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Allow me to throw my review for this WONDERFUL novel!! Even though there aren't a lot to say but I'LL SAY IT!!! THIS NOVEL IS SO WORTH IT & I HIGHLY RECOMMEND IT ! ! ! (No force, it's your choice if you want to give it a shot or nah but you're the loser if you don't kek) Comedy is at the head of the list ! ! ! If you're looking for a silly MC who picks the WORST decisions then you are at the right place 😂😂 !!! There is also slight angst which is refreshing! & to not forget romance & feelings between characters (that some are complicated & that's what makes it GOOD!) (oh & obsessed ML too) The development in both characters & the world they're in is getting more & more interesting with the flashbacks TOO that get you more attached, to know how, why & who.
I RECENTLY STEP UPON THIS NOVEL AND SERIOUSLY I AM LOVING IT!!!! reading this left me squealing over the characters, they are all just too lovable!! the characters, the comedy, the storylines, everything about it I LOVE IT! (ᇴᴗᇴ)❤️
Everything about this novel is perfection, I love it so much. It does not update very fast, but that is probably because of the author's other successful works. Have patience and enjoy the others too 😊
I like it, I wish I had more coins. I also wish that it had been more detailed about systems abilities. Chapter up to 80.
I made it to chapter 86 (first ark still). I liked this book starting out. You could tell the author had put thought into it and the characters and world felt fleshed out. Some of the interactions between characters were a bit odd at first, like the author was leaving the character roles open before deciding on who they would be to the MC (like who treats their brother like that?). Forgivable. Testing the waters is normal. Then the writing style changed to tv action/hero perspective. It wasnt all that bad at first. The scenes weren’t very descriptive and there was a lot of dialog. Not bad, there just wasn’t a lot of context on the expressions and emotion of the dialog. Then, then the whole thing turned into a weird action/hero teen drama. What was that marvel like backstory/setup? Bro, why is there so much awkward back and forth between the characters? Some scenes repeated (when Z watches himself use powers with A). There’s a lot of push and pull that could be shortened and adultified to make it more cohesive. Honestly, around chapter 50ish the characters start to feel like the same person. Before that they only felt a little OOC occasionally. Also, dear author, please get an editor. There were some jumbled sentences and sad structures. It was a bit painful. It started good, got not so good, and I don’t have the patience for it to get better. I appreciate the time and effort it took to write it all up though. Hope the author gets more sleep and a good editor d;
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the plot is amazing you don't get a chance to be bored the comedy the drama there is nothing about this book that t I don't like
Everything about this novel is perfection. Except, waiting for a new chapter is exhausting.
If you want a story where your squeeing In the corner of the room from the cuteness, looking like someone put down your dog randomly, as your heavily invested in well developed characters then this is for you!! highly recommended, I'm still melting from the adorablenss. please support this author, they are so wonderful.
I love this book and I also absolutely love the concept of this book I'm only halfway through ❤️ so I thought to just write a review. The work is amazing keep up the good work author I had moments I was randomly laughing out loud or giggling yk yk but there were also moments 😅 especially In the beginning where I was confused abt weather the mc is top or bottom or is the ml his brother or the kfc frier guy lol I forgot the name ahhaha this shows sometimes my brain stopps working but it was fun I loveddddd ittt ❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗
I love everything about this novel! The characters, the storyline, etc. I looked forward to each chapter. I hope you can continue with more chapters so we can read the final outcome.
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A very interesting idea, normally I read system novels, but actually having a novel where the system is the MC is a nice twist, really enjoy the novel and the pace of the story, character development is great and the way the author writes from the perspective of the system is really well done
So far so good! Actually, this novel is better than good! It's GREAT!! Both the plot and the writing is uber good!!! Just one thing that's really hard for me to deal with is, how long the update is taking... SUPER SLOW... Brace yourselves.
Up till chapter 70. The story is great, the characters are funny and cute, it’s well written and update regularly... what’s there more to say ? Just read it you would miss on a lot if you don’t 😊
Don't mind me, I'm just here to praise. Kudos to our awesome Author for bringing us another lovable story...full of characters with their own story to tell...I love them all but I fell in love at first read with the big twin brother 😍💞 And I hope that whatever happens, our MC would remain good as he is and let not any of the misery in his life change him for the worse, only for the best as he deserves together with his big twin brother.
i have not laughed any much in a long time ... trust me when I say this isn't a cookie cutter plot. unlike other transmigration stories this one carries a unique semi of the original and new world that work well together...
Am having a blast reading this! Not only is it unique in its story, but it is also a hilarious read! Best yet, it's free! Thank you Author for writing this amazing story. I don't regret reading it at all and I am looking forward to new chapters!
This book is phenomenal! I find myself on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen next quite often. The characters are so interesting, the story is unique, and I am loving it so much! Highly recommend!
you want something adorable, bold, funny, powerful, yet sweet, this is the book for you! The writing is wonderful, the If character development is excellent and the imagery is breathtaking! Get ready for the ride of a lifetime, with amazing surprises at every turn!Lula is an amazing author! I recommend you do yourself solid and devour everything she writes.
This book is phenomenal! I find myself on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen next quite often. The characters are so interesting, the story is unique, and I am loving it so much! Highly recommend !
I can't believe this!!! am I dreaming right now?! OOV Thank you so much dear author for publishing this novel here V I can't wait to I know start another journey with you this novel will be amazing, didn't regret reading any of your previous novels and and I'm sure I won't regret reading this one 100 Thank you again dear Lula
Loving this book so far. My favorite author you are so talented. All of your books are amazing and so well written. This story is leaving me wanting more. I jump right to this story once a chapter has been updated.
Always love the writing. story is in the early stages but developing quite nicely! I cant wait to see how the characters evolve. Love love love it!
I recently started reading this novel and it really caught me off guard. I have read other novels by Author and I love them all. The way she writes the whole thing will do magic to you. You will fall for the novel, the characters, and everything. The way she describes the scene it's so remarkable that you can imagine that happening in front of you. Love her works eee You are my fav Author O00
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So far the book has been amazing (≧▽≦)can't really say much about the beginning part but once you get into it you find out that it's a really nice book and I hope it won't be dropped and will get more ratings. <(￣︶￣)>
i saw no one wrote anything, hope u give this a chance its very nice read for now at least. As it's only at th ebegining cant say mich but the idea is nice, and mc has to descover his so called new body. Very interesting i hope it didnt get dropped
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this book!! I'm seriously obsessed! It's simply captivating. I love Lullabybao's other too! I read a lot different novels and one is certainly in my top 5!
Allow me to throw my review for this WONDERFUL novel!! Even though there aren't a lot to say but I'LL SAY IT!!! THIS NOVEL IS SO WORTH IT & I HIGHLY RECOMMEND IT ! ! ! (No force, it's your choice if you want to give it a shot or nah but you're the loser if you don't kek) Comedy is at the head of the list ! ! ! If you're looking for a silly MC who picks the WORST decisions then you are at the right place 😂😂 !!! There is also slight angst which is refreshing! & to not forget romance & feelings between characters (that some are complicated & that's what makes it GOOD!) (oh & obsessed ML too) The development in both characters & the world they're in is getting more & more interesting with the flashbacks TOO that get you more attached, to know how, why & who.
I RECENTLY STEP UPON THIS NOVEL AND SERIOUSLY I AM LOVING IT!!!! reading this left me squealing over the characters, they are all just too lovable!! the characters, the comedy, the storylines, everything about it I LOVE IT! (ᇴᴗᇴ)❤️
Everything about this novel is perfection, I love it so much. It does not update very fast, but that is probably because of the author's other successful works. Have patience and enjoy the others too 😊
I like it, I wish I had more coins. I also wish that it had been more detailed about systems abilities. Chapter up to 80.
I made it to chapter 86 (first ark still). I liked this book starting out. You could tell the author had put thought into it and the characters and world felt fleshed out. Some of the interactions between characters were a bit odd at first, like the author was leaving the character roles open before deciding on who they would be to the MC (like who treats their brother like that?). Forgivable. Testing the waters is normal. Then the writing style changed to tv action/hero perspective. It wasnt all that bad at first. The scenes weren’t very descriptive and there was a lot of dialog. Not bad, there just wasn’t a lot of context on the expressions and emotion of the dialog. Then, then the whole thing turned into a weird action/hero teen drama. What was that marvel like backstory/setup? Bro, why is there so much awkward back and forth between the characters? Some scenes repeated (when Z watches himself use powers with A). There’s a lot of push and pull that could be shortened and adultified to make it more cohesive. Honestly, around chapter 50ish the characters start to feel like the same person. Before that they only felt a little OOC occasionally. Also, dear author, please get an editor. There were some jumbled sentences and sad structures. It was a bit painful. It started good, got not so good, and I don’t have the patience for it to get better. I appreciate the time and effort it took to write it all up though. Hope the author gets more sleep and a good editor d;
Spoiler de révélation the plot is amazing you don't get a chance to be bored the comedy the drama there is nothing about this book that t I don't like
Everything about this novel is perfection. Except, waiting for a new chapter is exhausting.
If you want a story where your squeeing In the corner of the room from the cuteness, looking like someone put down your dog randomly, as your heavily invested in well developed characters then this is for you!! highly recommended, I'm still melting from the adorablenss. please support this author, they are so wonderful.
I love this book and I also absolutely love the concept of this book I'm only halfway through ❤️ so I thought to just write a review. The work is amazing keep up the good work author I had moments I was randomly laughing out loud or giggling yk yk but there were also moments 😅 especially In the beginning where I was confused abt weather the mc is top or bottom or is the ml his brother or the kfc frier guy lol I forgot the name ahhaha this shows sometimes my brain stopps working but it was fun I loveddddd ittt ❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗
I love everything about this novel! The characters, the storyline, etc. I looked forward to each chapter. I hope you can continue with more chapters so we can read the final outcome.
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A very interesting idea, normally I read system novels, but actually having a novel where the system is the MC is a nice twist, really enjoy the novel and the pace of the story, character development is great and the way the author writes from the perspective of the system is really well done
So far so good! Actually, this novel is better than good! It's GREAT!! Both the plot and the writing is uber good!!! Just one thing that's really hard for me to deal with is, how long the update is taking... SUPER SLOW... Brace yourselves.
Up till chapter 70. The story is great, the characters are funny and cute, it’s well written and update regularly... what’s there more to say ? Just read it you would miss on a lot if you don’t 😊
Don't mind me, I'm just here to praise. Kudos to our awesome Author for bringing us another lovable story...full of characters with their own story to tell...I love them all but I fell in love at first read with the big twin brother 😍💞 And I hope that whatever happens, our MC would remain good as he is and let not any of the misery in his life change him for the worse, only for the best as he deserves together with his big twin brother.
i have not laughed any much in a long time ... trust me when I say this isn't a cookie cutter plot. unlike other transmigration stories this one carries a unique semi of the original and new world that work well together...
Am having a blast reading this! Not only is it unique in its story, but it is also a hilarious read! Best yet, it's free! Thank you Author for writing this amazing story. I don't regret reading it at all and I am looking forward to new chapters!
This book is phenomenal! I find myself on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen next quite often. The characters are so interesting, the story is unique, and I am loving it so much! Highly recommend!
you want something adorable, bold, funny, powerful, yet sweet, this is the book for you! The writing is wonderful, the If character development is excellent and the imagery is breathtaking! Get ready for the ride of a lifetime, with amazing surprises at every turn!Lula is an amazing author! I recommend you do yourself solid and devour everything she writes.
This book is phenomenal! I find myself on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen next quite often. The characters are so interesting, the story is unique, and I am loving it so much! Highly recommend !
I can't believe this!!! am I dreaming right now?! OOV Thank you so much dear author for publishing this novel here V I can't wait to I know start another journey with you this novel will be amazing, didn't regret reading any of your previous novels and and I'm sure I won't regret reading this one 100 Thank you again dear Lula
Loving this book so far. My favorite author you are so talented. All of your books are amazing and so well written. This story is leaving me wanting more. I jump right to this story once a chapter has been updated.
Always love the writing. story is in the early stages but developing quite nicely! I cant wait to see how the characters evolve. Love love love it!
I recently started reading this novel and it really caught me off guard. I have read other novels by Author and I love them all. The way she writes the whole thing will do magic to you. You will fall for the novel, the characters, and everything. The way she describes the scene it's so remarkable that you can imagine that happening in front of you. Love her works eee You are my fav Author O00
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So far the book has been amazing (≧▽≦)can't really say much about the beginning part but once you get into it you find out that it's a really nice book and I hope it won't be dropped and will get more ratings. <(￣︶￣)>
i saw no one wrote anything, hope u give this a chance its very nice read for now at least. As it's only at th ebegining cant say mich but the idea is nice, and mc has to descover his so called new body. Very interesting i hope it didnt get dropped
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this book!! I'm seriously obsessed! It's simply captivating. I love Lullabybao's other too! I read a lot different novels and one is certainly in my top 5!