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Okay I think doing everything too quickly is in the nature of the author. The story is again, a good idea but poorly developed . This concept of Harem will ruin everything. The J.L is too arrogant and he should have had them out, starting with Diana and I like the impression that she will be in the harem so I already hate. I would have liked it to be with someone like Lena Luthor and be monogamous but good
I dont understand why you nerft the mc so much the title of the book is a like and I was looking forward to wish fulfillment but you nerft all of his powers like why.
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He isnt invincible, he isnt overpowered, he is nerfed and the author lied about the title and tags. Change the title and tags.
give it a try it not bad and I'm giving this review all stars because of a review troll that gave one star for no reason . .
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Okay I think doing everything too quickly is in the nature of the author. The story is again, a good idea but poorly developed . This concept of Harem will ruin everything. The J.L is too arrogant and he should have had them out, starting with Diana and I like the impression that she will be in the harem so I already hate. I would have liked it to be with someone like Lena Luthor and be monogamous but good
I dont understand why you nerft the mc so much the title of the book is a like and I was looking forward to wish fulfillment but you nerft all of his powers like why.
Spoiler de révélation lies ..........................................................................................................................................................................
He isnt invincible, he isnt overpowered, he is nerfed and the author lied about the title and tags. Change the title and tags.
give it a try it not bad and I'm giving this review all stars because of a review troll that gave one star for no reason . .
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