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- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cant understand anything the grammar is bad the author like a idiot uploaded 100 chapters at once its hard to understand plot I get that you are the translator but put some effort in your book cause this is bad extremely bad the main character isnt expalined properly and suddenly starts talking about the world he got reincarnated in without even talking about or being suprised taht he got reincarnated yeah im out
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cant understand anything the grammar is bad the author like a idiot uploaded 100 chapters at once its hard to understand plot I get that you are the translator but put some effort in your book cause this is bad extremely bad the main character isnt expalined properly and suddenly starts talking about the world he got reincarnated in without even talking about or being suprised taht he got reincarnated yeah im out