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i like the story so far. but plasase you update its morethan 13 days if it going like this l mighth forget that this fanfic even exists[img=update]
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It a good novel, interesting to read, there's hardly a fic where mc is an oututsuki and I'm kinda enjoying it while reading Keep going don't drop it in the middle of story
You know, it's rare to find a fanfic where the protagonist is an Otsutsuki, so I hope the Author doesn't drop the story that looks promising.
it's pretty good so far. I've been leaving a bunch of comments about errors you should fix but other than that your good. Small question though. Did you create this book because you were dared into it because I'm on of those people who dared you to it?
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i like the story so far. but plasase you update its morethan 13 days if it going like this l mighth forget that this fanfic even exists[img=update]
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It a good novel, interesting to read, there's hardly a fic where mc is an oututsuki and I'm kinda enjoying it while reading Keep going don't drop it in the middle of story
You know, it's rare to find a fanfic where the protagonist is an Otsutsuki, so I hope the Author doesn't drop the story that looks promising.
it's pretty good so far. I've been leaving a bunch of comments about errors you should fix but other than that your good. Small question though. Did you create this book because you were dared into it because I'm on of those people who dared you to it?