Chapitre 1: What's up with this shit? (edited chapter)
edited chapter
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A heart attack killed me. It was difficult enough for me to climb the stairs of my apartment, due to my lack of physical strength, but everything began to get worse little by little. I felt more tired than usual, I had trouble breathing and I was sweating like a pig over little things.
"What the fuck is wrong with me?" I wondered and immediately decided to google it. It was not good, symptoms of a heart attack.
"B-but I'm still young, I'm twenty years old. It can't be possible!"
I panicked, it was already bad and what I read, ended up driving the last nails in my coffin.
It didn't take long for the inevitable to happen, there began to be a strange pressure in my chest that I had never felt before.
I pressed that area, as if it was going to help me with something! i had to go to a hospital, i had to.
But I didn't have the balls to do such an action, a guy who dropped out of school due to bullying and locked himself up because he was afraid of people, that was me.
I died like a rat, in a room full of garbage and rot. And now i was locked up here, in a darkness that seemed to have no end.
Wherever i looked, all i could see was darkness. There was nothing. I had completely lost track of time, the only thing on my mind was my life before I died.
I saw it through my eyes, if I still had them, my life from beginning to end. I didn't want to die, my life was shit, but it was MY life.
The first time I was here, I screamed like crazy, I thought someone would listen to me, a God maybe.
However, something interrupted my internal monologue. On the horizon, that place that had never changed at all, a dim light that seemed to grow.
'What the fuck is that?' As if in the blink of an eye, the light began to surround me without being able to process it. The white light, which was initially off, became more and more intense. It blinded me… I thought I had no eyes.
I couldn't cover myself, I had no arms and no eyelids. The blinding light surrounded my entire field of vision and I…
......…...
"Waaa, waaaa!"
'What the hell happened?' There was no longer the light of a few moments ago, but there was also no… darkness.
"Waaa, waaa!"
'What is that annoying noise?'
"Waaa, waaaa!"
"Waaa, waaa!
"Waaa, waaa!"
'Wait, are these baby cries?!" It was impossible not to recognize them, those newborn cries.
'But why?'
*PUUUUM*
A loud crash brought me out of my thoughts. I was finally able to figure out the reason for the whimpering.
I realized the heaviness of the environment, there was something in the environment that I had never felt before, feelings of danger, as if someone… wanted to hurt me.
"What the fuck is going on?!" I tried to let out a scream, but I didn't hear what I expected.
"Wa waaa waaa waaaaaa!" Baby squeaks… I tried again and again but nothing changed the result. 'I'm a baby?
I couldn't stop to think about it anymore, the earth began to tremble, strong tremors that were accompanied by noises of destruction.
'A war? An alien invasion? End of the world?'
*CHIIIIR*
'What was that?!'
"!-@-$+*(#//@-#&#&#&'*+@(@(@+#&#+@"
'A person?!' That language is familiar to me.
"j+@-$(#+#&#&#&##+"
'J-Japanese?!' I couldn't be wrong, I had heard that language more than a million times.
Without waiting a second, one of the people who entered took me in his arms.
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