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Love it, not yo mucho Gore, the MC was mayve a Little constante, but, there Is no too much for expect un a MC with a solid character. The fact there Is no harem also gives it some points, so, this nivel was a good reading for me
En mi opinión, fue bastante extraño que una "particularidad" de informática se desarrolle en tantas artes marciales de diferentes obras, adquirir todos los superpoderes y hasta sobrevivir a bombas nucleares. Este prota es un Mary Sue y con todo lo visto, esperaba más del combate final. Pero todo está bien logrado, esta obra es entretenida y aunque me ubiera gustado más desarrollo propio de personajes secundarios esta bien. En cuanto al final... cierra todo como debe ser (excepto izuku, supongo que no se fortaleció mucho), es coherente y me encantó 9/10
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Repetitive the protagonist consistently makes horrible decisions and does not suffer any consequences not to mention his power set would render him the most powerful being on the planet at the age of 14 with minimal effort via simply taking his neighbor Izukus hair and copying One For All after he gets it not to mention all the other quirks he can copy
I like this fic overall. Author downplayed his work but it isn't as bad as some I've read. The MC is pretty swell too. End is nice, it's hard to give a "satisfying" ending to a ridiculously OP MC.
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OMG, I just finished this! It was soo~ good. So much planning and plots our MC did. Plots within plots within plots y’all! Like, for real! MC is awesome. I feel like he didn't want just one of anything so he chose both or all... whether he was neutral, with the law, or against it. Women too! Go MC! And thank you author for providing us unworthy readers with this beauty. And the ending is perfect. It toes all the loose ends and leaves room for a sequel to grow if desired too! Thanks again for this journey...
I read the whole fanfic and now I deeply regret it, that's what I mainly wanted to say. I really expected it to get better at some point and it did get a little better before it got worse again... maybe I shouldn't have had such high expectations about this fanfic.
just because i wanted too and i likedd the fic and im gonna read your other fics so thank you for making this.........................................
Bro... a good fanfic bro... but the blood hunt for Dino and for the food energy storage is a bit boring for me but over all its good, can't help but feel we need the multiversal continuation.
Me gustó la historia y su forma de escritura, nunca avía leído un fic dónde el protagonista y el antagonista fueran la misma persona, simplemente me encantó
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Great fic,had a lot of potential and unlike other writers i think you used most of it. really like how you actually finished writing your story which is really rare for fanfics and i respect it A LOT.So thanks for the good read.
It was one of my favorite novels with Mc that is focused and hungry for power. romance with momo is passable, Rumi is tolerable ,but adapting eri? This is too cliche. Once again eri catches everyone's heart. It ruins the story. Mc should have devoured eri and her power. Maybe he adapted her because of some big scheme? I hope so because this is getting worse.
Quick sounded cool. Execution? Honest to God. *It got out of hand.* The start was good, but the development overtime went haywire. I don't know what your brain went through to process these outcomes, but... yea. I'll just leave it at that. Sorry, but that is it for me on this fan novel.
A masterpiece! Just read it, it has a moderate pac, although there’s no new plot or story but dor me this is best fan fic for mha. A great mind, create a way on how to become the stongest politically economically too! And how he met his partners is also not forced maybe for the second one but hey they’re that perfectly inclined to each other. Just read it, the fan fic is almost finished tooand there’s more to come! The author is that talented! I pray for your health and well being mate. 🫵🏼
This is one of those stories you have to turn off your brain to enjoy. . MC makes the most dumb, most stupid, most idiotic & brain-dead decisions one could make. And because this written like a Chinese novel where the author makes everyone else dumber than the m.c. to compensate for his lack of brain cells. . And the pseudo science is so atrocious that someone who barely passed highschool would start throwing up by the mind boggling level of mistakes & straight up false statements. . We don't even know what his quick does. Author doesn't lay it down clearly. (Not as a mistery setup, but he straight up has no idea what it is). There are no rules or limitations to his quick i.e. he can do whatever he wants. . M.c. actions look like he is desperately trying to get caught. He mixes up his personas (civilian & villain) , has no forethought, and he evolves his "technopathy" quick to turning into a lion. And NOBODY BATS AN EYE. . At this point I gotta think his real quick is [stupidity domain] - anyone who sees or hears about him get a drastic reduction in their intelligence.
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I really liked this fanfiction, it has a great protagonist with great power and development, a small doubt in the future will you make a fanfiction of one piece, star wars, invincible, dc or ben 10? they are works that I also like as well as my hero academia so I would like to know if you are going to make fanfictions about them
A MHA with common sense is really nice. Im not sure if you're gonna carry but if you do could you slowly introduce a modern murim? Since he's taken martial arts to a different level.
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29 ch. read. too boring to keep going. for my taste. for those Who likes martial arts should be enjoyable 🤷
Starts out very good but the MC quickly becomes well known for being super powerful and by that I mean nationally and even globally to the point that he can even fight All Might 1v1 to a stand still and after that happens he suddenly starts the hero school story line... as in the super well known powerful MC does all the "tests" to qualify for the Hero job... basically 50% of the story is just about the MC showing of and following the plot. The MC becomes the 3rd wheel of the story.
Good FF so far with a lot on focus on Martial Arts contrary to its title and its quirk. A find a few typos so far like 41th and 42th so so. The mc likes to give "logic" to stuff and want to remove the stupidity out of people so he is very manapulative. Also there are tons of other characters from other anime/story so watch out for those it was quite fun finding those things. The reason its not 5 star cause of update speed and i just mass read it till chapter 106. - NO LEMON YET, BUT MC NOT BETA VIRGIN -ALSO NOT LOLICON, HE SAYS TO COMEBACK AGAIN ONCE THEY GROW UP SO NOT LOLICON -NGL KINDA LIKE THAT MC IS BOTH GOOD AND BAD -ENEMY/VILLIAN/ANTAGONIST DOES NOT HAVE ANY CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT SO FAR
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Spoiler de révélation Love it, not yo mucho Gore, the MC was mayve a Little constante, but, there Is no too much for expect un a MC with a solid character. The fact there Is no harem also gives it some points, so, this nivel was a good reading for me
En mi opinión, fue bastante extraño que una "particularidad" de informática se desarrolle en tantas artes marciales de diferentes obras, adquirir todos los superpoderes y hasta sobrevivir a bombas nucleares. Este prota es un Mary Sue y con todo lo visto, esperaba más del combate final. Pero todo está bien logrado, esta obra es entretenida y aunque me ubiera gustado más desarrollo propio de personajes secundarios esta bien. En cuanto al final... cierra todo como debe ser (excepto izuku, supongo que no se fortaleció mucho), es coherente y me encantó 9/10
Spoiler de révélation Repetitive the protagonist consistently makes horrible decisions and does not suffer any consequences not to mention his power set would render him the most powerful being on the planet at the age of 14 with minimal effort via simply taking his neighbor Izukus hair and copying One For All after he gets it not to mention all the other quirks he can copy
I like this fic overall. Author downplayed his work but it isn't as bad as some I've read. The MC is pretty swell too. End is nice, it's hard to give a "satisfying" ending to a ridiculously OP MC.
Spoiler de révélation OMG, I just finished this! It was soo~ good. So much planning and plots our MC did. Plots within plots within plots y’all! Like, for real! MC is awesome. I feel like he didn't want just one of anything so he chose both or all... whether he was neutral, with the law, or against it. Women too! Go MC! And thank you author for providing us unworthy readers with this beauty. And the ending is perfect. It toes all the loose ends and leaves room for a sequel to grow if desired too! Thanks again for this journey...
I read the whole fanfic and now I deeply regret it, that's what I mainly wanted to say. I really expected it to get better at some point and it did get a little better before it got worse again... maybe I shouldn't have had such high expectations about this fanfic.
just because i wanted too and i likedd the fic and im gonna read your other fics so thank you for making this.........................................
Bro... a good fanfic bro... but the blood hunt for Dino and for the food energy storage is a bit boring for me but over all its good, can't help but feel we need the multiversal continuation.
Me gustó la historia y su forma de escritura, nunca avía leído un fic dónde el protagonista y el antagonista fueran la misma persona, simplemente me encantó
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Great fic,had a lot of potential and unlike other writers i think you used most of it. really like how you actually finished writing your story which is really rare for fanfics and i respect it A LOT.So thanks for the good read.
It was one of my favorite novels with Mc that is focused and hungry for power. romance with momo is passable, Rumi is tolerable ,but adapting eri? This is too cliche. Once again eri catches everyone's heart. It ruins the story. Mc should have devoured eri and her power. Maybe he adapted her because of some big scheme? I hope so because this is getting worse.
Quick sounded cool. Execution? Honest to God. *It got out of hand.* The start was good, but the development overtime went haywire. I don't know what your brain went through to process these outcomes, but... yea. I'll just leave it at that. Sorry, but that is it for me on this fan novel.
A masterpiece! Just read it, it has a moderate pac, although there’s no new plot or story but dor me this is best fan fic for mha. A great mind, create a way on how to become the stongest politically economically too! And how he met his partners is also not forced maybe for the second one but hey they’re that perfectly inclined to each other. Just read it, the fan fic is almost finished tooand there’s more to come! The author is that talented! I pray for your health and well being mate. 🫵🏼
This is one of those stories you have to turn off your brain to enjoy. . MC makes the most dumb, most stupid, most idiotic & brain-dead decisions one could make. And because this written like a Chinese novel where the author makes everyone else dumber than the m.c. to compensate for his lack of brain cells. . And the pseudo science is so atrocious that someone who barely passed highschool would start throwing up by the mind boggling level of mistakes & straight up false statements. . We don't even know what his quick does. Author doesn't lay it down clearly. (Not as a mistery setup, but he straight up has no idea what it is). There are no rules or limitations to his quick i.e. he can do whatever he wants. . M.c. actions look like he is desperately trying to get caught. He mixes up his personas (civilian & villain) , has no forethought, and he evolves his "technopathy" quick to turning into a lion. And NOBODY BATS AN EYE. . At this point I gotta think his real quick is [stupidity domain] - anyone who sees or hears about him get a drastic reduction in their intelligence.
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I really liked this fanfiction, it has a great protagonist with great power and development, a small doubt in the future will you make a fanfiction of one piece, star wars, invincible, dc or ben 10? they are works that I also like as well as my hero academia so I would like to know if you are going to make fanfictions about them
A MHA with common sense is really nice. Im not sure if you're gonna carry but if you do could you slowly introduce a modern murim? Since he's taken martial arts to a different level.
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29 ch. read. too boring to keep going. for my taste. for those Who likes martial arts should be enjoyable 🤷
Starts out very good but the MC quickly becomes well known for being super powerful and by that I mean nationally and even globally to the point that he can even fight All Might 1v1 to a stand still and after that happens he suddenly starts the hero school story line... as in the super well known powerful MC does all the "tests" to qualify for the Hero job... basically 50% of the story is just about the MC showing of and following the plot. The MC becomes the 3rd wheel of the story.
Good FF so far with a lot on focus on Martial Arts contrary to its title and its quirk. A find a few typos so far like 41th and 42th so so. The mc likes to give "logic" to stuff and want to remove the stupidity out of people so he is very manapulative. Also there are tons of other characters from other anime/story so watch out for those it was quite fun finding those things. The reason its not 5 star cause of update speed and i just mass read it till chapter 106. - NO LEMON YET, BUT MC NOT BETA VIRGIN -ALSO NOT LOLICON, HE SAYS TO COMEBACK AGAIN ONCE THEY GROW UP SO NOT LOLICON -NGL KINDA LIKE THAT MC IS BOTH GOOD AND BAD -ENEMY/VILLIAN/ANTAGONIST DOES NOT HAVE ANY CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT SO FAR
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