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well great plot and character building tho slightly behind when it comes to character development, translation is good enough and no grammar error detected so far. anyway 🍇 piece👍
nice storie 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
i'm dropping this the moment you get involved with danzo, as mucj as the mc's character is a bit over the top he should have instincts not to make a deal with danzo considering he was a loyal soldier AND survived isshiki
I'm disappointed, the idea of the starting story in this ff is so - so. Imagine he gets the power at the price of removing memories, but personality and mindset remain still?? Also his mindset like loyal fanatic. So what's kind of logic is that? Even Amnesia will forget his personality or mindset, now removing memories but doesn't clear personalities? I won't surprise later on the chapter if Mc will turn to a loyal tool of the village or become a fanatic shinobi. Like his previous fanfic, I thought author will improve his another story but kinda disappointing
before you start reading this a big disclaimer is that the mc loses all his memories so it's more of a naruto world oc rather than someone reincarnated into the world of naruto the reincarnation was just a way to explain why the mc has the powers it has. Also the mc is a fanatic servant in case you would like or dislike that. Also he was given isshki's powers in case your anti Gary stu I dislike this novel because I dislike reincarnated mcs losing their memories like what's the point fo reincarnation if the mc is no longer who they were
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The start is questionble, cant say its the best, like the mc's species. His main goal is finding his mother and is cold. Being taught by the first, having jigen abilties and shown to be a genis.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
El comienzo es cuestionable, no puedo decir que sea el mejor, como la especie de mc. Su objetivo principal es encontrar a su madre y tiene frío. Ser enseñado por el primero, tener habilidades de jigen y demostrar ser un genis.
well great plot and character building tho slightly behind when it comes to character development, translation is good enough and no grammar error detected so far. anyway 🍇 piece👍
nice storie 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
i'm dropping this the moment you get involved with danzo, as mucj as the mc's character is a bit over the top he should have instincts not to make a deal with danzo considering he was a loyal soldier AND survived isshiki
I'm disappointed, the idea of the starting story in this ff is so - so. Imagine he gets the power at the price of removing memories, but personality and mindset remain still?? Also his mindset like loyal fanatic. So what's kind of logic is that? Even Amnesia will forget his personality or mindset, now removing memories but doesn't clear personalities? I won't surprise later on the chapter if Mc will turn to a loyal tool of the village or become a fanatic shinobi. Like his previous fanfic, I thought author will improve his another story but kinda disappointing
before you start reading this a big disclaimer is that the mc loses all his memories so it's more of a naruto world oc rather than someone reincarnated into the world of naruto the reincarnation was just a way to explain why the mc has the powers it has. Also the mc is a fanatic servant in case you would like or dislike that. Also he was given isshki's powers in case your anti Gary stu I dislike this novel because I dislike reincarnated mcs losing their memories like what's the point fo reincarnation if the mc is no longer who they were
Spoiler de révélation The start is questionble, cant say its the best, like the mc's species. His main goal is finding his mother and is cold. Being taught by the first, having jigen abilties and shown to be a genis.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
El comienzo es cuestionable, no puedo decir que sea el mejor, como la especie de mc. Su objetivo principal es encontrar a su madre y tiene frío. Ser enseñado por el primero, tener habilidades de jigen y demostrar ser un genis.