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It's been too long since I got an update but I love the way the story is going
Fanfic de Pokémon que eu mais gostei, recomendo que leiam ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
it's a great story. but I can't even load chapter 35 chapter 36 will load but chapter 35 will just sit there constantly trying to load but will never load or fail to load at the same time. I love the story though I've read to chapter 170 before the author had taken a break from updating for a bit before and I decided to start the novel over so that I remembered everything that was going on in this story but like I said chapter 35 ain't loading for me. I don't know if anyone else is having this problem or not but it's kind of annoying me I even thought it was my phone or the webnovel app at first but my app is up to date and I restarted my phone so idk what's going on but I would love to be able to actually read chapter 35
This was my first pokemon fanfic, I enjoyed it (not a pokemon fan), better than pokemon (probably, never really watched it) Ch219 - sadly mc is already over powered, the ending will be boring and unsatisfying fs. At least for me, the story already ended at ch~100 when his pokemon evolved. Mc became too powerful and he basically didn't have a worth while challenge. Either way it was a good fanfic.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I love it, i simply love it. Please continue Author, you are doing a great job
Quite surprising there being two quite well known trainers even one of them being close to beating the Elite Four but ultimately losing while other has been quite famous while being from Unova wonder what each will bring to the pokemon battle and which would face Rex
I Iike the pokemon design and the plot it's very interesting plz upload more chapters
Definitely intrigued and even more interested in this book especially after that battle and all of those combination moves truly astounding to say the least caught my attention instantly look forward to reading more of this book and reading about what will happen next cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing the appearance and mention of The Rashtal Tribe that are from Sinnoh Region and more so one of its members showing up there with quite a powerful Infernape truly surprising with it having a staff to use and such look forward to getting the chance to read more of this book definitely more into this book after this chapter
Your story really great, i love read this theme, and your quite creative on the plot too
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I have definitely enjoyed reading this chapter not to mention was quite surprised on how Rex became the villain in this story if u will in his battle against Harry not to mention the cliche way how the audience radiated to support Harry given that he is the underdog in this match and how everyone usually supports them so they make a comeback and win it more so was surprised and found funny how Rex started to laugh and way he taunted Harry look forward to reading more of this book and cant wait to read more of what will happen in this match with Harry's final pokemon look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
This story is a straight 5 of 5 for me! The story development is amazing, the little romance with the Unova electric gym leader, Elesa, is adorable, the bonds he makes is heart warming, the author especially knows how to get us readers excited, and the mc is not the overwhelming ruthless type, at least, as long as it doesn’t threaten the people he cares about, Everything always has a reason, and it’s one of the best fics I’ve ever read! Keep up the good work, author!
I'm definitely quite intrigued and interested in how Rex will deal and handle the other trainers especially that trainer that had claimed to be him that he would one shot move to all of their pokemon and then also what Lance had mentioned to Elesa look forward to reading more of this book and finding out how the battle will go as well who was that pokemon that was watching Lance
Not very impressed to be honest. It's not a bad story, but it doesn't tick the marks of my prefered style at all. I also disagree with a lot of the things inside the novel so it make it dificult to read for me. I recomend if you are curious to read it yourself because its a really unique fic.
Definitely enjoyed not to mention cant even fathom the power and destruction that Gyrados can cause especially when he unlocks his full legacy instead of just half of it I cant even imagine how strong he will be and everything not to mention the 5 promos from the League to bring attention to the people that are most believed to be the strongest and have best chance to win the Pokemon League but more so the description of Rex the Dark Horse and how it showed of Machamp and how the audience can feel his aura and power not just that but the message that Rex said even if his face was blurred not just that but his outfit and the hand like telling them to come over look forward to reading more of this book the and finding out what will happen and what new surprises will emerge can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Most definitely enjoyed reading this latest chapters especially this last one with how the league truly had believed that they had one up Rex and that they had outsmarted them even with them agreeing to those big amounts of percentage all except for Penelope who realized just what it was she felt was wrong she realized that they got played and he had tricked them like a circus wonder what will happen next especially when goes to face MewTwo cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Definitely quite interesting how Monica and her Emboar gave it there all even if they lost and Arcaine helped saved Emboar from being destroyed by Moltres not just that but how she chose to wait till she got stronger to challenge Moltres again and win in order to get him instead of getting him when she lost the battle wonder the kind of training that Rex will put the two sisters through in order for them to get past their flaws that go with eachother strengths and weaknesses not just that but believe it's a good idea of the uniform and the ranks along with rewards etc. Look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book cant wait
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Definitely enjoyed reading this latest chapter quite interesting and intriguing especially now that Rex and his pokemon Arcaine got what they wanted in motivating Monica and her Emboar not to mention bet they didnt expect for Moltres power to be subdued and still has been able to beat him wonder what will happen now that he is mad and remembers how his trainer was sad and crying not to mention look forward to reading more especially when it comes time for the Pokemon League in Kanto to begin look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Thank you for such a great fanfic of Pokémon. ...I wish you all the best to keep it or make it more entertaining and to release more chapters [img=update]. very greatful for no harem.
recommended, The Writing is good and The plot as well. And the Fact The Author added Mechagodzilla As a Form The Mc's Steelix Can Transform into?. best Pokemon Fanfic In My Book.
Before i review this piece of ART, i would like to say i have only recently started to read fan-fics but i have to say this is one of the best Pokemon fan-fic out there! Decently paced, MC is the MC. (you know what i mean? Who tf is ash ?) Well written characters and well thought plot with author's own twist. Really loved it and have read completely from ch1-ch 168(latest) non-stop. Will keep waiting for new chapters!
it's good ........................................................................................................................................................
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It's been too long since I got an update but I love the way the story is going
Fanfic de Pokémon que eu mais gostei, recomendo que leiam ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
it's a great story. but I can't even load chapter 35 chapter 36 will load but chapter 35 will just sit there constantly trying to load but will never load or fail to load at the same time. I love the story though I've read to chapter 170 before the author had taken a break from updating for a bit before and I decided to start the novel over so that I remembered everything that was going on in this story but like I said chapter 35 ain't loading for me. I don't know if anyone else is having this problem or not but it's kind of annoying me I even thought it was my phone or the webnovel app at first but my app is up to date and I restarted my phone so idk what's going on but I would love to be able to actually read chapter 35
This was my first pokemon fanfic, I enjoyed it (not a pokemon fan), better than pokemon (probably, never really watched it) Ch219 - sadly mc is already over powered, the ending will be boring and unsatisfying fs. At least for me, the story already ended at ch~100 when his pokemon evolved. Mc became too powerful and he basically didn't have a worth while challenge. Either way it was a good fanfic.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I love it, i simply love it. Please continue Author, you are doing a great job
Quite surprising there being two quite well known trainers even one of them being close to beating the Elite Four but ultimately losing while other has been quite famous while being from Unova wonder what each will bring to the pokemon battle and which would face Rex
I Iike the pokemon design and the plot it's very interesting plz upload more chapters
Definitely intrigued and even more interested in this book especially after that battle and all of those combination moves truly astounding to say the least caught my attention instantly look forward to reading more of this book and reading about what will happen next cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing the appearance and mention of The Rashtal Tribe that are from Sinnoh Region and more so one of its members showing up there with quite a powerful Infernape truly surprising with it having a staff to use and such look forward to getting the chance to read more of this book definitely more into this book after this chapter
Your story really great, i love read this theme, and your quite creative on the plot too
the best pokemon story ever[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I have definitely enjoyed reading this chapter not to mention was quite surprised on how Rex became the villain in this story if u will in his battle against Harry not to mention the cliche way how the audience radiated to support Harry given that he is the underdog in this match and how everyone usually supports them so they make a comeback and win it more so was surprised and found funny how Rex started to laugh and way he taunted Harry look forward to reading more of this book and cant wait to read more of what will happen in this match with Harry's final pokemon look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
This story is a straight 5 of 5 for me! The story development is amazing, the little romance with the Unova electric gym leader, Elesa, is adorable, the bonds he makes is heart warming, the author especially knows how to get us readers excited, and the mc is not the overwhelming ruthless type, at least, as long as it doesn’t threaten the people he cares about, Everything always has a reason, and it’s one of the best fics I’ve ever read! Keep up the good work, author!
I'm definitely quite intrigued and interested in how Rex will deal and handle the other trainers especially that trainer that had claimed to be him that he would one shot move to all of their pokemon and then also what Lance had mentioned to Elesa look forward to reading more of this book and finding out how the battle will go as well who was that pokemon that was watching Lance
Not very impressed to be honest. It's not a bad story, but it doesn't tick the marks of my prefered style at all. I also disagree with a lot of the things inside the novel so it make it dificult to read for me. I recomend if you are curious to read it yourself because its a really unique fic.
Definitely enjoyed not to mention cant even fathom the power and destruction that Gyrados can cause especially when he unlocks his full legacy instead of just half of it I cant even imagine how strong he will be and everything not to mention the 5 promos from the League to bring attention to the people that are most believed to be the strongest and have best chance to win the Pokemon League but more so the description of Rex the Dark Horse and how it showed of Machamp and how the audience can feel his aura and power not just that but the message that Rex said even if his face was blurred not just that but his outfit and the hand like telling them to come over look forward to reading more of this book the and finding out what will happen and what new surprises will emerge can't wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
Most definitely enjoyed reading this latest chapters especially this last one with how the league truly had believed that they had one up Rex and that they had outsmarted them even with them agreeing to those big amounts of percentage all except for Penelope who realized just what it was she felt was wrong she realized that they got played and he had tricked them like a circus wonder what will happen next especially when goes to face MewTwo cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Definitely quite interesting how Monica and her Emboar gave it there all even if they lost and Arcaine helped saved Emboar from being destroyed by Moltres not just that but how she chose to wait till she got stronger to challenge Moltres again and win in order to get him instead of getting him when she lost the battle wonder the kind of training that Rex will put the two sisters through in order for them to get past their flaws that go with eachother strengths and weaknesses not just that but believe it's a good idea of the uniform and the ranks along with rewards etc. Look forward for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book cant wait
😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😘👍👍😘👍👍👍😘😘😘😘👍👍😘😙😙😙😙😘👍👍😙😍😍🥰🥰😍😙😘👍👍😘😙😍🥰😚😄😄😚🥰😙😙😘👍👍
Definitely enjoyed reading this latest chapter quite interesting and intriguing especially now that Rex and his pokemon Arcaine got what they wanted in motivating Monica and her Emboar not to mention bet they didnt expect for Moltres power to be subdued and still has been able to beat him wonder what will happen now that he is mad and remembers how his trainer was sad and crying not to mention look forward to reading more especially when it comes time for the Pokemon League in Kanto to begin look forward to reading more of this book cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on
Thank you for such a great fanfic of Pokémon. ...I wish you all the best to keep it or make it more entertaining and to release more chapters [img=update]. very greatful for no harem.
recommended, The Writing is good and The plot as well. And the Fact The Author added Mechagodzilla As a Form The Mc's Steelix Can Transform into?. best Pokemon Fanfic In My Book.
Before i review this piece of ART, i would like to say i have only recently started to read fan-fics but i have to say this is one of the best Pokemon fan-fic out there! Decently paced, MC is the MC. (you know what i mean? Who tf is ash ?) Well written characters and well thought plot with author's own twist. Really loved it and have read completely from ch1-ch 168(latest) non-stop. Will keep waiting for new chapters!
it's good ........................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation
shameless review. I even use my own power stones on my novel, Can you beat my level of shamelessness? Love you guys, love the pokemon community, I hope you enjoy my chapters. Guaranteed 1 chapter a day minimum