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It keeps randomly skipping. The idea is interesting. I can't follow it at all it is missing whole chunks then its like they forgot what they forgot what they wrote.
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Es una buena historia pero le falta mas desarrollo de personaje, bueno, la verdada solo estoy escribiendo esto para la piedra de energia, no he leido esto, lo siento, soy nuevo
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Ill be honest it was boring af somehow he thinks he has the power to discover a Slaves potential and he does this by just ASKING them that is not a power anybody can do idk why he thinks his the only one who can do that.This book Has been lame so far.
Did not even need to read it .... ........ ..... ... . .. . . .. .. . . .. . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .
ewwwwwwwwww. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ,. .. .. ... .. ... .. ... .. ... .. .. .. ... ... ... . .... .. ... .. .. .. .... ... .. 😐😐😐😐
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Chapter 22 is from another novel called "Revival of Magic: Billion Times of Evolution" chapter 25
brought to you by ccp department of Xinjiang and Tibetan development they are not slaves they are happy ethnic unpaid intern...................
The growth oF the plot was successful. I also like The characters, They are welL depicted aNd successfulLy Introduced. I will Be going On to reAd it.
this is garbage. I read first 10 chapters and I m disgusted by everything, the world, the protagonist, everything is trash and disgusting fr.
Just the synopsis makes me feel like spitting on it [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
افضل مانجا وأنمي و المشاركة في نشر سنة يعني رقم الإعلان على كافة أراضيه على هذا العالم الرائع الذي أحصل على هذا العالم الرائع الذي أحصل على وظيفة أو أكثر مع للامغنية ويكيليكس من حرمان كن أول حفلة عيد الحب فى مصر فايزة في مسار لكن الاقتباس لا ينتهي هنا ينص علي انترنيت في المغرب مين رغيب و البنكالشعيب وغيرها الكثير المسلسلاة في الوزن و لديه تأثير على
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George again?. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. . .. .. .. .. .. ..... . . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..... ... ... .. ., ,. .,, ., ..,. ,. ,. ,.,
another George ,.....................................,.....................................,.....................................,.....................................
Weird af, creepy af. I thought it might be one of those stories where the MC transmigrates as a "villain" or a "demon lord" and then Isn't actually evil because their just a normal person. Instead this is exactly as it sounds, it's about a guy who transmigrates to become a slave trader and he takes particular delight in punishing and training his slaves. Its just unpleasant.
Merecusoalerumanovelsobreescravidaomascomoestouemumaparelhonovoecompreguicadeconfiguraréimpossivelescrevereminglesentaosealguementenderdaumoiaiparamim.
Another George?...................... ......................................................... ...............................................................
Another interesting novel this week hope this gets picked..... __________________________________________________________________________________
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It keeps randomly skipping. The idea is interesting. I can't follow it at all it is missing whole chunks then its like they forgot what they forgot what they wrote.
Spoiler de révélation Es una buena historia pero le falta mas desarrollo de personaje, bueno, la verdada solo estoy escribiendo esto para la piedra de energia, no he leido esto, lo siento, soy nuevo
.................ಠಿ_ಠ................ .................ಠಿ_ಠ................ .................ಠಿ_ಠ................ .................ಠಿ_ಠ...............
Ill be honest it was boring af somehow he thinks he has the power to discover a Slaves potential and he does this by just ASKING them that is not a power anybody can do idk why he thinks his the only one who can do that.This book Has been lame so far.
Did not even need to read it .... ........ ..... ... . .. . . .. .. . . .. . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .
ewwwwwwwwww. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ,. .. .. ... .. ... .. ... .. ... .. .. .. ... ... ... . .... .. ... .. .. .. .... ... .. 😐😐😐😐
Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support
Chapter 22 is from another novel called "Revival of Magic: Billion Times of Evolution" chapter 25
brought to you by ccp department of Xinjiang and Tibetan development they are not slaves they are happy ethnic unpaid intern...................
The growth oF the plot was successful. I also like The characters, They are welL depicted aNd successfulLy Introduced. I will Be going On to reAd it.
this is garbage. I read first 10 chapters and I m disgusted by everything, the world, the protagonist, everything is trash and disgusting fr.
Just the synopsis makes me feel like spitting on it [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
افضل مانجا وأنمي و المشاركة في نشر سنة يعني رقم الإعلان على كافة أراضيه على هذا العالم الرائع الذي أحصل على هذا العالم الرائع الذي أحصل على وظيفة أو أكثر مع للامغنية ويكيليكس من حرمان كن أول حفلة عيد الحب فى مصر فايزة في مسار لكن الاقتباس لا ينتهي هنا ينص علي انترنيت في المغرب مين رغيب و البنكالشعيب وغيرها الكثير المسلسلاة في الوزن و لديه تأثير على
Spoiler de révélation George again?. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. . .. .. .. .. .. ..... . . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..... ... ... .. ., ,. .,, ., ..,. ,. ,. ,.,
another George ,.....................................,.....................................,.....................................,.....................................
Weird af, creepy af. I thought it might be one of those stories where the MC transmigrates as a "villain" or a "demon lord" and then Isn't actually evil because their just a normal person. Instead this is exactly as it sounds, it's about a guy who transmigrates to become a slave trader and he takes particular delight in punishing and training his slaves. Its just unpleasant.
Merecusoalerumanovelsobreescravidaomascomoestouemumaparelhonovoecompreguicadeconfiguraréimpossivelescrevereminglesentaosealguementenderdaumoiaiparamim.
Another George?...................... ......................................................... ...............................................................
Another interesting novel this week hope this gets picked..... __________________________________________________________________________________
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