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i would give this story a better rating if i didnt feel the ending was rushed!
Good story. There were some loose ends, but overall story was cohesive. Maybe there will be a sequel for the loose ends.
it's one of the best novels I have read which 8s full of amazement ..The FL Mo Zhu is superb talented to the max and the ML Huo Zuan is awesome too. fighting skills are both extra ordinary 👍👍👍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💓❤💓💘💘💕💖💖💟💗💝💤
I’m going to read this based on the synopsis. I’m also going to give this 5-star since non of the review complains about grammar. Hopefully, it will not disappoint me. I’ll definitely let you know at the end of my reading how it goes.
Rushed ending. Climax, final villain, resolution, happyish ending, all crammed into 1 chapter. Also never felt like ml and fl were in love or a couple. Character dev was weak.
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an interesting book but the end was so abrupt. i would like to have seen the two get married and also have children. what happens to the rest of the characters
The story is very interesting and very entertaining. It has a good plot, love the face slapping scenes. I am not one to look for perfection but something that would make me read it til my eyes got blurry. With that, kudos Author. Thanks for sharing a good story.
At around chpt 225, all the sick people in this story is just poisoned. Everyone wants a herb that no one knows how to use and are willing to spend an enormous amount to get. The story doesn’t flow and it jumps all over the place. ML is like a little puppy that follows the FL around and the FL is just apathetic about everything but her family. This story is just annoying to read. Read a couple of reviews saying that it’s a ripoff of another story. I’ll try to finish it since there’s only 520 chpts, but as of right now, not enjoying it at all.
This story is your typical mary sue genius ice queen with soft heart for people she cares about & the Ml lead is the pampering type. If this is what you like then this is a good one but of your looking for uniqueness then this isn't for you.
Whao!! the brief on this novel alone is too convincing. I love to read. Author u are too good. The summary is too smooth to miss. 😀😀😀😀😀😍😍
end abrut but book was really good and interesting [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I dropped it at chapter 376. I am here for romance after all. And this story has little to none. They kissed once but honestly, there's really no chemistry between them. This story is more on deflecting schemes, solving mysteries, the FL curing people, etc. I also don't like the ML so much. At least 60% of the schemes that the FL experienced were because of him and he doesn't do much. Actually, all the characters are kinda flat. There's no character development that much. I dropped this because it's kinda boring for me plus at the very beginning, I already feel like it's kinda messy. It's hard to know the focus of the story honestly. Then I skipped everything else and read the ending. And I'm happy I dropped this and didn't continue until the end because the ending isn't satisfactory as well.
This is an amazing story. I wished that the author could have written about the wedding, children, music and other things.
Very good. Hoped to read about the wedding but glad it had a good ending.
if you are looking for a romance novel, skip this one.. thi is almost zero romance.. the leads never kissed, never dated properly.. they are just like 2 friends protecting each other, like partners in crime.. they are no way acting as lovers.. this is more on action novel, and the ending is rushed..
an amazing story just like the characters...looking forward for a peaceful and happy ending.😘😘😘 an amazing story just like the characters...looking forward for a peaceful and happy ending.😘😘😘 an amazing story just like the characters...looking forward for a peaceful and happy ending.😘😘😘 an amazing story just like the characters...looking forward for a peaceful and happy ending.😘😘😘 an amazing story just like the characters...looking forward for a peaceful and happy ending.😘😘😘
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The 2 paragraphs of the Synopsis is correct... and the third one didn't happen and the book is completed... I really hoped that the book contained a big fat marriage and how the FL mom realise that her first daughter is more more outstanding than her second daughter... and let the ML slap their faces... Some characters have been not shown clearly... especially (ML step sister's step brother(fang))... Anyhow, the story is completed... the last 3 episodes the author wrote hurriedly but the plot is awesome... the Zhang family remained secret it didn't revealed... I hope there is a side story where it will be revealed .. A big thanks for the author for writing an amazing story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] More stories required[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like it its good but it feel sad to see cold fl . author you are slowing my fl to be warm by ml love ....wuwu I can't see lovey dovey between them
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The story is excellent but sometimes there will be put wrong name on the character😅😅😅 it makes me have more concentrate on the story 😁😁🤪
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] the main character mo zhu very cool she was very kind hearted girl n straight forward.[img=coins][img=coins]
l loved this novel even till now l still do its still one of my fav novels ever-since last year on Whattpad .Mo Zhu inspires me the most her skills ,confidence, cleverness everything abt her 🥰❤️ also the way the novel unfolds itself aswell just wonderful l really enjoyed this beautiful novel alot. Thank u very much ☺️🤝
i would give this story a better rating if i didnt feel the ending was rushed!
Good story. There were some loose ends, but overall story was cohesive. Maybe there will be a sequel for the loose ends.
it's one of the best novels I have read which 8s full of amazement ..The FL Mo Zhu is superb talented to the max and the ML Huo Zuan is awesome too. fighting skills are both extra ordinary 👍👍👍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤💓❤💓💘💘💕💖💖💟💗💝💤
I’m going to read this based on the synopsis. I’m also going to give this 5-star since non of the review complains about grammar. Hopefully, it will not disappoint me. I’ll definitely let you know at the end of my reading how it goes.
Rushed ending. Climax, final villain, resolution, happyish ending, all crammed into 1 chapter. Also never felt like ml and fl were in love or a couple. Character dev was weak.
Spoiler de révélation an interesting book but the end was so abrupt. i would like to have seen the two get married and also have children. what happens to the rest of the characters
The story is very interesting and very entertaining. It has a good plot, love the face slapping scenes. I am not one to look for perfection but something that would make me read it til my eyes got blurry. With that, kudos Author. Thanks for sharing a good story.
At around chpt 225, all the sick people in this story is just poisoned. Everyone wants a herb that no one knows how to use and are willing to spend an enormous amount to get. The story doesn’t flow and it jumps all over the place. ML is like a little puppy that follows the FL around and the FL is just apathetic about everything but her family. This story is just annoying to read. Read a couple of reviews saying that it’s a ripoff of another story. I’ll try to finish it since there’s only 520 chpts, but as of right now, not enjoying it at all.
This story is your typical mary sue genius ice queen with soft heart for people she cares about & the Ml lead is the pampering type. If this is what you like then this is a good one but of your looking for uniqueness then this isn't for you.
Whao!! the brief on this novel alone is too convincing. I love to read. Author u are too good. The summary is too smooth to miss. 😀😀😀😀😀😍😍
end abrut but book was really good and interesting [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I dropped it at chapter 376. I am here for romance after all. And this story has little to none. They kissed once but honestly, there's really no chemistry between them. This story is more on deflecting schemes, solving mysteries, the FL curing people, etc. I also don't like the ML so much. At least 60% of the schemes that the FL experienced were because of him and he doesn't do much. Actually, all the characters are kinda flat. There's no character development that much. I dropped this because it's kinda boring for me plus at the very beginning, I already feel like it's kinda messy. It's hard to know the focus of the story honestly. Then I skipped everything else and read the ending. And I'm happy I dropped this and didn't continue until the end because the ending isn't satisfactory as well.
This is an amazing story. I wished that the author could have written about the wedding, children, music and other things.
Very good. Hoped to read about the wedding but glad it had a good ending.
if you are looking for a romance novel, skip this one.. thi is almost zero romance.. the leads never kissed, never dated properly.. they are just like 2 friends protecting each other, like partners in crime.. they are no way acting as lovers.. this is more on action novel, and the ending is rushed..
an amazing story just like the characters...looking forward for a peaceful and happy ending.😘😘😘 an amazing story just like the characters...looking forward for a peaceful and happy ending.😘😘😘 an amazing story just like the characters...looking forward for a peaceful and happy ending.😘😘😘 an amazing story just like the characters...looking forward for a peaceful and happy ending.😘😘😘 an amazing story just like the characters...looking forward for a peaceful and happy ending.😘😘😘
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The 2 paragraphs of the Synopsis is correct... and the third one didn't happen and the book is completed... I really hoped that the book contained a big fat marriage and how the FL mom realise that her first daughter is more more outstanding than her second daughter... and let the ML slap their faces... Some characters have been not shown clearly... especially (ML step sister's step brother(fang))... Anyhow, the story is completed... the last 3 episodes the author wrote hurriedly but the plot is awesome... the Zhang family remained secret it didn't revealed... I hope there is a side story where it will be revealed .. A big thanks for the author for writing an amazing story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] More stories required[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like it its good but it feel sad to see cold fl . author you are slowing my fl to be warm by ml love ....wuwu I can't see lovey dovey between them
Spoiler de révélation The story is excellent but sometimes there will be put wrong name on the character😅😅😅 it makes me have more concentrate on the story 😁😁🤪
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] the main character mo zhu very cool she was very kind hearted girl n straight forward.[img=coins][img=coins]
l loved this novel even till now l still do its still one of my fav novels ever-since last year on Whattpad .Mo Zhu inspires me the most her skills ,confidence, cleverness everything abt her 🥰❤️ also the way the novel unfolds itself aswell just wonderful l really enjoyed this beautiful novel alot. Thank u very much ☺️🤝