic.. the especially love the gentle love tracks .. though its a harem, i love how author is handling each trach.. i hope author clearly explain why cultivation is not well known in the kind of setting he created .. more clearly ..
One of the BEST I've ever read. I will highly appreciate it if the Author will make a chapter for Cultivation(Genesis and Qi) as well as for the rankings of their weapons and cultivation manuals.
Hello, dear author! I've read your novel and it's really great. Please click on my profile picture, where you can find what you need,I can give you more power stones and comments. I found this book to be a captivating and powerful read. The themes of identity and strength shown through the main character's story is truly inspiring. While there are moments of harshness and tension, the story overall has a strong sense of hope and resilience. This book is a great reminder to all of us to stay true to ourselves, and to believe in our own greatness.
Dear Author, I really really loved the story and it's execution till now(ch 176). Even though there were some cringey moments but overall story setup and internal logic was very much stable in comparison to many other nonsense stories. Though i have only one little complaint that although i love to read detailed scenes in this novel but you seem to focus a bit too much on details that it is sad to see many of chs(that too of high word count) come out as fillers 😔😿 I mean like that arc where Setsuka comes to know about Tenku's involvement with 2 girls in Beijing was written in 3 chs while it could have been written in 1 ch at most. Same case here idol's wish to follow Tenku is spread over multiple chs but could have been shortened. So, in short there are too many irrelevant and useless details in novel😔 So i hope you would improve on this factor. Lastly and most importantly I wish you would complete this story and i promise i would accompany you to end of the journey because I simply loved your story a bit too much😅
so I love the idea of this story and I love how the author is telling it. my only complaint is the last few chapters have felt like nothing but filler. like the author updates once a day very consistently I know exactly when a chapter is going to come out and I'm excited for it because I know what this story could be from the earlier chapters. but this last chapter he legit just ate an omelet.
Definitely my kind of story. An OP Harem MC with a secret identity but at the same time being a kind normal average dude in the public eyes. Fun Stuff. I just hope that the harem plot goes all the way in and doesn't stop midway or the novel gets dropped by author sama. Arigato author for this treat.
the novel is great , one of the better stories I've read till date [ until current chapter ] , please upload more chapters daily!!!!!!!
Read the book upto chapter 138. This book has great potential. The world building is great , the power system and plots are also done really well. The pacing is also okay but would love it if it becomes a bit faster. It's also good that Mc is not foolish or naive and is actually decisive and ruthless against the enemies and don't spare the enemies. Although I feel that the Mc needs some character development regarding his emotions. Looking forward to the Mc learning to trust other ppl more and share his secret with his friends and the girls who love him and also accepting his own feelings for the girls and not supress those feelings and not be strength minded totally. Overall I would like to say this book has been an interesting and enjoyable read. Looking forward to see how the story progresses from here. Keep up the good work author 👍.
i dont like the story development, it change from japanese hero that awaken power to common chinese cultivation. i also dont like the character, and how they do conversation.
The story is good. If you can, get over the shear amount of miss gendering of the mc and the other characters. other than that, the story reads good, and I will be following this story.
couldnt get past the first few chapter , the characters dont speak like real People and the writing structure make it impossible to follow, im sure the author will get better but this is not it
Seriously couldn't the author start the story when the MC was a teenager, currently the MC is killing goblins like playthings and accepting an unknown man's request to become his disciple What stupidity..... The general plot seems similar to the general cultivation novels......
Writining Quality: it’s not the best, and you need to get used to it if you have read better written works before. However it is bearable. Story Development: The author develops the story well, and it doesn not feel slow paced nor too fast paced. (Though i like face paced more.) The author makes great use of many situations in the novel. e.g the character are in a forest and the chap. ends that the mc is in a cave. the next chapter will show how he got into that cave. therefore the Author gives us quality content without using annoying filler to get more chaps. Characters: the characters are pretty standard and nothing too crazy. However, I still like that the mc despite being ruthless and cold isn’t edgy. Therefore you can actually like the mc. The world background: it’s good. nothing more to add. I read this novel in one go and spend all my coins and i am happy with it. definitely recommend it to people who enjoy a lowkey but strong mc. (Warning: There is a risk to drop the novel due to the mc being a little too lowkey. Nonetheless, it’s still good.)
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From reading up to the latest chapter all I can say is the novel is okay, it's a intresting read but also highly predictable and honestly at times feels forced. What I mean about this is that the flow and direction the story is going in feels rigid and rough like it needs polishing. The story is still non the less a great read but at times it still bothers me how every interaction the MC has with a new person feels unnatural in a way.
This story is simply excellent. The writing style is unique and interesting, I appreciate how the author choses to introduce us to the intricacies of the characters and the world system. Something about the character and world building immediately immerses you, and rooting for Tenku suddenly becomes too easy. Definitely read this if you're considering it. It's a worth while addition to my library that I'm looking forward to continue enjoying.
When I read the first chapter, I immediately thought: wow this would be great if there was an image like a manga. there must be someone out there who thinks the same as me. I liked this story, but was a little scared too. I don't want to read at night, because the effect will be the same as a zombie story 😭
What could be more interesting? Nice plots and background.... I love Reaper Stories, they are so much fun. Keep it up author, I can see that this book has a lot of potentials.
The synopsis itself is catchy . I have read some chapters and it is just wow. The author has done wonders. It takes you to another world . Quite different and interesting .
This book deserves a 5-star rating. after reading the synopsis and first 4 chapters, I felt like I was in the novel. I encourage everyone to read this novel.
I'm giving this book a 5-star rating because the author deserves an accolade due to his creative imagination. Reading the synopsis and the first chapter got me completely hooked. The writing quality is top notch. I can't wait to read more about Tenku and his dreams of becoming a Realizer. Kudos to the author 👍👍👍
Tragedy . Mc idiot,naive,noob.Author idiot. ...................................................................................................................