Naruto: Starting From The Beginning

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Darker_Than_Black

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LordLukas

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SpeedwagonDrip

After reading chapter 21, I would say that I'm satisfied. This fic definitely has a ton of potential with the unique idea. So far, there are barely any grammar errors/mistakes, with the few mistakes barely being noticeable. The world background is Naruto, so I don't need to say anything about that. MC is Itachi and actually acts like him, so that's a 5 star for character design. The stability of updates is definitely 5 stars, and for the story development, I'll do 5 stars as well since the story is progressing really nicely, without any holes in the story (At least, until chapter 21). TLDR; Good story about Itachi, with Itachi actually acting like himself for once. Hope you don't drop Author-san and hope you keep up the good work :)

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DaoistkAiMKM

The progress of the story is great, I'm waiting for the continuation, but if you make a harem, I will never read it again The progress of the story is great, I'm waiting for the continuation, but if you make a harem, I will never read it again

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yall_shameful_asf

Make it a harem and I'll never forgive you. I'll kill you as well. .........................................................................

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Lalrohlua_Chhangte

I honestly am surprised by how good this fanfic is. I don't expect this much character design, dialogue and not to mention the near flawless grammer. If you want to read a great Naruto fanfic based on Itachi, I recommend this very much. Props to the author for creating a wonderful fanfiction.

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TeggyWeggy

This novel is really good. Itachi acts like Itachi. The chapter lengths are decently long. The only problem is that there are no scene breaks. At all. Which is extremely jarring when the perspective shifts at least once or twice every chapter. It's annoying, but other than that, this novel is great.

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gregory_echavarria

………."………."…….."……. I like it keep up the good work…………………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………………………….l..l…………………………………………………………………………………………..

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RandomIsGood

It's really good and the characters act the way they should and without them being OC. I just hope it continues to hold such a good standard

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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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heavenlyserpent

so i am writing this first and foremost because I felt bad about reading such a awesome story without giving at least little feedback. just want to tell the author he is doing a great job and I look forward to more updates

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Reaper_2985

The fanfic is great it's as if there was a series on Itachi getting reincarnated in himself at the age of 5 this would be the script. Every character every arc leads to another great arc. the author uses every part of the character or situation and includes it in the story as if it is natural not forced to make a situation. Great so far.

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ZyxoSama

Honestly I love how you've stuck to Itachi's character and kept some of the characters personalities relatively the same. Granted some had to be changed because of Itachi changing the past and certain people not dying or events not happening. Just one thing, as Heir to the Uchiha clan, if Itachi is not planning on betraying the village or committing the genocide of the Uchiha Clan, will he ever acknowledge Izumi's feelings, and or reciprocate them? Obviously when they're older. But I do believe in Canon he loved her as well. I'd just like to see that relationship happen in this Fanfic as it didn't have the chance to in Canon for obvious reasons.

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Captain_Firebunny

Really enjoyed this book so far not a lot of fanfic that aren’t just self inserts or brooding edge lords as main characters.—————————————————

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Rejnid

Writing quality is great. Stability of Updates is good. Story development is great. Character design is the greatest, i mean no OOC's, no BS, no harem, AND no p*doph*lia. World Background. I mean, naruto.

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SuohDaoist

within the first 3 chapters Itachi goes to the 3rd and tells him all about the future. yeah don't bother reading this, the author is an idiot

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Evesty

honestly i dont know how do u even include that many details and action at the same time with me not dropping and i am shocked that i want more this is a first also i would like to thank you for not making itachi and the hokage always talk about him coming from the past and that it sound like am reading a novel not a fanfiction anyways a 5/5

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EclipseKnight

This novel is great. The characters like almost the same personality as in the canon. The author did a good job on making this fanfiction. And I have a feeling that the author love his work. It's not like any fanfiction that make their mc look cool and others like Hiruzen look bad. I mean, Hiruzen is a good guy in the canon, but he is just incompetent. I don't care about the update stability, I just hope that it won't drop. I do also hope for the author to put a (Pov Change) because sometimes I got lost who's who when I'm reading.