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mc is psychopathic and stupid, it's as if it's a dark genre but instead of killing criminals he kills innocent citizens 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
It’s pretty bad. Grammer is awful. Mc is shallow and kinda lame. Low iq mc. honestly the grammer was enough for me to drop but when the mc acted all knowing and chose to not learn all 6 marine techniques for literaly no reason I realized just how low iq the mc was. The is no depth to his character, it’s one of those edge types.
This story is hard to read. The characters are not well fleshed out, plot holes can be found in abundance, plot armor is prevalent, grammar is practically non-existent and the 'story' has no storyline. Would not recommend.
good mC seems more aggressive than other but still a very good fan fic jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjffffffffffffaaaaaaajmloggkotgko
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too stupid my brain hurts. c . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . m
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Meh, just another one of those old system fics where the hero starts one shotting every antagonist he comes across. I dropped after 2 chapters itself. It was that boring
writing quality-some grammatical mistakes why sooooo stupid !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! idiot mc
In my opinion it’s very enjoyable although I would like more interaction on the Mc part but it is not low enough to be seen as a let down. It will definitely not be for everyone especially with the violence and the Mc indifferent attitude towards others who he does not gets his attention but it’s fine in my opinion. People might see the Mc as cruel or wicked but I think it depends on your mindset or on your own views. We can’t expect people to see things from our own perspective because we’re all humans. The action is very enjoyable but also very detailed so you might not really like the gruesome scenes in some chapters like I said it might not be your taste with a cruel mc who does not give his enemies any mercy. So far I’ve read up to chapter 98 so I believe I have some good info on the story so far. But who am I to give my opinion, take it with a grain of salt at the end of the day my opinion don’t matter only yours so give it a try if you like. Jolly good show
Trash. Novel with No Brain MC. He want to give a powerful devil fruit instead of using himself as he had a chance to use 2 devil fruits. Just to prove MC power, Author massacre a branch with hundreds of Marnie over a little argument of 'why is he using pirate flag'. I mean he should have hosted the flag after going into sea and avoid a needless conflict. Author says that MC in his previous life he was anti-social. If you ask me, Mc is borderline psychopath who kills for little arguments.
Dropped chapter 1 Reasons 1 many mistakes that are clear and simple 2 mc is an idiot, given free access to 6 techniques but doesn't want 2 of them because he believes he knows best
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Over 50 5-star reviews spammed by the same guy, no wonder this story has such a high rating even tho the others rate it as low as possible since this story is the worst I've read in a while.
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mc is psychopathic and stupid, it's as if it's a dark genre but instead of killing criminals he kills innocent citizens 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
It’s pretty bad. Grammer is awful. Mc is shallow and kinda lame. Low iq mc. honestly the grammer was enough for me to drop but when the mc acted all knowing and chose to not learn all 6 marine techniques for literaly no reason I realized just how low iq the mc was. The is no depth to his character, it’s one of those edge types.
This story is hard to read. The characters are not well fleshed out, plot holes can be found in abundance, plot armor is prevalent, grammar is practically non-existent and the 'story' has no storyline. Would not recommend.
good mC seems more aggressive than other but still a very good fan fic jjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjffffffffffffaaaaaaajmloggkotgko
Trashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
too stupid my brain hurts. c . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . m
🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤮🤢🤢🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
Meh, just another one of those old system fics where the hero starts one shotting every antagonist he comes across. I dropped after 2 chapters itself. It was that boring
writing quality-some grammatical mistakes why sooooo stupid !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! idiot mc
In my opinion it’s very enjoyable although I would like more interaction on the Mc part but it is not low enough to be seen as a let down. It will definitely not be for everyone especially with the violence and the Mc indifferent attitude towards others who he does not gets his attention but it’s fine in my opinion. People might see the Mc as cruel or wicked but I think it depends on your mindset or on your own views. We can’t expect people to see things from our own perspective because we’re all humans. The action is very enjoyable but also very detailed so you might not really like the gruesome scenes in some chapters like I said it might not be your taste with a cruel mc who does not give his enemies any mercy. So far I’ve read up to chapter 98 so I believe I have some good info on the story so far. But who am I to give my opinion, take it with a grain of salt at the end of the day my opinion don’t matter only yours so give it a try if you like. Jolly good show
Trash. Novel with No Brain MC. He want to give a powerful devil fruit instead of using himself as he had a chance to use 2 devil fruits. Just to prove MC power, Author massacre a branch with hundreds of Marnie over a little argument of 'why is he using pirate flag'. I mean he should have hosted the flag after going into sea and avoid a needless conflict. Author says that MC in his previous life he was anti-social. If you ask me, Mc is borderline psychopath who kills for little arguments.
Dropped chapter 1 Reasons 1 many mistakes that are clear and simple 2 mc is an idiot, given free access to 6 techniques but doesn't want 2 of them because he believes he knows best
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Over 50 5-star reviews spammed by the same guy, no wonder this story has such a high rating even tho the others rate it as low as possible since this story is the worst I've read in a while.
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Typical Chinese novel ,,.................