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The book is really unique and really rare to find, I totally love it and admire the writer for writing such a good book ☺️☺️
Dimensional Overhaul is one of the few novels that I actually took my time to invest in and read. I found it in my recommendation below my novel, underneath the category "You may also like", and decided to give this novel a try. (The Synopsis was gripping.) From the start, the world automatically has this untameable grip on you, immediately pulling and tossing you into a relentless, harsh, and bitterly cold setting of snow-covered mountains after the vague explanation that was made in the Prologue. It is as if by reading, your emotions can connect to the character and their abrupt transport into this awe-gripping world from the start, showing you the flow of life and the ways of living of the characters. The words construed upon this piece are one to take note of, as in every sentence and description, you can vividly fabricate this image inside your head and follow it through; maybe reinforcing it by the descriptions the author shares to grant this overall immersive style. I for one take full inspiration of this, and hopefully I will be able to replicate it in my works. But that shouldn't be one of your worries. In Dimensional Overhaul, you can HEAR the world, you can SEE the world, listen to its characters, and most importantly, you can FEEL it. That is one of the best elements of writing I absolutely love. For the sake of not spoiling it, I won't elaborate and go into depth on too much of the novel within this review, because I want you to find it out yourself. All I have to say about this gem of a novel I found among the forest of stories stored in this vista and atlas of narratives, is that this novel is one of the few that actually grip me into suspense, humor, and attention without granting me false and short-term promises like "some other novels." I again encourage and urge you to give Dimensional Overhaul a try. In anyway, you will NOT be disappointed.
I don't really read fantasy that much. But there is something so captivating about the writing that got me drawn to the story and I was scrolling through pages to read more. And oh my Kevin the protagonist is so likeable. I can't wait for his character growth to unravel as the story unfolds. This story is worth giving a shot
This is a great read! The grammar is neat, fluent in details, and shows a variety in character development. It’s always a nice touch when there’s a sense of realism revolving around a character’s beginning of abstaining strength/power. The action-packed chapters are marvelous with crisp details that paint the scenes. It’s hard finding a story that depicts a battle, and the challenges a character faces without being rushed. This is splendid. 5/5
Loved it actually...as far as I have read it...It's actually a nice concept...I guess everything seems to be awesome...I love cold and dark....I would say...so I like the way you mentioned it...and also the name Kevin is cool...I loved it
The WritIng skills is superb, the plot twist and even the dimensional worlds are interesting. Please author please continue👍 and goodluck.
The story is nice but there are some grammatical errors that the author needs to put a lot of work into and the story development needs to be improved but I ain't gonna say much. The story is good anyways
The author's writing style is praiseworthy and I like the chemistry between characters. ........................................................
the synopsis is great the storyline is amazing and the hard work is fantastic the story is worth a read......I liked the title too! Fighting writer.
this is a great story I love it so far //also I know this is kind of shameless but can you guys give me books a read they are books of azalon and decryption//
This is an amazing book! It's almost impossible to find a book such as this, here in webnovel. The writing skills displayed by the author were also amazing, except for the occasional typos here and there. I encourage everyone to read this absolute masterpiece!
The cover looks sick! The story grabs your attention by the time it starts, with explaining about the five powers and with Kevin being threatened by some middle-aged man, suspense is kept throughout. I can't find too much wrong with this book, cuz it makes sure not to do anything wrong
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You have a good command of English for your creation and your detailed description I envy most as I'm not fond of long paragraphs of describing anything.
just wanted to say the cover art is amazing! I love it. Second, this story is sick, the storyline is amazing and the fluent flow of the dialogue and action scene is great. Dope work author! :)
I like this so much story, Author is very nice at writing narration, is so detailed, and has imagination. I read this book until the 30 chapter is so amazing. good job for the author, and always keep the spirit for updating.
I love this story. So much action, drama and amazing character building. Keep up the Good work author. I am looking forward to more amazing content by you. This is definitely going to the top
I like even how the synopsis introduces you. I t gives you that taste and feel to read the book. Thanks to the author. May we get more of such books from this author. Let us also help him by posting and sharing it on our social media handles.
A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
The writing quality is superb, the updates are steady, the stop is well developed, the characters are amazing, and this is one of the best stories Webnovel has to offer. Almost a 5 out of 5 stars. The only thing I think it could use is a little more description of what the setting and characters look like.
Love the title! The storyline is great and the plot is unique. There are also no grammatical errors and it has great fluency in it. Hope to see more. Keep writing!
The beginning is a pretty good, A very well-written novel. Has great pacing, the complexity of the world background are amazing. Enjoyable reading. This is one of those books you don't want to miss. Keep it up.
Very good! Strong writing. Great world building. Definitely great if you like speculative story telling with solid action. The art on the cover is great too. Looking forward to more
Awesome art of work by author. Totally loved it. Keep going author 👌👌 Can't wait for more from you author. Definitely will make it to the top.
A well action packed novel 😊 Review after reading the latest chapter 25 release. (Warning: Might contain spoilers. Though there is a spoiler tag, I don't want to use it since it removes the space of my review.) Writing Quality. The narratives flows smoothly and the action scenes were describe vividly. There are g-errors but from the author's note, he said that he would be starting fixing it. Other than that everything is written well where you could visualized the story well. Story Development. With the 25 chapters there is still not much reveal yet to the identity of Kevin and his forgotten past. Though you could still somewhat make presumptions on the prologue and synopsis that maybe he is one of those generations who got the power of that most powerful guy? or he could be that guy itself. I guess? Then to the flow of the story, it was quite nice. Since of his memory loss, and really don't have any idea of most things in his surroundings. The readers got to learn more about the world as when he learned something new. Making it really not sounding infodumps. A good use of the ml's situation I must say. Character Design. Alright, Kevin could be somewhat naive well probably because of his memory loss. Lilith, well she is a nice partner for Kevin I guess. Her haugtiness and sometimes snarky speech matched well with Kevin's attitude. The other characters as well are intriguing in their own ways. And I'm curious about the identity of Klein as well. Updating Stability. Though most readers wanted frequent updates but I must say to just take your time author on honing each chapter. Quality > Quantity. World Background. Though there are still many yet to discover but the settings set so far in the story were detailed. From the village, their traits and there were also mentions of other worlds that we would probably see as the story progressed. Overall if you enjoy action packed novels with a touch of superpowers then you will probably enjoy reading this. Keep it up, author!
Very good. The plot is unique, without too much relying on other sources. The writing itself is pretty good. The dialogue progresses smoothly without sounding like they are rehearsing it.
Very interesting story, it starts with a fair bit of lore and exposition but it works! The writing gets progressively better with each chapter which is always good, there are a lot of updates and consistent chapters. I’m excited to see where this goes.
Firstly, not bad, I must say. The world-building is quite good and the issues are minimal. Loving the MC as well. Synopsis: Could have done a little better tbh. It's not bad but it's not all that captivating either. Could use some work to draw in more readers. Writing Quality: It's far from terrible but there are minor grammatical errors. There are capitalization issues, incorrect word usage, the incorrect form of words, etc. Some readers won't be bothered by this but others might find it quite bothersome so I would advise the author to fix these issues. Story Development: Quite nice honestly. As I've stated before, I like Kevin's character (excluding the weird way his memory loss is brought about). The introduction of his character and the diversity of magic was done well. Character Design: Not much said but this is a matter of preference. I always say this but some readers rather to imagine how their characters look rather than have them described for them. So it goes either way. Overall, not a bad story. It indeed has a lot of potential to become better. I urge you author to keep giving it your best. Great job so far!!
Here are my honest thought about this novel based on what I read so far and sorry if it's quite harsh: World Building: The world building so far is quite nice, I can some variety of creature and it set up on the fantasy world. However, it's better to give more expansion and more vivid description to make the world more intriguing to read. Characters: Kevin for me is I guess fine since the direction of this story mostly recovering his lost memory especially with his new world. Personality-wise, in my opinion, it's okay for now, but I suggest adding more flavor and depth about him to make him more engaging. As for the side character, I guess they are just okay, but you can flesh out them more It's an interesting novel even though there are some flaw with the capitalization problem I found and reducing some of the info dump in my opinion by giving more showing. Overall, good job author and keep up the good work!!!
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I am giving it 1 star for only 1 reason. The last update was 6 months ago. I thought I have found a good one. But when I see the last update time I am disappointed and my day is ruined!
The book is really unique and really rare to find, I totally love it and admire the writer for writing such a good book ☺️☺️
Dimensional Overhaul is one of the few novels that I actually took my time to invest in and read. I found it in my recommendation below my novel, underneath the category "You may also like", and decided to give this novel a try. (The Synopsis was gripping.) From the start, the world automatically has this untameable grip on you, immediately pulling and tossing you into a relentless, harsh, and bitterly cold setting of snow-covered mountains after the vague explanation that was made in the Prologue. It is as if by reading, your emotions can connect to the character and their abrupt transport into this awe-gripping world from the start, showing you the flow of life and the ways of living of the characters. The words construed upon this piece are one to take note of, as in every sentence and description, you can vividly fabricate this image inside your head and follow it through; maybe reinforcing it by the descriptions the author shares to grant this overall immersive style. I for one take full inspiration of this, and hopefully I will be able to replicate it in my works. But that shouldn't be one of your worries. In Dimensional Overhaul, you can HEAR the world, you can SEE the world, listen to its characters, and most importantly, you can FEEL it. That is one of the best elements of writing I absolutely love. For the sake of not spoiling it, I won't elaborate and go into depth on too much of the novel within this review, because I want you to find it out yourself. All I have to say about this gem of a novel I found among the forest of stories stored in this vista and atlas of narratives, is that this novel is one of the few that actually grip me into suspense, humor, and attention without granting me false and short-term promises like "some other novels." I again encourage and urge you to give Dimensional Overhaul a try. In anyway, you will NOT be disappointed.
I don't really read fantasy that much. But there is something so captivating about the writing that got me drawn to the story and I was scrolling through pages to read more. And oh my Kevin the protagonist is so likeable. I can't wait for his character growth to unravel as the story unfolds. This story is worth giving a shot
This is a great read! The grammar is neat, fluent in details, and shows a variety in character development. It’s always a nice touch when there’s a sense of realism revolving around a character’s beginning of abstaining strength/power. The action-packed chapters are marvelous with crisp details that paint the scenes. It’s hard finding a story that depicts a battle, and the challenges a character faces without being rushed. This is splendid. 5/5
Loved it actually...as far as I have read it...It's actually a nice concept...I guess everything seems to be awesome...I love cold and dark....I would say...so I like the way you mentioned it...and also the name Kevin is cool...I loved it
The WritIng skills is superb, the plot twist and even the dimensional worlds are interesting. Please author please continue👍 and goodluck.
The story is nice but there are some grammatical errors that the author needs to put a lot of work into and the story development needs to be improved but I ain't gonna say much. The story is good anyways
The author's writing style is praiseworthy and I like the chemistry between characters. ........................................................
the synopsis is great the storyline is amazing and the hard work is fantastic the story is worth a read......I liked the title too! Fighting writer.
this is a great story I love it so far //also I know this is kind of shameless but can you guys give me books a read they are books of azalon and decryption//
This is an amazing book! It's almost impossible to find a book such as this, here in webnovel. The writing skills displayed by the author were also amazing, except for the occasional typos here and there. I encourage everyone to read this absolute masterpiece!
The cover looks sick! The story grabs your attention by the time it starts, with explaining about the five powers and with Kevin being threatened by some middle-aged man, suspense is kept throughout. I can't find too much wrong with this book, cuz it makes sure not to do anything wrong
Spoiler de révélation You have a good command of English for your creation and your detailed description I envy most as I'm not fond of long paragraphs of describing anything.
just wanted to say the cover art is amazing! I love it. Second, this story is sick, the storyline is amazing and the fluent flow of the dialogue and action scene is great. Dope work author! :)
I like this so much story, Author is very nice at writing narration, is so detailed, and has imagination. I read this book until the 30 chapter is so amazing. good job for the author, and always keep the spirit for updating.
I love this story. So much action, drama and amazing character building. Keep up the Good work author. I am looking forward to more amazing content by you. This is definitely going to the top
I like even how the synopsis introduces you. I t gives you that taste and feel to read the book. Thanks to the author. May we get more of such books from this author. Let us also help him by posting and sharing it on our social media handles.
A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
The writing quality is superb, the updates are steady, the stop is well developed, the characters are amazing, and this is one of the best stories Webnovel has to offer. Almost a 5 out of 5 stars. The only thing I think it could use is a little more description of what the setting and characters look like.
Love the title! The storyline is great and the plot is unique. There are also no grammatical errors and it has great fluency in it. Hope to see more. Keep writing!
The beginning is a pretty good, A very well-written novel. Has great pacing, the complexity of the world background are amazing. Enjoyable reading. This is one of those books you don't want to miss. Keep it up.
Very good! Strong writing. Great world building. Definitely great if you like speculative story telling with solid action. The art on the cover is great too. Looking forward to more
Awesome art of work by author. Totally loved it. Keep going author 👌👌 Can't wait for more from you author. Definitely will make it to the top.
A well action packed novel 😊 Review after reading the latest chapter 25 release. (Warning: Might contain spoilers. Though there is a spoiler tag, I don't want to use it since it removes the space of my review.) Writing Quality. The narratives flows smoothly and the action scenes were describe vividly. There are g-errors but from the author's note, he said that he would be starting fixing it. Other than that everything is written well where you could visualized the story well. Story Development. With the 25 chapters there is still not much reveal yet to the identity of Kevin and his forgotten past. Though you could still somewhat make presumptions on the prologue and synopsis that maybe he is one of those generations who got the power of that most powerful guy? or he could be that guy itself. I guess? Then to the flow of the story, it was quite nice. Since of his memory loss, and really don't have any idea of most things in his surroundings. The readers got to learn more about the world as when he learned something new. Making it really not sounding infodumps. A good use of the ml's situation I must say. Character Design. Alright, Kevin could be somewhat naive well probably because of his memory loss. Lilith, well she is a nice partner for Kevin I guess. Her haugtiness and sometimes snarky speech matched well with Kevin's attitude. The other characters as well are intriguing in their own ways. And I'm curious about the identity of Klein as well. Updating Stability. Though most readers wanted frequent updates but I must say to just take your time author on honing each chapter. Quality > Quantity. World Background. Though there are still many yet to discover but the settings set so far in the story were detailed. From the village, their traits and there were also mentions of other worlds that we would probably see as the story progressed. Overall if you enjoy action packed novels with a touch of superpowers then you will probably enjoy reading this. Keep it up, author!
Very good. The plot is unique, without too much relying on other sources. The writing itself is pretty good. The dialogue progresses smoothly without sounding like they are rehearsing it.
Very interesting story, it starts with a fair bit of lore and exposition but it works! The writing gets progressively better with each chapter which is always good, there are a lot of updates and consistent chapters. I’m excited to see where this goes.
Firstly, not bad, I must say. The world-building is quite good and the issues are minimal. Loving the MC as well. Synopsis: Could have done a little better tbh. It's not bad but it's not all that captivating either. Could use some work to draw in more readers. Writing Quality: It's far from terrible but there are minor grammatical errors. There are capitalization issues, incorrect word usage, the incorrect form of words, etc. Some readers won't be bothered by this but others might find it quite bothersome so I would advise the author to fix these issues. Story Development: Quite nice honestly. As I've stated before, I like Kevin's character (excluding the weird way his memory loss is brought about). The introduction of his character and the diversity of magic was done well. Character Design: Not much said but this is a matter of preference. I always say this but some readers rather to imagine how their characters look rather than have them described for them. So it goes either way. Overall, not a bad story. It indeed has a lot of potential to become better. I urge you author to keep giving it your best. Great job so far!!
Here are my honest thought about this novel based on what I read so far and sorry if it's quite harsh: World Building: The world building so far is quite nice, I can some variety of creature and it set up on the fantasy world. However, it's better to give more expansion and more vivid description to make the world more intriguing to read. Characters: Kevin for me is I guess fine since the direction of this story mostly recovering his lost memory especially with his new world. Personality-wise, in my opinion, it's okay for now, but I suggest adding more flavor and depth about him to make him more engaging. As for the side character, I guess they are just okay, but you can flesh out them more It's an interesting novel even though there are some flaw with the capitalization problem I found and reducing some of the info dump in my opinion by giving more showing. Overall, good job author and keep up the good work!!!
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I am giving it 1 star for only 1 reason. The last update was 6 months ago. I thought I have found a good one. But when I see the last update time I am disappointed and my day is ruined!