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just a dumb job. the author does not observe the time frame. it is not clear for what reason he introduced the original characters. it is not clear why he added a hitman without knowledge of the future. it's just another implementation of the original Naruto (only it's a cheap Chinese parody, as always).
This is my favorite fanfiction and I thought it would be a shame for it to be dropped like this, so I continued translating from where Yuahiu left off.
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one of the best naruto fanfics I have ever read. He's off to an excellent start and developing well, a slightly warlock of the magus MC and two very well written OC females. In short, good fanfic 5/5 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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La historia de lo mas prefecta de lo que he encontrado hasta el momento pese a ser una creacion de otra persona te felicito por traerla a esta plataforma y traducirla para todos nosotros y el merito mas grande te mereces por hacerlo. Felicidades y que continues trabajando...
Gran traducción , la novela tiene buena trama y es muy diferentes a otras[img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I hope you can continue translating, I hate having to read it through mtl.........................................................................
Cool novel continue please ☺️👌⚔️ 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😎😎😎😎😎😎🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜
A beautiful novel and the idea is new and unusual that the MC has not seen Naruto before. The novel is unusual at the beginning, but it is really wonderful and stable so far, and I hope it continues with the same quality until the end.
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this is a rare find, unexpectedly good. unlike generic naruto fanfic wave mission->exam->etc. This one actually add something new to the story
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Author needs to re write some of the sentences my brain kind off malfunctioned because of it, its a cool story by the way Author needs to re write some of the sentences my brain kind off malfunctioned because of it, its a cool story by the way
just a dumb job. the author does not observe the time frame. it is not clear for what reason he introduced the original characters. it is not clear why he added a hitman without knowledge of the future. it's just another implementation of the original Naruto (only it's a cheap Chinese parody, as always).
This is my favorite fanfiction and I thought it would be a shame for it to be dropped like this, so I continued translating from where Yuahiu left off.
Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop Don't drop
🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🇧🇷 ....................... 🖤🖤🖤 ................ ...... .. ........ 🖤🖤🖤 ............................. 🖤🖤 🖤 .🇧🇷 .... .. ................. 🖤🖤🖤 ....... 🇧🇷🇧🇷🇧🇷.
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one of the best naruto fanfics I have ever read. He's off to an excellent start and developing well, a slightly warlock of the magus MC and two very well written OC females. In short, good fanfic 5/5 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
..."...".........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................'..'....................................................................................................................................................................
La historia de lo mas prefecta de lo que he encontrado hasta el momento pese a ser una creacion de otra persona te felicito por traerla a esta plataforma y traducirla para todos nosotros y el merito mas grande te mereces por hacerlo. Felicidades y que continues trabajando...
Gran traducción , la novela tiene buena trama y es muy diferentes a otras[img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I hope you can continue translating, I hate having to read it through mtl.........................................................................
Cool novel continue please ☺️👌⚔️ 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😎😎😎😎😎😎🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜
A beautiful novel and the idea is new and unusual that the MC has not seen Naruto before. The novel is unusual at the beginning, but it is really wonderful and stable so far, and I hope it continues with the same quality until the end.
Great Mooooooor 💸💸💸💸💸💸💸💸💸💸💸💸💸💸📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝📝..........................................................
this is a rare find, unexpectedly good. unlike generic naruto fanfic wave mission->exam->etc. This one actually add something new to the story
good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel good novel [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Author needs to re write some of the sentences my brain kind off malfunctioned because of it, its a cool story by the way Author needs to re write some of the sentences my brain kind off malfunctioned because of it, its a cool story by the way