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very good story a little more detail and slight slower pace it wo I ld been 5/5 but in all honesty this is a pretty good story hope to see more chaps have a wonderful day.
very good story a little more detail and slight slower pace it wo I ld been 5/5 but in all honesty this is a pretty good story hope to see more chaps have a wonderful day.