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I don't know if its intentional or not but if you open this novel on a browser tab you can see what the translator wants us to do on the top
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To be fair, you most likely clicked on this book because it has a word alchemist in the title. Story is pretty anticlimatic and fun. The alchemy in here is more along the lines of alchemy from the Fullmetall alchemist, rather than typical eastern one, but the process is more complicated to normal people. It does have potions and mixtures as one of its branches. Is it worth reading? Yes, it is a bit generic, as far as transmigrations go, but it may let you enjoy some time you are free to spend on it.
Witty storyline, great character development. Author needs to work on his pronouns but I have noticed this to be a problem in alot of the translating cpncerning his and her, he and she.
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I think the story is kind of good, but could use some work and isn't very interesting. I might recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Webnovel doesn't understand that it has become monotonous and boring. but these novels still keep coming, i reckon there is no quality control on webnovel
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Interesting take on alchemy compared to other CN stuff. It needs some TLC in the editing department. All in all, I'm intrigued with the story so far even with inconsistencies.
This story is moving fast but content is top notch so reading it will be like wholesome. So read it and enjoy it give support to Author. ...........
我，神级炼金师！ Link viajó al mundo de las espadas y la magia y se convirtió en aprendiz de alquimia. Pero Link no esperaba que su maestro fuera un mentiroso. En realidad usó alquimia inferior para enfrentar un imperio. Cuando la otra parte llegó a la puerta, el maestro de Link estaba muerto de miedo debido a una recaída de un ataque al corazón, dejándolo con un puesto de lan. Al ver que estaba a punto de ser atrapado por la gente del gran imperio y enviado al marco de tortura, finalmente activó el sistema de alquimista de nivel dios y obtuvo la plataforma de alquimia del creador. Todo se puede hacer. Black Yao Gargoyle, Thunder Naga, Iron Giant, ...[img = palmada]
I really love alchemist profession because of Xiao Yan of BTTH, i really hope this new book of alchemist last long and the TL would continue translating this please feed us more chapters
El mal no siempre se puede sentir. Es posible esconderlo, si eres cuidadoso y hábil. (Blood-C) gran historia hasta ahora, pero recientemente webnovel te ilusiona y luego te saca lágrimas de frustración, tampoco entiendo porque abandonan los nombres originales de las historias algunos son felices con auto spoiler unos avaros xd.
Great novel. Lots of interesting plots and characters. Great 👍 job author 👌 and thank you for your hard work and time to produce this art 🎭
Its good so far but it kinda sucks that Mas(the MC) is completely reliant on the system and doesn't even try to learn alchemy properly. What if the sytem goes offline in the future during a time where he urgently needs it? Plus since the process happens in an instant inside the system if he ever takes on a disiple its not like he could show or guide them through the process of creating something. The only thing he could do is rely on the system to provide a recipe and show off the final product.
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The novel is only so-so. There are flaws with logic and overall there's no depth. Just gain a system and become cocky overnight. He was so desperate before obtaining it... and is still stupid after obtaining it.
A l'air cool ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
MC to naive and simple minded, he should ask for every information related everything he needs in detail. It should make the story more interesting if MC is clever, cool, calm, and confident..
[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] HONESTLY CAN'T TELL MUCH SINCE LESS CHAPTERS BUT I LOVE SYNTHESIS AND SUCH NOVELS ESPECIALLY ONES IN MAGIC AND KNIGHTS WORLD 😇😇
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I hate you, you got my hopes up talking about alchemy but it’s really just a monster factory novel. this is a disgrace to the word alchemy, alchemy should be classified as ether pill or potion concocting. Ok rant over, lol.
very good, adequately sized chapters, interesting characters, story with no obvious clichés, no irrelevant chapters to fill, I'm looking forward to the next chapters
I like this novel but translation was a major quizz for me. Hope it get picked and please stick with the tag no harem or the story may sound more ridiculous like every novel. I really love the story with this system which is compatible.
I think this novel has potential but the translation errors are crippling it. The system that the MC receives is OP but it plays a minor role in the plot. I am interested to see how Mas (MC) develops. As I mentioned before there are translation errors that start to ruin the immersion of the story. If it does get picked I hope that the quality increases. Overall I enjoyed this in spite of the errors. It would probably be amazing if it was better translated.
I want more of this novel Some translation issurs but pretty minir and things ive seen before Hopefully this gEts picked up 140 is way too much
This novel is simple garbage....i have never felt so frustrated reading a novel in my life...by the time you read up to chapter 12 you will understand 🤧🤧i dropped it at 12
I don't know if its intentional or not but if you open this novel on a browser tab you can see what the translator wants us to do on the top
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To be fair, you most likely clicked on this book because it has a word alchemist in the title. Story is pretty anticlimatic and fun. The alchemy in here is more along the lines of alchemy from the Fullmetall alchemist, rather than typical eastern one, but the process is more complicated to normal people. It does have potions and mixtures as one of its branches. Is it worth reading? Yes, it is a bit generic, as far as transmigrations go, but it may let you enjoy some time you are free to spend on it.
Witty storyline, great character development. Author needs to work on his pronouns but I have noticed this to be a problem in alot of the translating cpncerning his and her, he and she.
Spoiler de révélation I think the story is kind of good, but could use some work and isn't very interesting. I might recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
Webnovel doesn't understand that it has become monotonous and boring. but these novels still keep coming, i reckon there is no quality control on webnovel
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No more chapters??? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
MORE CHAPTERS..................................................................................................................................
Interesting take on alchemy compared to other CN stuff. It needs some TLC in the editing department. All in all, I'm intrigued with the story so far even with inconsistencies.
This story is moving fast but content is top notch so reading it will be like wholesome. So read it and enjoy it give support to Author. ...........
我，神级炼金师！ Link viajó al mundo de las espadas y la magia y se convirtió en aprendiz de alquimia. Pero Link no esperaba que su maestro fuera un mentiroso. En realidad usó alquimia inferior para enfrentar un imperio. Cuando la otra parte llegó a la puerta, el maestro de Link estaba muerto de miedo debido a una recaída de un ataque al corazón, dejándolo con un puesto de lan. Al ver que estaba a punto de ser atrapado por la gente del gran imperio y enviado al marco de tortura, finalmente activó el sistema de alquimista de nivel dios y obtuvo la plataforma de alquimia del creador. Todo se puede hacer. Black Yao Gargoyle, Thunder Naga, Iron Giant, ...[img = palmada]
I really love alchemist profession because of Xiao Yan of BTTH, i really hope this new book of alchemist last long and the TL would continue translating this please feed us more chapters
El mal no siempre se puede sentir. Es posible esconderlo, si eres cuidadoso y hábil. (Blood-C) gran historia hasta ahora, pero recientemente webnovel te ilusiona y luego te saca lágrimas de frustración, tampoco entiendo porque abandonan los nombres originales de las historias algunos son felices con auto spoiler unos avaros xd.
Great novel. Lots of interesting plots and characters. Great 👍 job author 👌 and thank you for your hard work and time to produce this art 🎭
Its good so far but it kinda sucks that Mas(the MC) is completely reliant on the system and doesn't even try to learn alchemy properly. What if the sytem goes offline in the future during a time where he urgently needs it? Plus since the process happens in an instant inside the system if he ever takes on a disiple its not like he could show or guide them through the process of creating something. The only thing he could do is rely on the system to provide a recipe and show off the final product.
[img=faceslap][img = palmada][img = palmada][img = palmada][img = palmada][img = palmada][img = palmada][img = palmada][img = palmada][img = palmada][img = palmada][img = palmada][img = palmada]
Spoiler de révélation The novel is only so-so. There are flaws with logic and overall there's no depth. Just gain a system and become cocky overnight. He was so desperate before obtaining it... and is still stupid after obtaining it.
A l'air cool ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
MC to naive and simple minded, he should ask for every information related everything he needs in detail. It should make the story more interesting if MC is clever, cool, calm, and confident..
[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] HONESTLY CAN'T TELL MUCH SINCE LESS CHAPTERS BUT I LOVE SYNTHESIS AND SUCH NOVELS ESPECIALLY ONES IN MAGIC AND KNIGHTS WORLD 😇😇
Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support Five Star support
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I hate you, you got my hopes up talking about alchemy but it’s really just a monster factory novel. this is a disgrace to the word alchemy, alchemy should be classified as ether pill or potion concocting. Ok rant over, lol.
very good, adequately sized chapters, interesting characters, story with no obvious clichés, no irrelevant chapters to fill, I'm looking forward to the next chapters
I like this novel but translation was a major quizz for me. Hope it get picked and please stick with the tag no harem or the story may sound more ridiculous like every novel. I really love the story with this system which is compatible.
I think this novel has potential but the translation errors are crippling it. The system that the MC receives is OP but it plays a minor role in the plot. I am interested to see how Mas (MC) develops. As I mentioned before there are translation errors that start to ruin the immersion of the story. If it does get picked I hope that the quality increases. Overall I enjoyed this in spite of the errors. It would probably be amazing if it was better translated.
I want more of this novel Some translation issurs but pretty minir and things ive seen before Hopefully this gEts picked up 140 is way too much
This novel is simple garbage....i have never felt so frustrated reading a novel in my life...by the time you read up to chapter 12 you will understand 🤧🤧i dropped it at 12