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Writing Quality 1 Stability of Updates 3 Story Development 1 Character Design 2 World Background 0
I always stop reading this for months just to get that new feeling and it’s always better
the story is not bad but what it says ...,.,.,.,..,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,.,.,..,,..,.,,..,.,.,,..,.,,..,,..,,.,..,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,,..,.,,.,.,.,.,.
I love it, the mc is hilarious and the story is just perfect, I lost all hope for fanfics but this brought it back
story was very childish at first but later on very genius and amazing but unfortunately since this fanfic has been drop so i will give low rating. why is this fanfic dropped? because theres only 100 chapters currently but on other sites this fanfic has already reached 164 chapters and was confirmed dropped by many sites.
Is it true the author is dead? ? '! $) #) #) ) $) )''==$$==$) $=*=#=#=#=*) *) *) *) "+" =*=**) *) **='==' ) :: )_=='=##==$=&_=&==&=&=' )*'! '? #) #
not bad at start but dropped in quality by 20ish chapter MC is an adult in child's body yet still willingly gets involved in idiotic fights with regular people which serves 0 purpose other than word count MC tells it how it is but moment gets given food can't say no illogical doesn't try in his time to use knowledge of other world to make money that advance his studies, martial arts, protection etc etc
summary of this fanfic: "cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough"
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i realy like it and i realy want more hope this gets a part 2 i dont know what to tell more just give it a try and read it :DDDDDDDDDDDDD
Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente
Really good hopefully you add more chaps ….….…… . . . .… . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
This is honestly one of the best fanfics I’ve read in a while I hope he hasn’t dropped…. . . . . . . . … . . . . . . .… . . . . . . . .
I like it, the grammar is good and readable, the characters are fluid and developed nicely, the story is entertaining, and the MC is absolutely hilarious. All in all a really good read
so this is my first time actually reviewing a story on here and I'm doing it for one reason, and one reason only. I WANT THIS FREAKING BOOK OFF OF HIATUS
Around 95 and 97 I lost interest due to the fact that he had his hokage position taken as punishment for killing danzo even though it was justified and being forced to leave the village by those ranked lower than him.
He got permission so I'm remaking this review [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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There are about 80 good chapters which for a fanfic is pretty good, but remember, fanfics will always be fanfics, if it isn't bad at the beggining it's only a matter of time until it's ruined, if you read chapter 96 you'll understand, I'm dissapointed but what can I do? Anyways, peace out
well I like that's novel🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
well i got to say it been a while since ive read such a funny fanfic, the way the mc acts is really funny, hope you can keep doing the story
I read this fic once before and thank you for bringing it back.Continue this please👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
💪🔥🖤Awsome Naruto Fanfic 🖤🔥👍Good story, Good Characters, Good Comedy.All perfectly balanced fanfic. 🐍🐲🐉🐍🐲🐉🐍🐲🐉🐍🐲🐉🐍🐲🐉🐍🐲🐉
Pretty good fanfic. It's solid and fun, without overpowered stuff and no system, and that made a huge +1 to me. [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Started out strong. but ever since the mc became a "puppet hokage" i mean it was a good idea but it just seemed rush a after chunin exams or a 12 yrs old sasuke with mangekyo should not and cannot defeat danzo plus sasuke just suddenly having a susanno and using amaterasu with no drawback is dumb.
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Hmm this actually pretty good___________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good stuff! High-quality comedy and fun to read.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I am taking permission of author so I will upload in webnovel. If anybody from now on mention that I stole the story. Then f**k off. I don't care
Okay... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Writing Quality 1 Stability of Updates 3 Story Development 1 Character Design 2 World Background 0
I always stop reading this for months just to get that new feeling and it’s always better
the story is not bad but what it says ...,.,.,.,..,.,.,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,,..,,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,.,.,..,,..,.,,..,.,.,,..,.,,..,,..,,.,..,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,,..,.,,.,.,.,.,.
I love it, the mc is hilarious and the story is just perfect, I lost all hope for fanfics but this brought it back
story was very childish at first but later on very genius and amazing but unfortunately since this fanfic has been drop so i will give low rating. why is this fanfic dropped? because theres only 100 chapters currently but on other sites this fanfic has already reached 164 chapters and was confirmed dropped by many sites.
Is it true the author is dead? ? '! $) #) #) ) $) )''==$$==$) $=*=#=#=#=*) *) *) *) "+" =*=**) *) **='==' ) :: )_=='=##==$=&_=&==&=&=' )*'! '? #) #
not bad at start but dropped in quality by 20ish chapter MC is an adult in child's body yet still willingly gets involved in idiotic fights with regular people which serves 0 purpose other than word count MC tells it how it is but moment gets given food can't say no illogical doesn't try in his time to use knowledge of other world to make money that advance his studies, martial arts, protection etc etc
summary of this fanfic: "cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough cough"
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i realy like it and i realy want more hope this gets a part 2 i dont know what to tell more just give it a try and read it :DDDDDDDDDDDDD
Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente Espero el siguiente
Really good hopefully you add more chaps ….….…… . . . .… . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
This is honestly one of the best fanfics I’ve read in a while I hope he hasn’t dropped…. . . . . . . . … . . . . . . .… . . . . . . . .
I like it, the grammar is good and readable, the characters are fluid and developed nicely, the story is entertaining, and the MC is absolutely hilarious. All in all a really good read
so this is my first time actually reviewing a story on here and I'm doing it for one reason, and one reason only. I WANT THIS FREAKING BOOK OFF OF HIATUS
Around 95 and 97 I lost interest due to the fact that he had his hokage position taken as punishment for killing danzo even though it was justified and being forced to leave the village by those ranked lower than him.
He got permission so I'm remaking this review [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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There are about 80 good chapters which for a fanfic is pretty good, but remember, fanfics will always be fanfics, if it isn't bad at the beggining it's only a matter of time until it's ruined, if you read chapter 96 you'll understand, I'm dissapointed but what can I do? Anyways, peace out
well I like that's novel🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
well i got to say it been a while since ive read such a funny fanfic, the way the mc acts is really funny, hope you can keep doing the story
I read this fic once before and thank you for bringing it back.Continue this please👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
💪🔥🖤Awsome Naruto Fanfic 🖤🔥👍Good story, Good Characters, Good Comedy.All perfectly balanced fanfic. 🐍🐲🐉🐍🐲🐉🐍🐲🐉🐍🐲🐉🐍🐲🐉🐍🐲🐉
Pretty good fanfic. It's solid and fun, without overpowered stuff and no system, and that made a huge +1 to me. [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Started out strong. but ever since the mc became a "puppet hokage" i mean it was a good idea but it just seemed rush a after chunin exams or a 12 yrs old sasuke with mangekyo should not and cannot defeat danzo plus sasuke just suddenly having a susanno and using amaterasu with no drawback is dumb.
Spoiler de révélation Hmm this actually pretty good___________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good stuff! High-quality comedy and fun to read.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I am taking permission of author so I will upload in webnovel. If anybody from now on mention that I stole the story. Then f**k off. I don't care