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I really liked the story in general, the problem is its very fast development... I could go slower and enjoy the events better. But there really aren't any big problems, I thought the writing of the chapters was good, and I especially loved the MC's personality.
DEKU!!! I HOPE YOU KEEP YOUR WALLET SAFE FROM THIS PIRATE!!!🏴☠️👁👃🏾👁 👄 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
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Yes I will give 5 stars so this is my advice he lacks interaction with other people, there is no detailed explanation of what happened, and it's too fast but overall for the character it's good
the_great_old_one: the beginning is a bit fast but I'd love to make character overall and her attitude. I can't wait for more ...................................the_great_old_one: the beginning is a bit fast but I'd love to make character overall and her attitude. I can't wait for more ...................................
I like the oc I love yamato but her wanting to be Oden makes me cover my self under my pillow or calling her self Oden and I not joking 🙃🙄🙂😐😒😑🙃🙄🙂😐😒😑🙃🙄🙂😐😒😑🙃🙄🙂😐😒😑🙃🙄🙂😐😒😑🙃🙄🙂😐
the beginning is a bit fast but I'd love to make character overall and her attitude. I can't wait for more ...................................
Giving myself a 5 star review since I enjoy shamelessly boosting my own ego ಠ_ಠ
JUST GIVE IT A TRY. YOU WONT REGRET IT!. While some grammars are off you can literally easily understand it and the MC's character. like the plot and how its carried by the author so im gonna stick to it of a while.
I really liked the story in general, the problem is its very fast development... I could go slower and enjoy the events better. But there really aren't any big problems, I thought the writing of the chapters was good, and I especially loved the MC's personality.
DEKU!!! I HOPE YOU KEEP YOUR WALLET SAFE FROM THIS PIRATE!!!🏴☠️👁👃🏾👁 👄 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
Spoiler de révélation Yes I will give 5 stars so this is my advice he lacks interaction with other people, there is no detailed explanation of what happened, and it's too fast but overall for the character it's good
the_great_old_one: the beginning is a bit fast but I'd love to make character overall and her attitude. I can't wait for more ...................................the_great_old_one: the beginning is a bit fast but I'd love to make character overall and her attitude. I can't wait for more ...................................
I like the oc I love yamato but her wanting to be Oden makes me cover my self under my pillow or calling her self Oden and I not joking 🙃🙄🙂😐😒😑🙃🙄🙂😐😒😑🙃🙄🙂😐😒😑🙃🙄🙂😐😒😑🙃🙄🙂😐😒😑🙃🙄🙂😐
the beginning is a bit fast but I'd love to make character overall and her attitude. I can't wait for more ...................................
Giving myself a 5 star review since I enjoy shamelessly boosting my own ego ಠ_ಠ
JUST GIVE IT A TRY. YOU WONT REGRET IT!. While some grammars are off you can literally easily understand it and the MC's character. like the plot and how its carried by the author so im gonna stick to it of a while.