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WARNING!!!! If you don't won't to be disappointed then don't read this. Last time I read a fic of his he disappeared for a year with no activity on his profile whatsoever. It seems like it's happened again and this one will be dropped too. The fic itself is good, but anything coming from this author will be dropped. If you don't believe me click on his profile and check his comment/like history.
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Nice story . Thats all I had to type, I'm running out of words to write so I'm making anything up to reach the 140 word count. Annoying typing
Hey AUTHOR Did You Take Inspiration From Appoloxian in marvel. I'm always Ben 10 fan. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
I really like this story, keep updating please!!!!!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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WARNING!!!! If you don't won't to be disappointed then don't read this. Last time I read a fic of his he disappeared for a year with no activity on his profile whatsoever. It seems like it's happened again and this one will be dropped too. The fic itself is good, but anything coming from this author will be dropped. If you don't believe me click on his profile and check his comment/like history.
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Nice story . Thats all I had to type, I'm running out of words to write so I'm making anything up to reach the 140 word count. Annoying typing
Hey AUTHOR Did You Take Inspiration From Appoloxian in marvel. I'm always Ben 10 fan. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
I really like this story, keep updating please!!!!!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
I really like where this story is going. Keep it up.😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀👍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀😀😀😀😀😀👍
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