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good so far, could use more pictures of the characters to help with visualization but I love me some mount and blade man, one of my favorite games.
This is awesome. So don't read or you will feel what I'm feeling right now. You will read this brilliant piece of art then see the update times and be horrified that you could be waiting months for another chapter. Author you are awesome the fight scenes are expertly done ,the mc and his summons feel organic. Love the interactions between them and the character development. Only four chapters and this is probably the best thing I have read in many months. Give us more or I'll eat you're cat........ With sauce
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so far, this story is amazing, I really hope you can come back and continue writing this amazing story. this story can truly go places, and I can't wait to see what it will bring in the future. P.S author please continue to write this book, I love it, I even have you your first power stone:D and review. 2ndP.S i might even help with ideas or whatever if you want, XD
good so far, could use more pictures of the characters to help with visualization but I love me some mount and blade man, one of my favorite games.
This is awesome. So don't read or you will feel what I'm feeling right now. You will read this brilliant piece of art then see the update times and be horrified that you could be waiting months for another chapter. Author you are awesome the fight scenes are expertly done ,the mc and his summons feel organic. Love the interactions between them and the character development. Only four chapters and this is probably the best thing I have read in many months. Give us more or I'll eat you're cat........ With sauce
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
so far, this story is amazing, I really hope you can come back and continue writing this amazing story. this story can truly go places, and I can't wait to see what it will bring in the future. P.S author please continue to write this book, I love it, I even have you your first power stone:D and review. 2ndP.S i might even help with ideas or whatever if you want, XD
Don’t stopppppppppppppppppppppppt pleaseee I need more