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quite a good book mc aint so dumb, story flow is great and action scenes might need some toughing up. good kingdom building book, binge more
Objectively speaking, it's not a good novel. There are way too many descriptive parts, especially at the beginning and some dialogues with natives are a bit naive. Still, I totally love the setting and I believe that it will become better with time! Please, keep up the good work, author!
Fans of Doctor stone will also love this book. Careful research, interesting plot points, and an overall fresh plot are the great strengths of this book
A great book. I recommend it for people who enjoy kingdom-building and survival. The Mc is a strong-willed and rational person who makes the right decision and times. Although the story is a bit slow, hype is satisfying. Good job.
I don't want to be a spoiler, overall, it is a good book, for people like me, who like to read, survival and building kingdom like genre, this book is a fit to read, also author writes story in details but when it reaches to climax, you will get really hype. You have to be patient to read, if you are then, you will like this book. The story line is amazing and author want to take reader to his world slowly so he writes his earlier chapters to support the story line. I really like to read it. If you like added this to library.
This book got me hooked, from a good plot to accuracy of words and interesting characters which are amazing. Good job to the author.........
This is a good read, it's exciting in every chapter. Definitely, an interesting story to check out especially when you're into evolution tropes.
The whole story was new fresh of story to read as some, the story paced is slow and easy to read, the mc is reaaly drawn out more. [img=recommend]
The book idea is brilliant. it captured me at the first chapter The MC is a strong willed person and the way you detail how he remembers each survival skill is lit. you should check most of the grammar written though
This book is lit ❤️ I love it Love it Love it Again I love it . The story development , design is the best. Once again I love it Love it
the complexity of the m c character in this novel is written very well, what to expect feom someone who went back in time, he is genius, strong, powerful, yeah if i am stuck with him in the Apocalypse i am sure he will save me . the plot is interesting and the pace is great. the world building is very strong and the author is very nice wich make his work more appealing. the work is enjoyable and I wish the author more luck,can't wait for the next chaps
I will support my book with everything, duh.................................................................................................
it's strong start with good story line with a simple main character background
quite a good book mc aint so dumb, story flow is great and action scenes might need some toughing up. good kingdom building book, binge more
Objectively speaking, it's not a good novel. There are way too many descriptive parts, especially at the beginning and some dialogues with natives are a bit naive. Still, I totally love the setting and I believe that it will become better with time! Please, keep up the good work, author!
Fans of Doctor stone will also love this book. Careful research, interesting plot points, and an overall fresh plot are the great strengths of this book
A great book. I recommend it for people who enjoy kingdom-building and survival. The Mc is a strong-willed and rational person who makes the right decision and times. Although the story is a bit slow, hype is satisfying. Good job.
I don't want to be a spoiler, overall, it is a good book, for people like me, who like to read, survival and building kingdom like genre, this book is a fit to read, also author writes story in details but when it reaches to climax, you will get really hype. You have to be patient to read, if you are then, you will like this book. The story line is amazing and author want to take reader to his world slowly so he writes his earlier chapters to support the story line. I really like to read it. If you like added this to library.
This book got me hooked, from a good plot to accuracy of words and interesting characters which are amazing. Good job to the author.........
This is a good read, it's exciting in every chapter. Definitely, an interesting story to check out especially when you're into evolution tropes.
The whole story was new fresh of story to read as some, the story paced is slow and easy to read, the mc is reaaly drawn out more. [img=recommend]
The book idea is brilliant. it captured me at the first chapter The MC is a strong willed person and the way you detail how he remembers each survival skill is lit. you should check most of the grammar written though
This book is lit ❤️ I love it Love it Love it Again I love it . The story development , design is the best. Once again I love it Love it
the complexity of the m c character in this novel is written very well, what to expect feom someone who went back in time, he is genius, strong, powerful, yeah if i am stuck with him in the Apocalypse i am sure he will save me . the plot is interesting and the pace is great. the world building is very strong and the author is very nice wich make his work more appealing. the work is enjoyable and I wish the author more luck,can't wait for the next chaps
I will support my book with everything, duh.................................................................................................
it's strong start with good story line with a simple main character background