Reborn in Naruto-World

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Leo_Bassist

I'm disappointed, the idea of the starting story in this ff is so - so. Imagine he gets the power at the price of removing memories, but personality and mindset remain still?? Also his mindset like loyal fanatic. So what's kind of logic is that? Even Amnesia will forget his personality or mindset, now removing memories but doesn't clear personalities? I won't surprise later on the chapter if Mc will turn to a loyal tool of the village or become a fanatic shinobi. Like his previous fanfic, I thought author will improve his another story but kinda disappointing

LV 2

MarkinBitchs

The start is questionble, cant say its the best, like the mc's species. His main goal is finding his mother and is cold. Being taught by the first, having jigen abilties and shown to be a genis.

LV 4

Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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Nicola_mreno

El comienzo es cuestionable, no puedo decir que sea el mejor, como la especie de mc. Su objetivo principal es encontrar a su madre y tiene frío. Ser enseñado por el primero, tener habilidades de jigen y demostrar ser un genis.

LV 4

Wvttz

youre first was better tbh

LV 4

Bwoi_Guru69

well great plot and character building tho slightly behind when it comes to character development, translation is good enough and no grammar error detected so far. anyway 🍇 piece👍

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badangel_luciel

nice storie 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

LV 4

roblester00

i'm dropping this the moment you get involved with danzo, as mucj as the mc's character is a bit over the top he should have instincts not to make a deal with danzo considering he was a loyal soldier AND survived isshiki