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Not a bad fiction for an assumed first try. Only thing in the story that nags at me is: 1). His use of the Uzumaki Clan name He's half Yuki, Quarter Uzumaki, and Quarter Namikaze (Civilian). He's also originally based in Kirigakure so wouldn't it make sense for Mei to use his mother's Clan name? My reasons being: • Yuki Clan is endangered with no other known members. • Kirigakure assisted in the downfall of Uzushiogakure & the Uzumaki Clan and could cause issues with any older generation kirigakure shinobi?thinking he could be a future threat if he wants revenge. • Uzumaki Naruto is a high profile political leaf shinobi who is a candidate for Hokage. If his relation is known it could cause friction with Konoha, or be a beacon for assassination/ kidnapping.
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Not a bad fiction for an assumed first try. Only thing in the story that nags at me is: 1). His use of the Uzumaki Clan name He's half Yuki, Quarter Uzumaki, and Quarter Namikaze (Civilian). He's also originally based in Kirigakure so wouldn't it make sense for Mei to use his mother's Clan name? My reasons being: • Yuki Clan is endangered with no other known members. • Kirigakure assisted in the downfall of Uzushiogakure & the Uzumaki Clan and could cause issues with any older generation kirigakure shinobi?thinking he could be a future threat if he wants revenge. • Uzumaki Naruto is a high profile political leaf shinobi who is a candidate for Hokage. If his relation is known it could cause friction with Konoha, or be a beacon for assassination/ kidnapping.
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