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I hate myself for not reading this with everyone here before. but iam happy very much so that I will read some of your works more and thank you for give me this story I hope more to come after this.
Falta el Tag Villano o por lo menos Anti Héroe. Debilitas al MC deliberadamente para darle peleas mas difíciles, todas las sagas después de la primera son lo mismo, el MC siempre es el mas débil y lo tienen que estar salvando de enemigos demasiado poderosos, es muy aburrido, no se como llegué tan lejos leyendo. El harem del MC es un asco, sus personalidades son horribles especialmente después de reencarnar. Demasiado Drama, los niveles de poder también son ridículos, en cada saga pasa lo mismo, el MC empieza debilitado y cuando encuentra a su novia de ese mundo, ella enojada le da una paliza o no lo recuerda y trata de matarlo. La personalidad del MC también deja mucho que desear, es demasiado hipócrita, en un momento masacra a todo el mundo por su propia mano y después se cree un samaritano que ayuda a los necesitados. Desde mi punto de vista no tendrías que haber empezado con MHA o poner enemigos tan poderosos desde el principio. Lo primero es que el sentido de Justicia de ese mundo limita demasiado las acciones del MC. Lo segundo es porque es demasiado tonto que un adolescente de 15 años con algunos poderes pudiera pelear y vencer a un ejercito de dioses omniversales. Lo que tampoco me gustó fue que le diste demasiado realismo a algunas sagas y mataste o corrompiste a demasiados personajes importantes o queridos por el publico.
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I can't be bothered to make a detailed Review. Overall, If you hate dumb MC don't read this, if you hate dumb story progression don't read this, If you don't hate constant nerf don't read this. Matter of fact if you hate reincarnated adult that act as a kid don't read this.
es demasiado bueno el desarrollo de la historia el manejo de personajes es grandioso también todo tiene su lógica en la historia
DAM this shit was good some parts were unnecessary but dam now Hashirama in one piece connected sheeeeeeet man update it morrrr pls prolly your best sequel Ong Samsara is ok I just don't like that cultivation and way they talk
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A "masterpiece" if you must describe it, although the impression of the story can be considered too fast because it only has 500 chapters in the story, but the author's skill in plotting makes up for it perfectly, I hope you can write consistently like this in your other novels like "Eternal Saṃsāra" for example, unlike your past self who made "THE CURSED GAMER" who didn't care about the heroine in the fanfic, Aqua in "Eternal Saṃsāra" is very disappointing in terms of romance, I hope you can make her (Aquamarine Hoshino) have good character development like he (Neji Hado).
Dunno what to say only good thing is that it’s finished and still not going on. Lots of brain dead writing and plot holes in every chapter
Overall, it was a very good story. Binged it in just about a week. Only gripe is that the editing can be a little jarring. Grammar issues, misspelling, writer getting character genders mixed up, etc. Still worth.
Finally, I ended this masterpiece! All parts of story that I don't get at first finally came to me. Actually, I thought that I would drop it in the mid-way, but I bear it through my all cries and hates. And, yeah, after ending it I felt like I have achieved an inner peace like Shifu from Kung-Fu Panda! For people, who will start to read it soon, I will give a little bit of advice. Do not drop it, read it, bear it! All parts of puzzle will come soon as you continue to read it to the end of the story. As Shifu said, inner peace will come to you after a long time of meditating, in our case, reading!
I read till ch 246. Till this chapter the story was good, not just good it was superb and I would have continued but Author 4thWall why? Why did you do that idiotic thing. (Spoiler) just killing the two kyubbi human would have been good or taking theirs powers, BUT WHY? Why did u chain the girls and let the whole town see them naked. ( the girls he let the whole town see naked were someone he liked at least one ) They were his maid and yes punishment is necessary for what they did but at the end of the day it’s HIS GIRLS. I didn’t read after this chapter, i can’t because I feel betrayed how your writing fell so low. If anyone can tell me that he killed them or what happened afterwards which can make me think that this whole this was valid I would really appreciate it. Thanks for reading till now and I will wait for your response.
One of the best I’ve read on here. Minor spelling mistakes, fights scenes are dope, and it was very well planned out. Binged it in 3 days, I was hooked.
good good good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Yeah, man! I'm gonna end this masterpiece soon. Actually, the author has his own way of writing and describing those worlds, aka multiverse, and it is fascinating me a lot!!! In the beginning, I thought it would be a pretty basic gamer based FF. However, I've already been wrong in the beginning. It's more than a piece of the author's thoughts that means that it is the whole world with its own beings, and the gamer, aka Neji Hado, is representing it with his own eyes.
Actually, I had complex feelings through reading this fanfic, but the plot actually excited me to the fullest! Also, I will say that "The Cursed Gamer" has its own place in my heart. I felt so much that it is hard to explain those living emotions that have flowed up from my soul. Also, I thank the author for his work on that actual book, if it can be described as well.[img=Sigh]
That's amazing, that's amazing... I would like to say it one hundred time. Because this fanfic has it own life even without Heji(main character)!
This fanfic is worth 5 stars. Actually, I had thought that it would not be so fascinating at the beginning, but by continuing my reading, I had come to the conclusion that I was wrong! Let's describe the main character. The main character is Neji Hado or "Gamer". He doesn't have access to mana, but it can't stop him from becoming a powerful being in his world. His harem is not small, but the way he controls it, not keeping me to hate this ff. Okay, and also, I like that he is progressing really fast. But by thinking of Gods invading his world, it would not be so extremely fast, as it can be shown at first sight. So, I will keep reading it to know what he's gonna do next.[img=Feeling it]
You cooked with this one bro. This is one hell of a masterpiece, tho bumpy at the beginning it became a novel worth reading through the journey. I gotta say, thank you for creating novels man.
This story has nothing to save it, the protagonist is a self-conscious egoist, he has no charisma or a goal you can empathize with, he's just a woman and being a god, the antagonists are incredible idiots, the romance doesn't - existing
Master4thWall is actually better at writing than 99% of story tellers nowadays. Thanks again author, you did amazing work.
Simply fascinating, I have nothing more to say. ..............................................................,.............................................................
Disappointed, I save this in my library for a long time and forget about it….im glad I did (Mc was unbearable for me nothing wrong with the story)
was not expecting to get Rick Rolled when I was about to give a review but oh well. 🥲 Anyways take this G
It’s a good read if you like gamer system story’s it’s not fast paced and it’s really well written tbh. The plot twists were so good as well as the mcs power growth. He wasn’t too op at the start and got progressively stronger. One of the best story’s that have multiple gods involved with a clear power scaling and isn’t messy like other fanfics with multiple gods involved. Overall 10/10 tbh
довольно хороший ?фанфик? хотя наблюдались некоторые проблемы с сюжетом -в основном довольно хорошо написанное произведение . пожалуйста мне не понравился только мир наруто и довольно клише финал уровня "люк -я твой отец... ".и мне сложно дать пяти балльную оценку - но для меня это 7.5/10
I hate myself for not reading this with everyone here before. but iam happy very much so that I will read some of your works more and thank you for give me this story I hope more to come after this.
Falta el Tag Villano o por lo menos Anti Héroe. Debilitas al MC deliberadamente para darle peleas mas difíciles, todas las sagas después de la primera son lo mismo, el MC siempre es el mas débil y lo tienen que estar salvando de enemigos demasiado poderosos, es muy aburrido, no se como llegué tan lejos leyendo. El harem del MC es un asco, sus personalidades son horribles especialmente después de reencarnar. Demasiado Drama, los niveles de poder también son ridículos, en cada saga pasa lo mismo, el MC empieza debilitado y cuando encuentra a su novia de ese mundo, ella enojada le da una paliza o no lo recuerda y trata de matarlo. La personalidad del MC también deja mucho que desear, es demasiado hipócrita, en un momento masacra a todo el mundo por su propia mano y después se cree un samaritano que ayuda a los necesitados. Desde mi punto de vista no tendrías que haber empezado con MHA o poner enemigos tan poderosos desde el principio. Lo primero es que el sentido de Justicia de ese mundo limita demasiado las acciones del MC. Lo segundo es porque es demasiado tonto que un adolescente de 15 años con algunos poderes pudiera pelear y vencer a un ejercito de dioses omniversales. Lo que tampoco me gustó fue que le diste demasiado realismo a algunas sagas y mataste o corrompiste a demasiados personajes importantes o queridos por el publico.
Spoiler de révélation I can't be bothered to make a detailed Review. Overall, If you hate dumb MC don't read this, if you hate dumb story progression don't read this, If you don't hate constant nerf don't read this. Matter of fact if you hate reincarnated adult that act as a kid don't read this.
es demasiado bueno el desarrollo de la historia el manejo de personajes es grandioso también todo tiene su lógica en la historia
DAM this shit was good some parts were unnecessary but dam now Hashirama in one piece connected sheeeeeeet man update it morrrr pls prolly your best sequel Ong Samsara is ok I just don't like that cultivation and way they talk
Spoiler de révélation A "masterpiece" if you must describe it, although the impression of the story can be considered too fast because it only has 500 chapters in the story, but the author's skill in plotting makes up for it perfectly, I hope you can write consistently like this in your other novels like "Eternal Saṃsāra" for example, unlike your past self who made "THE CURSED GAMER" who didn't care about the heroine in the fanfic, Aqua in "Eternal Saṃsāra" is very disappointing in terms of romance, I hope you can make her (Aquamarine Hoshino) have good character development like he (Neji Hado).
Dunno what to say only good thing is that it’s finished and still not going on. Lots of brain dead writing and plot holes in every chapter
Overall, it was a very good story. Binged it in just about a week. Only gripe is that the editing can be a little jarring. Grammar issues, misspelling, writer getting character genders mixed up, etc. Still worth.
Finally, I ended this masterpiece! All parts of story that I don't get at first finally came to me. Actually, I thought that I would drop it in the mid-way, but I bear it through my all cries and hates. And, yeah, after ending it I felt like I have achieved an inner peace like Shifu from Kung-Fu Panda! For people, who will start to read it soon, I will give a little bit of advice. Do not drop it, read it, bear it! All parts of puzzle will come soon as you continue to read it to the end of the story. As Shifu said, inner peace will come to you after a long time of meditating, in our case, reading!
I read till ch 246. Till this chapter the story was good, not just good it was superb and I would have continued but Author 4thWall why? Why did you do that idiotic thing. (Spoiler) just killing the two kyubbi human would have been good or taking theirs powers, BUT WHY? Why did u chain the girls and let the whole town see them naked. ( the girls he let the whole town see naked were someone he liked at least one ) They were his maid and yes punishment is necessary for what they did but at the end of the day it’s HIS GIRLS. I didn’t read after this chapter, i can’t because I feel betrayed how your writing fell so low. If anyone can tell me that he killed them or what happened afterwards which can make me think that this whole this was valid I would really appreciate it. Thanks for reading till now and I will wait for your response.
One of the best I’ve read on here. Minor spelling mistakes, fights scenes are dope, and it was very well planned out. Binged it in 3 days, I was hooked.
good good good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Yeah, man! I'm gonna end this masterpiece soon. Actually, the author has his own way of writing and describing those worlds, aka multiverse, and it is fascinating me a lot!!! In the beginning, I thought it would be a pretty basic gamer based FF. However, I've already been wrong in the beginning. It's more than a piece of the author's thoughts that means that it is the whole world with its own beings, and the gamer, aka Neji Hado, is representing it with his own eyes.
Actually, I had complex feelings through reading this fanfic, but the plot actually excited me to the fullest! Also, I will say that "The Cursed Gamer" has its own place in my heart. I felt so much that it is hard to explain those living emotions that have flowed up from my soul. Also, I thank the author for his work on that actual book, if it can be described as well.[img=Sigh]
That's amazing, that's amazing... I would like to say it one hundred time. Because this fanfic has it own life even without Heji(main character)!
This fanfic is worth 5 stars. Actually, I had thought that it would not be so fascinating at the beginning, but by continuing my reading, I had come to the conclusion that I was wrong! Let's describe the main character. The main character is Neji Hado or "Gamer". He doesn't have access to mana, but it can't stop him from becoming a powerful being in his world. His harem is not small, but the way he controls it, not keeping me to hate this ff. Okay, and also, I like that he is progressing really fast. But by thinking of Gods invading his world, it would not be so extremely fast, as it can be shown at first sight. So, I will keep reading it to know what he's gonna do next.[img=Feeling it]
You cooked with this one bro. This is one hell of a masterpiece, tho bumpy at the beginning it became a novel worth reading through the journey. I gotta say, thank you for creating novels man.
This story has nothing to save it, the protagonist is a self-conscious egoist, he has no charisma or a goal you can empathize with, he's just a woman and being a god, the antagonists are incredible idiots, the romance doesn't - existing
Master4thWall is actually better at writing than 99% of story tellers nowadays. Thanks again author, you did amazing work.
Simply fascinating, I have nothing more to say. ..............................................................,.............................................................
Disappointed, I save this in my library for a long time and forget about it….im glad I did (Mc was unbearable for me nothing wrong with the story)
was not expecting to get Rick Rolled when I was about to give a review but oh well. 🥲 Anyways take this G
It’s a good read if you like gamer system story’s it’s not fast paced and it’s really well written tbh. The plot twists were so good as well as the mcs power growth. He wasn’t too op at the start and got progressively stronger. One of the best story’s that have multiple gods involved with a clear power scaling and isn’t messy like other fanfics with multiple gods involved. Overall 10/10 tbh
довольно хороший ?фанфик? хотя наблюдались некоторые проблемы с сюжетом -в основном довольно хорошо написанное произведение . пожалуйста мне не понравился только мир наруто и довольно клише финал уровня "люк -я твой отец... ".и мне сложно дать пяти балльную оценку - но для меня это 7.5/10