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it doesn't matter about you causing trouble for mc, but with all the interactions he's like a solid idiot it's nauseating and what's with that broken summon. on what basis it could be done that he didn't even have a spirit ring and how disobedient his summoned was was annoying. it's ridiculous to say this is a story when it's just a stupid mc story, ridiculous, irrelevant, complete idiot.
So I first posted this story under 'novel' instead of fan-fic and couldn't change it afterwards 😅 I hope you enjoy reading this as much as ...... as much as I enjoy reading my favorite fan-fics 🤣 Have some milk and cookies while waiting for the next update, Author's orders
Better luck next time! The mc is a complete idiot and he has summons so you can expect him to do nothing while ordering servants around. ………………………
it doesn't matter about you causing trouble for mc, but with all the interactions he's like a solid idiot it's nauseating and what's with that broken summon. on what basis it could be done that he didn't even have a spirit ring and how disobedient his summoned was was annoying. it's ridiculous to say this is a story when it's just a stupid mc story, ridiculous, irrelevant, complete idiot.
So I first posted this story under 'novel' instead of fan-fic and couldn't change it afterwards 😅 I hope you enjoy reading this as much as ...... as much as I enjoy reading my favorite fan-fics 🤣 Have some milk and cookies while waiting for the next update, Author's orders
Better luck next time! The mc is a complete idiot and he has summons so you can expect him to do nothing while ordering servants around. ………………………