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Hello everyone, Author here. After more than four months into serialisation, I decided to tell you what this story is about. Of course, as a webnovel reader, you would have read tens to hundreds of system novels. How many tropes have you seen in them? And, suppose, hypothetically speaking, if you gave a deeper thought to such stories, you'll be met with a question... [Why do Systems always select a trash and help them for no reason?] If you had this question, congrats, then you are a bonafide human and not a chimpanzee. Now, if you were of the superior hooman species, you might also get this question... [From where do the Systems come from? How do they create OP Skills, Techniques, Items, etc. seemingly out of nowhere and give them to the MC?] If you also had this question, then you have earned the curiosity to read this story. The MC here was once a System Host. And, when he reached the peak of his life, he was betrayed by the System. This is where the truth about the Systems would come to light and you'll understand as to why they behave as such in every System Novel you have ever read. And, to achieve his purpose, the MC begins a quest to hunt Systems. But, Systems are cheats, fre*king plot armours. So, it's not possible for a mortal to kill them. And, achieving a method to do so and making it a reality is what this story is about. PS: The MC here has a brain and uses it...a lot. Also, he schemes a lot which needs some understanding to read. So, if you are a reader that loves intelligent stuff, you'll have a blast with this story. But, if you have less than two braincells, please don't read this story. That's all. If you have any questions, please feel free to hit me up here. I'll be answering them as soon as I see them.
I'm short of words, cause anything else would sound cliche. This probably one of the best novels I've ever come across. I think we all would really appreciate it if the Author released more chapters.
Aunque odio los sistemas en la novelas en un 99%, por lo que sería interesante leer una novela que se baza en cazar los, el pro lema de estas novelas son los protagonistas unidimensionales e hipócritas ODIO a los protagonistas hipócritas, psicoticos asesinos, embusteros, en fin que representan a todos las personas que deberían estar presos o muertos, y a aquellos que quieren lograr sus metas a cualquier costo ajeno, tanto como odio el tropo de sistemas y dedos de oro, incluso más, solo me daban Ganas de matar a alguien y me producen asco como representacion de una persona civilizada Premisa interesante, pero si el protagonista es una persona hipócrita que justifica su forma de pensamiento malvada a través de la Protección de seres queridos y metas, no es mi tasa de té, dice mucho que todos los escritores solo puedan escribir protagonistas qué son bastardos y asesinos locos y resentidos con hambre de poder
hope you finish this ..............................................................................................................................................
gonna guve this review 5 star.The author maybe dead but his work is absplute masterpiece. His work is side by side standing alongside reverend insanity,lord of mysteries,Omniscient readers point of view,FFF class trash hero,,Everyone else is a returnee.definitely a must try.1)Multiple power system both unique and common.But the main attraction is the systemss power system.2)Powerful villains. meaning not only brawn but also brain. (but lacks in comprasion Reverend insanity)3)Dives into pretty much every genre.4)You wouldnt stand system genre anymore after this read.5) a unique novel with a new story.
Truly a hidden gem. One of my favourite novels I'm keeping up with. Would recommend! .......................................................................................................................... .........................................................
Pretty good, unfortunately the author got lost in the sauce. After chapter 750 author started taking hallucinating drugs before writting the chapters.
Your story makes me anxious whenever I read another system novel, it gives me anxiety about systems. overall the storys great but I just have a problem with his power of lore it just feels off but I'll keep reading .
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this is good but too much complexity, at some point you will just start losing interest and skip chapters.
It would be nice, if MC was transmigrated as a System(I hate systems omniverse), starting from the lowest/weakest level, slowly becoming the highest/strongest level
This book is innovative. But i'm stuck at chapter 25 and can't continue it. Here are its pros : - The book has original ideas - The Mc is smart - There are many worlds to visit( those who like world-hopping might like that) - The author is active in the comments - The updates are regulars - The writing quality is one of the best on this app Now, the cons : - The characters are unappealing. Honestly, despite knowing the Mc’s goal and despite the prospect of having many other worlds to visit , i didn’t feel interested enough to continue reading. And this is mainly due to the Mc. He doesn't show much personality and is boring .( Even if you wanted him to be a loner most of the time, you could have given him entertaining thoughts, author) It's like he exists only to be an excuse for us to discover the fabulous world that the author has created. What about side characters then? they are worse than the Mc. The book sure does have a good plot. But with characters as shallow, the interest one might have for it is quickly overshadowed by the boredom brought by the characters themselves, and the realisation that they only exist to drive the plot. - The pace is slow. This might equally be a good thing for some. However for me , this-together with the shabby characters - only reinforce the feeling of boredom. - The tone of the book is uniforme. The book always feels serious and it's also boring . Author, you could have tried to write some comic moments to break a bit the feeling of monotony the book gives. Overall , this book doesn't lack ideas but feelings . I sincerely pray for the author's improvement in this area. Also, i hope that i didn’t sound harsh to you ( author) while writing this review. Good luck with your work!
Not gonna lie, but the system Origin and what they do is clearly explained in the novel SOUL OF NEGARY. If you are talking about intelligence and scheming, Negary tops second only to Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity. Gotta say, compared to those guys, this MC is a chick and mostly relies on Luck, which is illusory. You could have tried to solidify it.
Original novel that has been the monotony of the current Webnovels. Only Soul of Negary was similar but unfortunately it has gone to MTL. If your tired of the one dimensional characters that seem to perpetuate Webnovels today, you have to read this.
What makes a story good? to answer this one, you must either use your own bias or use the collective sample of too many people. I will be short and blunt. This story is "good" under my own bias. Everything in this story is so well thought out. the next 200 chapters feel like they were planned in advance while also staying consistent to it's own points. If a character becomes relevant at some point for nearly any reason, they will play a role, and they will play that role to a TEE. a 2-D character will stay as such unless forced to adjust. On a similar note, all 3-D characters will stay consistent to their goal, be it self-preservation or benefit. More than all of that, symbolism and personification, along with other poetic elements, are integrated nearly prefectly. It also has twist like crazy, you can see a twist coming from a mile away, but you very rarely know what it actually is, like a blind spot when you are driving, you can see the blind spot, but don't know what it blocks or what may result of ignoring it. Mind you, this is 100% personal bias, I have no right to talk about if this story is actually "good", because I only speak for my self, if you think this story is also good, like this review to help determine it.
the story is great. just the mc gets o.p and nerfed constantly every single time it really gets old man
Wow, this is the most BASED webnovel sypnosis that I've ever read, and it appeals to someone like me who hates the system trope with a passion. I will put this on my "to read" list and I dear God hope this doesn't disappoint me.
Read untill chapter 653 and honesty the first couple hundred chapters were good but after that it just spiraled out into over explaining things for dozens of chapters in a row and honestly its just super boring with more then half the novel over explaining things that dont need to be explained, im giving this novel a 5 star for respect of the first couple good hundred chapters
tu delhi se hai kya?...........................................................................................................................................................
Does the priviledge reset monthly? .........................................................
Loved it!! Most complex yet sound world building I ever saw. True challanges, crippling dangers, all in all amazing. ............... ...............
Una novela única.Desde el contexto ,desarrolló de habilidades y relaciones entre los personajes permiten ver la profundidad de la historia. La mejor que he visto.
This story has potential, lots of potential. But there are glaring problems too. In the first 500 chapters, till mc destroys all luck systems, story was great. Even though it seemed that mc is getting bizarre powers out of nowhere, still story was interesting as the opponents of mc were too powerful, and mc needed to get such powers to be able to fight. But after 500+ chapters, when mc arrives in the first system world, where slayer etc were born, writing quality takes a dip. it becomes difficult to understand the motivation of various characters, why slayer needs to fight main characters and zaira, the system Lord, at the same time. Since author's writing quality becomes poor at such critical points of story only, it seems that author has become confused, and so he just writes away anything, just to let the characters fight one another, and let action continue. Still having invested so much in the story, it is still interesting to read about the fights and how mc get more and more bizarre powers to be able to win.
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I’v read 60 chapters so far and the novel so far is mid at best but I see potential and love the premise. Can someone tell me where to skip to when it gets more interesting?
Amidst hundreds of "system" novels, an anti-meta champion of a story is born. It relies on said meta to function, bit this story isn't totally one-note either. It's just that the basis for the story is reliant on the system genre existing. Systems are sentient, and very evil, cool concept really. Why are "system" protags always one-dimensional? Because they're the easiest for the systems to control. So our hero readies himself to combat the systems using their own power source, after being condemned by his own system. The first "other world" he enters is actually a fairly interesting setting, not just "medieval" or "cultivation" which has become so broad as to be meaningless. Author has a kinda weird naming sense but at least it's not just "Mike" and the gang. It's pretty early to tell, but if the author keeps this momentum we're looking at a pretty sick story here.
Hello everyone, Author here. After more than four months into serialisation, I decided to tell you what this story is about. Of course, as a webnovel reader, you would have read tens to hundreds of system novels. How many tropes have you seen in them? And, suppose, hypothetically speaking, if you gave a deeper thought to such stories, you'll be met with a question... [Why do Systems always select a trash and help them for no reason?] If you had this question, congrats, then you are a bonafide human and not a chimpanzee. Now, if you were of the superior hooman species, you might also get this question... [From where do the Systems come from? How do they create OP Skills, Techniques, Items, etc. seemingly out of nowhere and give them to the MC?] If you also had this question, then you have earned the curiosity to read this story. The MC here was once a System Host. And, when he reached the peak of his life, he was betrayed by the System. This is where the truth about the Systems would come to light and you'll understand as to why they behave as such in every System Novel you have ever read. And, to achieve his purpose, the MC begins a quest to hunt Systems. But, Systems are cheats, fre*king plot armours. So, it's not possible for a mortal to kill them. And, achieving a method to do so and making it a reality is what this story is about. PS: The MC here has a brain and uses it...a lot. Also, he schemes a lot which needs some understanding to read. So, if you are a reader that loves intelligent stuff, you'll have a blast with this story. But, if you have less than two braincells, please don't read this story. That's all. If you have any questions, please feel free to hit me up here. I'll be answering them as soon as I see them.
I'm short of words, cause anything else would sound cliche. This probably one of the best novels I've ever come across. I think we all would really appreciate it if the Author released more chapters.
Aunque odio los sistemas en la novelas en un 99%, por lo que sería interesante leer una novela que se baza en cazar los, el pro lema de estas novelas son los protagonistas unidimensionales e hipócritas ODIO a los protagonistas hipócritas, psicoticos asesinos, embusteros, en fin que representan a todos las personas que deberían estar presos o muertos, y a aquellos que quieren lograr sus metas a cualquier costo ajeno, tanto como odio el tropo de sistemas y dedos de oro, incluso más, solo me daban Ganas de matar a alguien y me producen asco como representacion de una persona civilizada Premisa interesante, pero si el protagonista es una persona hipócrita que justifica su forma de pensamiento malvada a través de la Protección de seres queridos y metas, no es mi tasa de té, dice mucho que todos los escritores solo puedan escribir protagonistas qué son bastardos y asesinos locos y resentidos con hambre de poder
hope you finish this ..............................................................................................................................................
gonna guve this review 5 star.The author maybe dead but his work is absplute masterpiece. His work is side by side standing alongside reverend insanity,lord of mysteries,Omniscient readers point of view,FFF class trash hero,,Everyone else is a returnee.definitely a must try.1)Multiple power system both unique and common.But the main attraction is the systemss power system.2)Powerful villains. meaning not only brawn but also brain. (but lacks in comprasion Reverend insanity)3)Dives into pretty much every genre.4)You wouldnt stand system genre anymore after this read.5) a unique novel with a new story.
Truly a hidden gem. One of my favourite novels I'm keeping up with. Would recommend! .......................................................................................................................... .........................................................
Pretty good, unfortunately the author got lost in the sauce. After chapter 750 author started taking hallucinating drugs before writting the chapters.
Your story makes me anxious whenever I read another system novel, it gives me anxiety about systems. overall the storys great but I just have a problem with his power of lore it just feels off but I'll keep reading .
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this is good but too much complexity, at some point you will just start losing interest and skip chapters.
It would be nice, if MC was transmigrated as a System(I hate systems omniverse), starting from the lowest/weakest level, slowly becoming the highest/strongest level
This book is innovative. But i'm stuck at chapter 25 and can't continue it. Here are its pros : - The book has original ideas - The Mc is smart - There are many worlds to visit( those who like world-hopping might like that) - The author is active in the comments - The updates are regulars - The writing quality is one of the best on this app Now, the cons : - The characters are unappealing. Honestly, despite knowing the Mc’s goal and despite the prospect of having many other worlds to visit , i didn’t feel interested enough to continue reading. And this is mainly due to the Mc. He doesn't show much personality and is boring .( Even if you wanted him to be a loner most of the time, you could have given him entertaining thoughts, author) It's like he exists only to be an excuse for us to discover the fabulous world that the author has created. What about side characters then? they are worse than the Mc. The book sure does have a good plot. But with characters as shallow, the interest one might have for it is quickly overshadowed by the boredom brought by the characters themselves, and the realisation that they only exist to drive the plot. - The pace is slow. This might equally be a good thing for some. However for me , this-together with the shabby characters - only reinforce the feeling of boredom. - The tone of the book is uniforme. The book always feels serious and it's also boring . Author, you could have tried to write some comic moments to break a bit the feeling of monotony the book gives. Overall , this book doesn't lack ideas but feelings . I sincerely pray for the author's improvement in this area. Also, i hope that i didn’t sound harsh to you ( author) while writing this review. Good luck with your work!
Not gonna lie, but the system Origin and what they do is clearly explained in the novel SOUL OF NEGARY. If you are talking about intelligence and scheming, Negary tops second only to Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity. Gotta say, compared to those guys, this MC is a chick and mostly relies on Luck, which is illusory. You could have tried to solidify it.
Original novel that has been the monotony of the current Webnovels. Only Soul of Negary was similar but unfortunately it has gone to MTL. If your tired of the one dimensional characters that seem to perpetuate Webnovels today, you have to read this.
What makes a story good? to answer this one, you must either use your own bias or use the collective sample of too many people. I will be short and blunt. This story is "good" under my own bias. Everything in this story is so well thought out. the next 200 chapters feel like they were planned in advance while also staying consistent to it's own points. If a character becomes relevant at some point for nearly any reason, they will play a role, and they will play that role to a TEE. a 2-D character will stay as such unless forced to adjust. On a similar note, all 3-D characters will stay consistent to their goal, be it self-preservation or benefit. More than all of that, symbolism and personification, along with other poetic elements, are integrated nearly prefectly. It also has twist like crazy, you can see a twist coming from a mile away, but you very rarely know what it actually is, like a blind spot when you are driving, you can see the blind spot, but don't know what it blocks or what may result of ignoring it. Mind you, this is 100% personal bias, I have no right to talk about if this story is actually "good", because I only speak for my self, if you think this story is also good, like this review to help determine it.
the story is great. just the mc gets o.p and nerfed constantly every single time it really gets old man
Wow, this is the most BASED webnovel sypnosis that I've ever read, and it appeals to someone like me who hates the system trope with a passion. I will put this on my "to read" list and I dear God hope this doesn't disappoint me.
Read untill chapter 653 and honesty the first couple hundred chapters were good but after that it just spiraled out into over explaining things for dozens of chapters in a row and honestly its just super boring with more then half the novel over explaining things that dont need to be explained, im giving this novel a 5 star for respect of the first couple good hundred chapters
tu delhi se hai kya?...........................................................................................................................................................
Does the priviledge reset monthly? .........................................................
Loved it!! Most complex yet sound world building I ever saw. True challanges, crippling dangers, all in all amazing. ............... ...............
Una novela única.Desde el contexto ,desarrolló de habilidades y relaciones entre los personajes permiten ver la profundidad de la historia. La mejor que he visto.
This story has potential, lots of potential. But there are glaring problems too. In the first 500 chapters, till mc destroys all luck systems, story was great. Even though it seemed that mc is getting bizarre powers out of nowhere, still story was interesting as the opponents of mc were too powerful, and mc needed to get such powers to be able to fight. But after 500+ chapters, when mc arrives in the first system world, where slayer etc were born, writing quality takes a dip. it becomes difficult to understand the motivation of various characters, why slayer needs to fight main characters and zaira, the system Lord, at the same time. Since author's writing quality becomes poor at such critical points of story only, it seems that author has become confused, and so he just writes away anything, just to let the characters fight one another, and let action continue. Still having invested so much in the story, it is still interesting to read about the fights and how mc get more and more bizarre powers to be able to win.
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I’v read 60 chapters so far and the novel so far is mid at best but I see potential and love the premise. Can someone tell me where to skip to when it gets more interesting?
Amidst hundreds of "system" novels, an anti-meta champion of a story is born. It relies on said meta to function, bit this story isn't totally one-note either. It's just that the basis for the story is reliant on the system genre existing. Systems are sentient, and very evil, cool concept really. Why are "system" protags always one-dimensional? Because they're the easiest for the systems to control. So our hero readies himself to combat the systems using their own power source, after being condemned by his own system. The first "other world" he enters is actually a fairly interesting setting, not just "medieval" or "cultivation" which has become so broad as to be meaningless. Author has a kinda weird naming sense but at least it's not just "Mike" and the gang. It's pretty early to tell, but if the author keeps this momentum we're looking at a pretty sick story here.