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this novel is very good but not consistent. also please try to show other views more besides the MC so to get a better view and idea of the story
This book was extremely refreshing to read since most of the books on this app is just garbage, I can honestly say I’ve been extremely impressed with you auhor.
I liked the plot I hope the story continues,it has an original plot and does not fall into the cliché I would also like it to have a love interest but we just have to wait
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This have a lot of grammar issues, but author tries to fix some of it some it alright. Other than that, I would say this is worth your time.
I like it, and that about it................................................................................................................
I’d give it a shot if the grammar was any better. We can all bear with some errors and faulty translations, and let’s not talk about Chinese tropes, but this is another level. The grammar is completely out of whack and entire paragraphs repeat themselves, points of view get jumbled and entire paragraph POVS only make the story messier. Final thoughts: nice idea, a god that’s not the Big Three and has an unusual power, executed very badly. The MC goes to sleep three chapters in and misses 1 thousand years of story and plot development.
Great story. Chapters are short but not short to the point where it’s annoying. Plot was slower after titanomachia. Mid-paced story. Would recommend if looking for a chill read.
I think this story is good. Give it a try. The grammar is not that good at the start, BUT there is obvious improvement in the newer chapters. I am enjoying Keep up the good work Author!
Writing Quality: I'm sorry, but for someone like me reading this is a bit painful. I would suggest at least having an editor or beta reader to go through with it just to make corrections in grammar and sentences because some sentences don't make sense. Story Development: It's developing quite nicely, I would say. It takes a different view on the mythology. There's just not much for me to comment on right now. Characters Design: A new type of character, an OC...Horray!! The thought put on the main character was fine, I can't say fleshed out yet because I haven't seen much challenges the main character faced. But the other characters in the story overall have personalities, but they're still a bit flat to me. Updating Stability: No comment, as long as this story gets finished I don't care either how long you update or how much you update. World Background: It's a fanfiction, the world already exists. You're not creating a new world, but maybe expanding on it or building on it. But as of now, the expansion/building I have yet to see much.
Please. Please for the love of God, use commas and dots. The story is great hut it's hard to understand if you mash it all up in one paragraph and not put commas, spaces, and dots.
Writing Quality: Not the best, although the author said he had some mistake, almost all of them needs editing. The stability of updates is decent. Plot is decent and is creative. Character design: The MC feels a bit like a pet, and some things are not even properly explained. World Background: Good, but need explaining to those who haven't read PJ.
It is great. dfsfdssssssssffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffddddddddddddddddssssssssssssssssfffffffffffffffffsssssssssssssddfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
it's good, keep it up ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Don't usually review, but this is hands down, one of the worst written novels I have ever read. The grammar is simply atrocious and this is apparently the reworked version lol
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I can see lots of potential in this cannot wait for the next chapter grammar is not the best but good enough. - (P.S This is just for word count)
Well basically this fic is a different breed from your typical Greek myth stories. The MC is the youngest among the first Olympian's. He is the 7th child of Kronos after Zeus. He has the divinity of nature. Before all that just wanted to clarify that MC is not OP, so if you guys like OP MC's this fic is not for you. But he does have a cheat, that no fic that I've ever read has used before, and that is the power of love. No literally, the MC is loved by his siblings, they adore him, even Zeus and Hades, so much that they don't fight and try to remain peaceful for the sake of their little brother. Currently on chapter 31, MC has no love interest so far whatsoever. Also the grammar, punctuation and vocabulary are okay, although there are some minor mistakes but overall it's readable enough to get the gist of the whole story. The author has done a great job he used something different (which I respect) than other authors out there. So thank you author and hope you don't drop, as there are people out there that appreciate a change. Thanks and happy writing 😊😊
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I mean it has a lot to be desired for example, I sometimes see grammar and punctuation mistakes but overall all. I think it's one of the better percy Jackson fanfics I've read so far, So please continue writing author-sama😁
and her ei thought writing a percy jackson fanfic was an easy demigod oc story... no... litterally every single fic on here is about a god mc... Well what did i expect, i lost hope on webnovel the moment i found out the top 20 fics were harems.... 5 stars cause creation is hard
Sorry for the previous punctuation and grammar errors as of now I'm using a site to correct those mistakes and have started rewriting all chapters except author notes after correcting their errors sorry for the inconveniences.
Updated my review after reading through it more. It’s interesting at first just gets boring after a while
this novel is very good but not consistent. also please try to show other views more besides the MC so to get a better view and idea of the story
This book was extremely refreshing to read since most of the books on this app is just garbage, I can honestly say I’ve been extremely impressed with you auhor.
I liked the plot I hope the story continues,it has an original plot and does not fall into the cliché I would also like it to have a love interest but we just have to wait
love the you want with the story 555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555
This have a lot of grammar issues, but author tries to fix some of it some it alright. Other than that, I would say this is worth your time.
I like it, and that about it................................................................................................................
I’d give it a shot if the grammar was any better. We can all bear with some errors and faulty translations, and let’s not talk about Chinese tropes, but this is another level. The grammar is completely out of whack and entire paragraphs repeat themselves, points of view get jumbled and entire paragraph POVS only make the story messier. Final thoughts: nice idea, a god that’s not the Big Three and has an unusual power, executed very badly. The MC goes to sleep three chapters in and misses 1 thousand years of story and plot development.
Great story. Chapters are short but not short to the point where it’s annoying. Plot was slower after titanomachia. Mid-paced story. Would recommend if looking for a chill read.
I think this story is good. Give it a try. The grammar is not that good at the start, BUT there is obvious improvement in the newer chapters. I am enjoying Keep up the good work Author!
Writing Quality: I'm sorry, but for someone like me reading this is a bit painful. I would suggest at least having an editor or beta reader to go through with it just to make corrections in grammar and sentences because some sentences don't make sense. Story Development: It's developing quite nicely, I would say. It takes a different view on the mythology. There's just not much for me to comment on right now. Characters Design: A new type of character, an OC...Horray!! The thought put on the main character was fine, I can't say fleshed out yet because I haven't seen much challenges the main character faced. But the other characters in the story overall have personalities, but they're still a bit flat to me. Updating Stability: No comment, as long as this story gets finished I don't care either how long you update or how much you update. World Background: It's a fanfiction, the world already exists. You're not creating a new world, but maybe expanding on it or building on it. But as of now, the expansion/building I have yet to see much.
Please. Please for the love of God, use commas and dots. The story is great hut it's hard to understand if you mash it all up in one paragraph and not put commas, spaces, and dots.
Writing Quality: Not the best, although the author said he had some mistake, almost all of them needs editing. The stability of updates is decent. Plot is decent and is creative. Character design: The MC feels a bit like a pet, and some things are not even properly explained. World Background: Good, but need explaining to those who haven't read PJ.
It is great. dfsfdssssssssffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffddddddddddddddddssssssssssssssssfffffffffffffffffsssssssssssssddfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
it's good, keep it up ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Don't usually review, but this is hands down, one of the worst written novels I have ever read. The grammar is simply atrocious and this is apparently the reworked version lol
Spoiler de révélation I can see lots of potential in this cannot wait for the next chapter grammar is not the best but good enough. - (P.S This is just for word count)
Well basically this fic is a different breed from your typical Greek myth stories. The MC is the youngest among the first Olympian's. He is the 7th child of Kronos after Zeus. He has the divinity of nature. Before all that just wanted to clarify that MC is not OP, so if you guys like OP MC's this fic is not for you. But he does have a cheat, that no fic that I've ever read has used before, and that is the power of love. No literally, the MC is loved by his siblings, they adore him, even Zeus and Hades, so much that they don't fight and try to remain peaceful for the sake of their little brother. Currently on chapter 31, MC has no love interest so far whatsoever. Also the grammar, punctuation and vocabulary are okay, although there are some minor mistakes but overall it's readable enough to get the gist of the whole story. The author has done a great job he used something different (which I respect) than other authors out there. So thank you author and hope you don't drop, as there are people out there that appreciate a change. Thanks and happy writing 😊😊
Spoiler de révélation I mean it has a lot to be desired for example, I sometimes see grammar and punctuation mistakes but overall all. I think it's one of the better percy Jackson fanfics I've read so far, So please continue writing author-sama😁
and her ei thought writing a percy jackson fanfic was an easy demigod oc story... no... litterally every single fic on here is about a god mc... Well what did i expect, i lost hope on webnovel the moment i found out the top 20 fics were harems.... 5 stars cause creation is hard
Sorry for the previous punctuation and grammar errors as of now I'm using a site to correct those mistakes and have started rewriting all chapters except author notes after correcting their errors sorry for the inconveniences.
Updated my review after reading through it more. It’s interesting at first just gets boring after a while