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Greatest of all time. Zenith of the medium. Hallmark of media. Gold standard of storytelling. Apogee of creativity. Vertex of invention. Crest of ingenuity. Acme of imagination. Pinnacle of innovation. Epic of epics. Legend among legends. Peak fiction. This novel is currently my favorite, the start was a bit rusty but despite that I enjoyed it and continued reading because I saw a lot of potential! Now I’m glad I never dropped it. With every new chapter the story becomes more enjoyable to me. This is maybe because this novel has everything I’m searching for in a book without the plot points I hate. The foreshadowing is pretty great too and I’m still waiting for the development of a couple plot points that opened up near the start. The way Pandora’s family has been handled is pretty unique and I liked it, the character of every family member developed nicely. The side characters feel alive and aren’t 2D. The world also feels alive, everything doesn’t revolve around the MC. TL;DR Read this if you’re looking for a well written and unique reincarnation story, the MC’s personality is unique and isn’t the classic righteous MC. Pandora won’t hesitate to kill people if needed. You might like this if you’re looking for a bit of mystery too. My review is a bit biased since i’ve been looking for something like this for ages. Author please don’t drop this masterpiece!
this babe here is good, has stable progress with the use of various emotions attached in every events that happened same goes for the character development 😁😁 urgh we need more chapter, when is the story going to continue??🥲🥲 I've already read it many times already😁😁
This book is amazing and it really got me hooked to it I hope the author does not give up on it.
You might want to change the novel to dropped as right now it still says taking a break
Noooo, I was holding out so long in hope there would be another update! I guess that's never gonna happen now... This book was really good, I think. I last read it quite a while ago by this point. Immaculate details, solid world and power system from what I remember, and a decent variety of characters for only being as long into its story as it was. Is it still worth reading? Honestly I would say no, unlike other dropped books I've recommended, but not because it's any worse- just because it was dropped at an awkward point and I don't think we had a complete grasp of where the story was going yet. Author, if you see this, thank you for what you have written. I enjoyed it. If you find that you want to write again, please do, but if you continue to not want to, please don't. I don't think there should be any, but if there are any questions from anyone, ask and I will try to answer them. Cya around ig
I found a Gem. But sadly this gem hasnt been uptaded in a year. So its a worst kind of gem, "Abandoned Gem".
Es una novela bastante interesante tanto el desarrollo del personaje que espero que no cambie su forma de pensar o al menos me gusta que conserve esa independencia una cualidad que le queda bastante bien
It is a good book to read. plus I like the characters are made too so I do recommend it to read.
MC is pathetic. Author nerfs MC left and right and center, and then again. One moment we have MC fighting against a "wizard" who is stronger than her grandmother "supreme magus" and others, next moment she needs authors saving by "awakening" her eyes to BEAT A 10 YEAR OLD KID.... waste of time to read this. It stinks with authors interference left and right. Almost every chapter you can tell author is playing with MC like a marionet. Immersion is below 0.
will there be yuri or harem........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... ............................................................................................................................... ..
The novel is pretty good. I didn't want to judge without reading so I read about 70 chapter before i could not take it anymore and stopped because of too much villan stuff for me. I really wanted to read this novel but looks like villan stuff is not cup of my tea. So, I will be waiting for any new novel of your if it doesn't have villan stuff.
overall it's a decent time reading but needs a serious re-write at least for the first bit. the story I like and the characters too but the writing is absolutely atrocious, it's harder to find error free sentence than the contrary. I want to like this story, I really do but that's difficulty when it's constantly dragged down by the grammar.
I will be able to die content if the author finishes this book if not il haunt the author till the die they die .
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Author I want to say thank you for this work. I like how this novel flows from comedy to serious and isn't corny. The overall plot is interesting and keeps you hooked to find out more. Keep it up <3
So a bunch of chapters in, I guess it's enough to write a review. The story is really really good. The only thing is there are a lot of mistakes in terms of grammar and spelling that it gets difficult to read (At the beginning at least). Barely always becomes barley, like the grain. Quiet becomes quite. Other than that, amazing story, I can't wait to binge this all in one night. Thx!
First I want to say that this novel became one of my favorite and if you like novel like Supreme magus or TBATE you will love this. In this you will find a ruthless Mc that drag all its burden from its previus life and a lot of the time fail to let his tragic past go. You have a broken MC in a new world with its own rules and tradition and you see all of this clash. To me there is the right amount of fight and world development character are good and to me with normal human reaction. The only negative thing are the errors here and there really nothing major you will always understand what it try to say. in conlusion if you are looking for an isekai in a fantasy "western" world with an Mc that try to get a new life but slowly become more and more like a moster this is the novel for you.
This novel is one of the best novels i have read in my life. The characters are good and the main character has a lot of depth. The powers are sudden but developted nicely and storyline so far has been amazing. I love this novel and i want to see many more chapters in the future that quench my thirst for more chapters of this novel. Thank you for writing this novel Gre3d (author).[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
The novel is great all of it feels as real as it can get while being fantasy and the characters have a personality and feelings instead of just being a background character
This is certainly a wonderful novel. The author of this novel created the fights and plots so well that I am impressed. I hope to continue to follow the progression of the story, please author do not abandon the work.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So first and foremost I reviewed this at chapter 10. It may get better or it may get worse; all signs point to better. But I had to walk away; I’d normally not review since it has a lot of good points and a few bad but… -Trigger Warnings; Sexual Assault- kind of wish that had been thrown down in the synopsis. Writing quality is decent and slowly getting better, author makes typos but nothing extreme or consistent. World building seems amazing, plot is a little slow but no big deal and I’m intrigued to see where it goes. The downside is after ten chapters I still rather loathe the MC and despite the villain tag the entire point of my review is effectively a big trigger warning. By chapter 10 I’m still stuck on the fact our MC is a rapist whose perving on her mother and sister as an infant. It’s pretty uncomfortable to read in the awkward cringe way and it doesn’t help that our MC is pretty smug, hateful and condescending to her own family. I’m hoping our MC gets better and overcomes her trauma but this story is not for me, that said the writing and foundation is good so if this kind of warning doesn’t matter to you you’ll likely enjoy it.
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Overall a novel that you could binge. This review might state lots of complaints but ill remind you that if I took time to write such a long review, I loved it to the point that I am willing to spend enough time typing my measly gripes. Writing quality is kinda flawed mostly due to an abysmal amount of spelling errors. I can't even calculate the number of times 'barely' became 'barley'. But there have been lots of improvements as we come to the chapters released these days. I don't see half as many errors compared to the beginning. The narration style is odd, to be honest, Beginning was third person, Then it had shifted to first-person, and then finally evolved to something sort of like first-person crammed into third person(FL point of view). But I enjoyed this and am impressed with it. I would say take a shot, read a few chapters to find whether it fits your style. Also, Author-san if you are reading this, I would like to suggest you stop pasting the last few lines of the previous chapter into the next chapter. Updates as far as I'm concerned are really good and steady.14 chapters a week is good and although the length of chapters is on the shorter side, I guess it makes up with the number of chapters released. I won't say anything more about this mainly due to me just binging 200 chapters in one day. The plot is good objectively but it's not a 'nice' story. The intro will be quite dark and disgusting, Even me myself almost dropped this novel due to the intro but I gave it a chance and I would say it didn't disappoint me in the least. It's very fictional with very very low amounts of reality. Mostly felt to me like reading a Chinese XuanHuan novel. If you dare mix reality in this novel, you will find yourselves with humungous amounts of plotholes. Also, I could say that the plot had changed from being 'extremely dark' in the beginning' to something that could be 'enjoyed by anyone' when it nears the present releases. In the end, I could oversimplify it as a journey of a person from a psycho to a god(world-shattering kind..). Now coming to Characters... There had been without a doubt lots of memorable personalities but I would say character development has lots of nice, as well as bad moments. First would be our protagonist, Her character at the beginning which was completely intolerant towards humans had become something entirely different when it comes to chapters 200+. I won't speak much more on this to avoid spoiling but I loved the entire character development. Now talking about other characters, Some of the vital support characters got dumped midway in the story and there was no side story nor anything of that sorts to remind us those people even exists now. I hope they come up in the future as side stories... Now about the world background, the Magic background was modified mid-story. also, many other kinds of world information were modified mid-story. Nothing about countries or politics nor factions were given much importance, Not barely enough information to visualize the world. It's 200+ chapters...at least try to explain more about the countries and the world she lives in... Now, that's all folks, Don't drop this novel reading the first two dark chapters, it gets really better 100 chapters+. The Author has been showing lots of growth and I would say that I'm looking forward to how this entire stuff is going to turn out. Thanks for reading this long and boring review, It makes me happy if anyone has read this review to this point! Thank you!
This novel reminds me of Mangus Supreme in many ways, the base plot is very similar but with enough uniqueness to catch you and leave you wanting more. I’m only a few chapters in and I already can put it down.
You did great for your first novel[img=update][img=recommend] i love the story...it pulls you to find out whats going to happen chapter after chapter.
First off, your novel is amazing. The use of emotions and trauma create such a realistic feeling that I haven’t seen or read anywhere else, and I don’t think I will read anything else like it. I have finished reading the first volume, and though there were a pretty large amount of spelling/grammar errors, they did show up less nearing the end of the volume. I am hoping that it will get better with the spelling/grammar in future chapters. I absolutely love the characters and how they show such realistic emotions and behaviors, on top off hope each character works through their own trauma or how they don’t work through their trauma, which just furthers the realism. I do think the world building aspect of the novel does need some work, though I’m not entirely sure in what, it just feels lacking; I can’t quite put my finger on what though, sorry about that, I know tha isn’t the best objective criticism, but it’s what I got; though I’ve only read the first volume so it might get better. I do like how consistent the updates are with at least one or two chapters a day. I love the story and the characters, I look forward to reading more.
Greatest of all time. Zenith of the medium. Hallmark of media. Gold standard of storytelling. Apogee of creativity. Vertex of invention. Crest of ingenuity. Acme of imagination. Pinnacle of innovation. Epic of epics. Legend among legends. Peak fiction. This novel is currently my favorite, the start was a bit rusty but despite that I enjoyed it and continued reading because I saw a lot of potential! Now I’m glad I never dropped it. With every new chapter the story becomes more enjoyable to me. This is maybe because this novel has everything I’m searching for in a book without the plot points I hate. The foreshadowing is pretty great too and I’m still waiting for the development of a couple plot points that opened up near the start. The way Pandora’s family has been handled is pretty unique and I liked it, the character of every family member developed nicely. The side characters feel alive and aren’t 2D. The world also feels alive, everything doesn’t revolve around the MC. TL;DR Read this if you’re looking for a well written and unique reincarnation story, the MC’s personality is unique and isn’t the classic righteous MC. Pandora won’t hesitate to kill people if needed. You might like this if you’re looking for a bit of mystery too. My review is a bit biased since i’ve been looking for something like this for ages. Author please don’t drop this masterpiece!
this babe here is good, has stable progress with the use of various emotions attached in every events that happened same goes for the character development 😁😁 urgh we need more chapter, when is the story going to continue??🥲🥲 I've already read it many times already😁😁
This book is amazing and it really got me hooked to it I hope the author does not give up on it.
You might want to change the novel to dropped as right now it still says taking a break
Noooo, I was holding out so long in hope there would be another update! I guess that's never gonna happen now... This book was really good, I think. I last read it quite a while ago by this point. Immaculate details, solid world and power system from what I remember, and a decent variety of characters for only being as long into its story as it was. Is it still worth reading? Honestly I would say no, unlike other dropped books I've recommended, but not because it's any worse- just because it was dropped at an awkward point and I don't think we had a complete grasp of where the story was going yet. Author, if you see this, thank you for what you have written. I enjoyed it. If you find that you want to write again, please do, but if you continue to not want to, please don't. I don't think there should be any, but if there are any questions from anyone, ask and I will try to answer them. Cya around ig
I found a Gem. But sadly this gem hasnt been uptaded in a year. So its a worst kind of gem, "Abandoned Gem".
Es una novela bastante interesante tanto el desarrollo del personaje que espero que no cambie su forma de pensar o al menos me gusta que conserve esa independencia una cualidad que le queda bastante bien
It is a good book to read. plus I like the characters are made too so I do recommend it to read.
MC is pathetic. Author nerfs MC left and right and center, and then again. One moment we have MC fighting against a "wizard" who is stronger than her grandmother "supreme magus" and others, next moment she needs authors saving by "awakening" her eyes to BEAT A 10 YEAR OLD KID.... waste of time to read this. It stinks with authors interference left and right. Almost every chapter you can tell author is playing with MC like a marionet. Immersion is below 0.
will there be yuri or harem........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... ............................................................................................................................... ..
The novel is pretty good. I didn't want to judge without reading so I read about 70 chapter before i could not take it anymore and stopped because of too much villan stuff for me. I really wanted to read this novel but looks like villan stuff is not cup of my tea. So, I will be waiting for any new novel of your if it doesn't have villan stuff.
overall it's a decent time reading but needs a serious re-write at least for the first bit. the story I like and the characters too but the writing is absolutely atrocious, it's harder to find error free sentence than the contrary. I want to like this story, I really do but that's difficulty when it's constantly dragged down by the grammar.
I will be able to die content if the author finishes this book if not il haunt the author till the die they die .
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Author I want to say thank you for this work. I like how this novel flows from comedy to serious and isn't corny. The overall plot is interesting and keeps you hooked to find out more. Keep it up <3
So a bunch of chapters in, I guess it's enough to write a review. The story is really really good. The only thing is there are a lot of mistakes in terms of grammar and spelling that it gets difficult to read (At the beginning at least). Barely always becomes barley, like the grain. Quiet becomes quite. Other than that, amazing story, I can't wait to binge this all in one night. Thx!
First I want to say that this novel became one of my favorite and if you like novel like Supreme magus or TBATE you will love this. In this you will find a ruthless Mc that drag all its burden from its previus life and a lot of the time fail to let his tragic past go. You have a broken MC in a new world with its own rules and tradition and you see all of this clash. To me there is the right amount of fight and world development character are good and to me with normal human reaction. The only negative thing are the errors here and there really nothing major you will always understand what it try to say. in conlusion if you are looking for an isekai in a fantasy "western" world with an Mc that try to get a new life but slowly become more and more like a moster this is the novel for you.
This novel is one of the best novels i have read in my life. The characters are good and the main character has a lot of depth. The powers are sudden but developted nicely and storyline so far has been amazing. I love this novel and i want to see many more chapters in the future that quench my thirst for more chapters of this novel. Thank you for writing this novel Gre3d (author).[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
The novel is great all of it feels as real as it can get while being fantasy and the characters have a personality and feelings instead of just being a background character
This is certainly a wonderful novel. The author of this novel created the fights and plots so well that I am impressed. I hope to continue to follow the progression of the story, please author do not abandon the work.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]
So first and foremost I reviewed this at chapter 10. It may get better or it may get worse; all signs point to better. But I had to walk away; I’d normally not review since it has a lot of good points and a few bad but… -Trigger Warnings; Sexual Assault- kind of wish that had been thrown down in the synopsis. Writing quality is decent and slowly getting better, author makes typos but nothing extreme or consistent. World building seems amazing, plot is a little slow but no big deal and I’m intrigued to see where it goes. The downside is after ten chapters I still rather loathe the MC and despite the villain tag the entire point of my review is effectively a big trigger warning. By chapter 10 I’m still stuck on the fact our MC is a rapist whose perving on her mother and sister as an infant. It’s pretty uncomfortable to read in the awkward cringe way and it doesn’t help that our MC is pretty smug, hateful and condescending to her own family. I’m hoping our MC gets better and overcomes her trauma but this story is not for me, that said the writing and foundation is good so if this kind of warning doesn’t matter to you you’ll likely enjoy it.
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Overall a novel that you could binge. This review might state lots of complaints but ill remind you that if I took time to write such a long review, I loved it to the point that I am willing to spend enough time typing my measly gripes. Writing quality is kinda flawed mostly due to an abysmal amount of spelling errors. I can't even calculate the number of times 'barely' became 'barley'. But there have been lots of improvements as we come to the chapters released these days. I don't see half as many errors compared to the beginning. The narration style is odd, to be honest, Beginning was third person, Then it had shifted to first-person, and then finally evolved to something sort of like first-person crammed into third person(FL point of view). But I enjoyed this and am impressed with it. I would say take a shot, read a few chapters to find whether it fits your style. Also, Author-san if you are reading this, I would like to suggest you stop pasting the last few lines of the previous chapter into the next chapter. Updates as far as I'm concerned are really good and steady.14 chapters a week is good and although the length of chapters is on the shorter side, I guess it makes up with the number of chapters released. I won't say anything more about this mainly due to me just binging 200 chapters in one day. The plot is good objectively but it's not a 'nice' story. The intro will be quite dark and disgusting, Even me myself almost dropped this novel due to the intro but I gave it a chance and I would say it didn't disappoint me in the least. It's very fictional with very very low amounts of reality. Mostly felt to me like reading a Chinese XuanHuan novel. If you dare mix reality in this novel, you will find yourselves with humungous amounts of plotholes. Also, I could say that the plot had changed from being 'extremely dark' in the beginning' to something that could be 'enjoyed by anyone' when it nears the present releases. In the end, I could oversimplify it as a journey of a person from a psycho to a god(world-shattering kind..). Now coming to Characters... There had been without a doubt lots of memorable personalities but I would say character development has lots of nice, as well as bad moments. First would be our protagonist, Her character at the beginning which was completely intolerant towards humans had become something entirely different when it comes to chapters 200+. I won't speak much more on this to avoid spoiling but I loved the entire character development. Now talking about other characters, Some of the vital support characters got dumped midway in the story and there was no side story nor anything of that sorts to remind us those people even exists now. I hope they come up in the future as side stories... Now about the world background, the Magic background was modified mid-story. also, many other kinds of world information were modified mid-story. Nothing about countries or politics nor factions were given much importance, Not barely enough information to visualize the world. It's 200+ chapters...at least try to explain more about the countries and the world she lives in... Now, that's all folks, Don't drop this novel reading the first two dark chapters, it gets really better 100 chapters+. The Author has been showing lots of growth and I would say that I'm looking forward to how this entire stuff is going to turn out. Thanks for reading this long and boring review, It makes me happy if anyone has read this review to this point! Thank you!
This novel reminds me of Mangus Supreme in many ways, the base plot is very similar but with enough uniqueness to catch you and leave you wanting more. I’m only a few chapters in and I already can put it down.
You did great for your first novel[img=update][img=recommend] i love the story...it pulls you to find out whats going to happen chapter after chapter.
First off, your novel is amazing. The use of emotions and trauma create such a realistic feeling that I haven’t seen or read anywhere else, and I don’t think I will read anything else like it. I have finished reading the first volume, and though there were a pretty large amount of spelling/grammar errors, they did show up less nearing the end of the volume. I am hoping that it will get better with the spelling/grammar in future chapters. I absolutely love the characters and how they show such realistic emotions and behaviors, on top off hope each character works through their own trauma or how they don’t work through their trauma, which just furthers the realism. I do think the world building aspect of the novel does need some work, though I’m not entirely sure in what, it just feels lacking; I can’t quite put my finger on what though, sorry about that, I know tha isn’t the best objective criticism, but it’s what I got; though I’ve only read the first volume so it might get better. I do like how consistent the updates are with at least one or two chapters a day. I love the story and the characters, I look forward to reading more.