21526374806782905書評合集 - 起點國際 (Webnovel)

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TLW

Fellow author here to let you know that you can delete a story once all chapters are also deleted. The option should be in the info tab at the bottom. Just wanted to be helpful!

LV 2

HardenedWood

This was a great story, and I’ll miss it dearly, I totally understand dropping it, but deleting it always hurts, I’m one of those people who could reread a story they like years after, even if it’s not got an ending. So I’ll always be sad to see a story go.

LV 14

Nyx_Lucifer_Anime

I'm really sad you abandon this this is such an awesome book I just came the check to see if you uploaded any chapters recently then boom I found out that you abandon it which is really sad and disappointed it brought back memories of other great books that you've made that has been dropped but either way I hope you have a good day

LV 4

g77471164

Frankly saying, the MCs thoughts are way too nonsensical. His interactions with others are super bland. And the way author san surprises us with minor plot developments at random places, uh. Could've been way better. The only reason I'm still reading on is the interesting plot progression. It might happen in the future that once the MC becomes OP, it will become boring.

LV 14

DetachedDreamer

Good story but the perspective of the author has been corrupted by the fanfic culture and its prejudice towards certain characters. I find it boring, cliche, and playout at this point so it definitely impacts the quality of this story overall.

LV 3

Ghalib_Ali_5133

Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 14

TBJ5K

Good quality writing, mc is kinda dumb ngl. Just writing this to say don't expect the mc to be smart as things like easily knocking killgrave out and then not taking his powers, or helping his victims is normal. Just didn't expect him to take his plans seriously.

LV 4

Prince_Arsalan

please don't mix mcu and dc ..... the story will lose its charm ..... i'll certainly drop this story if it becomes mix jumbo bambo

LV 4

Talib_Muhib

would have been a nice read buh he joined the X-Men .....🥲bye bye 🤝

LV 4

Prince_Arsalan

Love your work bro....not too much fast just the right amount ....not too much violence just the right amount ....not too much xxx just the right amount with slow paced but not too much romance..... its good

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Xavierzelaya2

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Xavierzelaya2

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LV 13

Hymaster986

Honestly I like the story after reading the chapters. Please don't drop it and continue the story. Show MC's power to its unimaginable level.

LV 14

Maverick_sfx

Well all is good and all but sometimes MC's hero complex feels like... I don't know

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Daniel_Marchan_3773

Me encanto ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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joao_gabriel_6283

Um dos seus melhores trabalhos até agora Um dos seus melhores trabalhos até agoraUm dos seus melhores trabalhos até agoraUm dos seus melhores trabalhos até agora

LV 1

JsemirY

So far so good, goes a little too fast, need character development and more dialogue maybe, we didnt see the MC interact much with other character yet he become close with them anyway like with Laura Keep pushing forward

LV 14

Evandar

This fan-fic looks very very interesting I hope that you dont drop it

LV 10

Wanderley_Sobral

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LV 15

Volrith

While the story seems interesting, it’s a bit dissabointing how many spelling errors (mostly from letters missing, wrong letters and letters turned around) there are. These would be easy to catch just by reading before uploading. Or by a proofreader. Looking forward to seeing how the story develops though.

LV 4

NO_YURI_000

yuri ???........................................................................................................................................

LV 1

Daoist9083tM

This is fucking good, I recommend it to anyone to read it, the only bad thing is that it currently only has 14 chapters ...........................................................................................................................................................................

LV 2

Luchii_Carrizo

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LV 14

Wolfiey

this is such a great story i really wish you would pick it up again

LV 7

West

Write a review Reading Status: Cundefined Writing Quality Stability of Updates Story Development Character Design World Background The total score 5.0

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Nogitsune96

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