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This is just TBATE from a different perspective. While the grammar is good, it’s incredibly boring if you read either the comic or novel. I don’t know if it will change later in the story but I don’t have any hope
very well deserved 5 stars it does stay very similar to canon up until Xyrus attack arc but most tbate stories tend to. However, it does diverge well making it enjoyable while still having the same style as a NY normal tbate story! Keep it up author san
This writing in this book is amazing. With only occasional slip ups in writing a very good background. The author shows how and why the character gets stronger and there are no plot holes. The best thing is the different views and the changes made to the original story that are wholeheartedly welcomed.
Spoiler de révélation everything is amazing don't listen to the toxicity it does stick with canon until the later chapters like ch25 with the elder wood guardian. Faboulous story with a wonderful amount of chapters to keep you occupied.
ok! so to begin, I only read up to 39 chapters and there was little to no changes…. the mc, in my opinion, replaces aurther and makes him a background character, most of the time the interactions with mc and his family feels awkward and confusing, it may just be me….. ANYWAYS!! other change’s so far are minimal, aurther dident kill big tree monster and dosent meet his dwarf friend (I forgotten if his friend is a dwarf) he also dosent get the beast will from the tree to give to tess…. other then that everything is the same, the love intrest for the mc…. well it not the one that I whould pick but whatever, atleast it not harem, grammer is ok and not manny misspelling so that’s a pulse, I‘m sure that later on there will be more changes and the story will improve but for those who still want to read…. don’t expect many changes at the begging. I personally will still read till the latest chapter.
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Realmente incrível eu sou brasileiro e li essa obra de arte e achei maravilhoso nota 10, se compara até com o original ;) :) ;) :) ;) :) ;) :) ;) :)
Defenitly one of the best TBATE fan fics i have read. Some people saying that it is just canon havent read for enough. Starting from chapter 25 many things start to change and to be honest i like the change you bring to the TBATE universe. Hope to see this completed one day! Keep going and dont listen to haters.
great book i hope you don't drop the fic and you have my respect man. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is a masterpiece for a TBATE fanfic you made everything fit in so well that it's hard to spot plot holes .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
I have read the first 20 chapters so far and its writing is written very well! HIGHLY RECOMMENDED for any fans wanting to read a TBATE fanfic <3
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It's just a copy of the original, told from the viewpoint of a new character who doesn't change anything and has no goals or ambitions. Nothing to see here.