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I'll start by complimenting the idea, it's interesting in and of itself but that is it. The writing from the onset doesn't flow, we don't know anything about the setting we are thrust in, and no good character background. The story switches POVs often with no warning, literally the next sentence will be involving 2 characters in a completely different location and you figure it out a paragraph or two later which is confusing and a put-off. Not to mention basic he/her grammatical errors and misspelling have me dropping at ch 44. Also, what is the overarching plot here? What is his goal besides rescuing his kidnapped mom, I mean that can't be all there is to this right? Again great idea, bad execution.
Nice plot nice plot nice plot…….….…….….— :::::::::::::::::::::::::.::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Hope you people are enjoying my story, if you haven't read it, please do. If you don't like it then you don't have to read it and please give your review about it. Also, expect spelling mistakes.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey guys, I just wanted to change and clear a few things: This whole part of the story is a prologue of what I want to publish. I gave up on this because I could not change what I wanted. So I will be publishing Swordancia, after the events occurring. This is still part of the story, just wanted to change things up a bit, but also start from the beginning. Thanks
I'll start by complimenting the idea, it's interesting in and of itself but that is it. The writing from the onset doesn't flow, we don't know anything about the setting we are thrust in, and no good character background. The story switches POVs often with no warning, literally the next sentence will be involving 2 characters in a completely different location and you figure it out a paragraph or two later which is confusing and a put-off. Not to mention basic he/her grammatical errors and misspelling have me dropping at ch 44. Also, what is the overarching plot here? What is his goal besides rescuing his kidnapped mom, I mean that can't be all there is to this right? Again great idea, bad execution.
Nice plot nice plot nice plot…….….…….….— :::::::::::::::::::::::::.::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Hope you people are enjoying my story, if you haven't read it, please do. If you don't like it then you don't have to read it and please give your review about it. Also, expect spelling mistakes.
this novel is good bro! 5star''exp! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp ! 5star''exp
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Hey guys, I just wanted to change and clear a few things: This whole part of the story is a prologue of what I want to publish. I gave up on this because I could not change what I wanted. So I will be publishing Swordancia, after the events occurring. This is still part of the story, just wanted to change things up a bit, but also start from the beginning. Thanks