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3 wishes in twilight
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hey bro dig ur story one thing though I kinda feel like you rushed it a bit three first page op power Second page got a girl and a scandal third page got a daughter just saying it took four books to make renessme while it took you three pages other than that it's good
the mc has too many problems and the whole issue of the charm could have been handled a different way but overall good just wish you uploaded more.
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I don’t Really Have a problem with the story I just don’t Like that he has the ability To create Any skill I understand Though But great Story So far keep it up
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honestly, the MC is the worst. he says he hates women but wished to be handsome. he says he hates bella and the plot but he literally moved to the main plot on his own a day before Bella did. he plays the piano in school knowing it'll attract women that he supposedly hates. he contradicts himself, he whines, complains. mean to nice people. its all bad. not one good detail about the MC. its terrible to say but it only takes 5 chapters to come to this conclusion.