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this is really gooooooooooddd!!!!!! i hope your nov3l will become my next favorite Fan-fic just like Author-Leixin Who has a Novel of Wish Of The Dragon!!!! for those who have not read Wish of The Dragon i Recommend it Its really Really Gooodd!!!
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Yeeeesss!!!!! an author that did not hate on rias other authors keep making her look bad even though shes not that bad 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
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I love your story. It is one of the best dxd fic i read. It's also the only fic where Aika was the main girl. Thanks for the story. I hope you will not drop. Keep it up.
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Amazing character interraction , the bond between draig and isse just so wholesome like looking at 2 best bud and interaction with aika is also amazing , i feel like she is a real human being not a walking meatbum like a lot of gile in other fanfic on this site. what can i say , this fanfic is basically 10/10 just straight up 10/10 .
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I loved. I just finished reading all the chapters available for now and I have to say that it is very good. You preserve the personalities of the original characters very well. The world background is interesting and sometimes mysterious. The interaction of the characters is very funny and pleasant, it is not forced like other fanfics so the dialogue comes out more natural. And the jokes you put on were a lot of fun. Keep up the fanfic because I really liked it a lot.
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Everything is top notch. The interaction between the characters is amazing, MC is written in a fantastic manner, and I really want to see where the story will go in the future. I highly recommend this.
I only hope you will not drop the story. I am loving it. Hope he will not lose his harem members and become op. Thanks for the story. 🤩✌️✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️
Really surprising. Very smooth read. It shows Issei as a person that can grow, but doesn't have to abandon who he is ir what he wants. Really want to read more. Already added it to my library.
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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Everything is top notch. The interaction between the characters is amazing, MC is written in a fantastic manner, and I really want to see where the story will go in the future. I highly recommend this.
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Just one word...LOVED IT...I mean this is such a breath of fresh air in this category of novels. Issie is the protagonist, not some random dude getting super op in 2-3 chapters and trying to catch every girl in the series while trying to be all high and mighty hypocritical fool...well i regressed there so as i was saying mc is issie he comes back from the cultivation world and this is before the story starts so he is not really familiar with all the supernatural stuff. He is still issie not some xianxia fool mc and i loved how author bashes the xianxia troop lol. He is still perverted as he spent most of his time cultivation but it's toned down a bit. A very good read specifically for dxd fans out there. Hope author does continue this novel and drop it in between.
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this is really gooooooooooddd!!!!!! i hope your nov3l will become my next favorite Fan-fic just like Author-Leixin Who has a Novel of Wish Of The Dragon!!!! for those who have not read Wish of The Dragon i Recommend it Its really Really Gooodd!!!
Spoiler de révélation Yeeeesss!!!!! an author that did not hate on rias other authors keep making her look bad even though shes not that bad 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
Big harem? Big Harem! BIG HAREM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Big harem? Big Harem! BIG HAREM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Big harem? Big Harem! BIG HAREM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Big harem? Big Harem! BIG HAREM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Big harem? Big Harem! BIG HAREM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Big harem? Big Harem! BIG HAREM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Big harem? Big Harem! BIG HAREM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Spoiler de révélation I love your story. It is one of the best dxd fic i read. It's also the only fic where Aika was the main girl. Thanks for the story. I hope you will not drop. Keep it up.
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Spoiler de révélation Amazing character interraction , the bond between draig and isse just so wholesome like looking at 2 best bud and interaction with aika is also amazing , i feel like she is a real human being not a walking meatbum like a lot of gile in other fanfic on this site. what can i say , this fanfic is basically 10/10 just straight up 10/10 .
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I loved. I just finished reading all the chapters available for now and I have to say that it is very good. You preserve the personalities of the original characters very well. The world background is interesting and sometimes mysterious. The interaction of the characters is very funny and pleasant, it is not forced like other fanfics so the dialogue comes out more natural. And the jokes you put on were a lot of fun. Keep up the fanfic because I really liked it a lot.
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Spoiler de révélation Everything is top notch. The interaction between the characters is amazing, MC is written in a fantastic manner, and I really want to see where the story will go in the future. I highly recommend this.
I only hope you will not drop the story. I am loving it. Hope he will not lose his harem members and become op. Thanks for the story. 🤩✌️✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️🤩✌️
Really surprising. Very smooth read. It shows Issei as a person that can grow, but doesn't have to abandon who he is ir what he wants. Really want to read more. Already added it to my library.
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
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Everything is top notch. The interaction between the characters is amazing, MC is written in a fantastic manner, and I really want to see where the story will go in the future. I highly recommend this.
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You are streatching chapter too much, but story is great.......👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👍👌👍👌👍👍👍👍👌👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Just one word...LOVED IT...I mean this is such a breath of fresh air in this category of novels. Issie is the protagonist, not some random dude getting super op in 2-3 chapters and trying to catch every girl in the series while trying to be all high and mighty hypocritical fool...well i regressed there so as i was saying mc is issie he comes back from the cultivation world and this is before the story starts so he is not really familiar with all the supernatural stuff. He is still issie not some xianxia fool mc and i loved how author bashes the xianxia troop lol. He is still perverted as he spent most of his time cultivation but it's toned down a bit. A very good read specifically for dxd fans out there. Hope author does continue this novel and drop it in between.