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This is my favorite read right now 😍😍 I'm gonna start this book right a way 🤗🤗 Good job Good lucky 💪💪💪💪 🥰🥰🥰🥰 🙏🙏🙏🙏 ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Wow, Thor's story is really cool, very interesting! Plus the story is in English. It's really top, keep it up, sis[img=recommend][img=recommend]
i like the way Hans hurt Aleysa. 😂 i mean, no hard feelings. but a story without something 'hurt' is useless. and this book just proves that hurting someone's heart is totally good. 😁 i like the way you write the story and you can bring me into your story. by the way, i feel you, Aleysa... keep on writing, author! ^^
suka banget dengan ceritanyaaaaa, alur ceritanya simpel dan mudah di pahami. selalu bikin penasaran untuk pembacanya, recomet banget pokoknya 🥰🥰
semangat authorr... ini sudah di level berbeda 😆 pakai bahasa inggris.... lanjut ya semoga sukses kak....... 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
nice strory[img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=fp] is it about Romance Kontomporer and how about the girl [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The plo is really good. let alone the contents. I've read some of the chapters and they are really good. The writing is also very neat. fighting for the author 😊
Really a great plot , it proved me wrong every time made a preconceived thought. I loved the way the author has done a great job to walk you through the plot. overall a very good read. good luck author!!
A good story bout love and betrayal 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 🥺🥺🥺 Hans held responsible for every thing he did. Prison or married? Better he take last option ☺️👍
It is toxic to have such a marriage like this. But it happens everywhere. What the author wants to give us is the reality that happens around us. When a husband has no bond to love, he has nothing to feel that suffering in the last. It was such a good, although not sweet. Would you please keep it going? You are doing such a good job.
the story is awesome. I really hate Hans. I hate Emily too. sorry Alessa. the story is tearful. very cool thor. fighting!! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
very interesting, I like it, the plot is fun and hard to guess. passion for writing brother. I'm waiting for the continuation. passion for writing and creating
the author is cool. Just how to convey the synopsis has made people curious. The language is pretty good too. more in the hope of his ability. spirit!!
Very interesting story and worth reading. for the author of the spirit of writing, I am waiting for the next story..... I'm waiting for the next episode
it was good story I really like the plot.you just did something wonderfully author! I think people need read this when they want spent their time while reading. you will never feel boring with the story ✨😆
very good and interesting story. I'm so curious later Hans will melt too his heart with Aleysa? waiting for the sequel Thor[img=recommend][img=recommend]
good ceritanya bagus thor smngat upnya yh......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm so sorry Aleysa. her father already lives. keep marrying someone who doesn't love her anymore. Cheers to Aleysa and the author [img=recommend]
I have often met stories about CEOs. but somehow this author's story is different. very interesting to read. good luck to the author [img=recommend]
I love the plot of this story which naturally flow alongside the character development. Aleysha would be a strong heroine, and really love that. Anticipating for the next chapter [img=update]
This is my favorite read right now 😍😍 I'm gonna start this book right a way 🤗🤗 Good job Good lucky 💪💪💪💪 🥰🥰🥰🥰 🙏🙏🙏🙏 ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Wow, Thor's story is really cool, very interesting! Plus the story is in English. It's really top, keep it up, sis[img=recommend][img=recommend]
i like the way Hans hurt Aleysa. 😂 i mean, no hard feelings. but a story without something 'hurt' is useless. and this book just proves that hurting someone's heart is totally good. 😁 i like the way you write the story and you can bring me into your story. by the way, i feel you, Aleysa... keep on writing, author! ^^
suka banget dengan ceritanyaaaaa, alur ceritanya simpel dan mudah di pahami. selalu bikin penasaran untuk pembacanya, recomet banget pokoknya 🥰🥰
semangat authorr... ini sudah di level berbeda 😆 pakai bahasa inggris.... lanjut ya semoga sukses kak....... 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
nice strory[img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=fp] is it about Romance Kontomporer and how about the girl [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The plo is really good. let alone the contents. I've read some of the chapters and they are really good. The writing is also very neat. fighting for the author 😊
Really a great plot , it proved me wrong every time made a preconceived thought. I loved the way the author has done a great job to walk you through the plot. overall a very good read. good luck author!!
A good story bout love and betrayal 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 🥺🥺🥺 Hans held responsible for every thing he did. Prison or married? Better he take last option ☺️👍
It is toxic to have such a marriage like this. But it happens everywhere. What the author wants to give us is the reality that happens around us. When a husband has no bond to love, he has nothing to feel that suffering in the last. It was such a good, although not sweet. Would you please keep it going? You are doing such a good job.
the story is awesome. I really hate Hans. I hate Emily too. sorry Alessa. the story is tearful. very cool thor. fighting!! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
very interesting, I like it, the plot is fun and hard to guess. passion for writing brother. I'm waiting for the continuation. passion for writing and creating
the author is cool. Just how to convey the synopsis has made people curious. The language is pretty good too. more in the hope of his ability. spirit!!
Very interesting story and worth reading. for the author of the spirit of writing, I am waiting for the next story..... I'm waiting for the next episode
it was good story I really like the plot.you just did something wonderfully author! I think people need read this when they want spent their time while reading. you will never feel boring with the story ✨😆
very good and interesting story. I'm so curious later Hans will melt too his heart with Aleysa? waiting for the sequel Thor[img=recommend][img=recommend]
good ceritanya bagus thor smngat upnya yh......[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm so sorry Aleysa. her father already lives. keep marrying someone who doesn't love her anymore. Cheers to Aleysa and the author [img=recommend]
I have often met stories about CEOs. but somehow this author's story is different. very interesting to read. good luck to the author [img=recommend]
I love the plot of this story which naturally flow alongside the character development. Aleysha would be a strong heroine, and really love that. Anticipating for the next chapter [img=update]