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Truly amazing! Beautifully written and it was definitely the, “perfect ending”!!! I hope there will be sequel [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
it was an interesting read. kept me quite intrigued. the ending felt really quick and sounds like it can probably continue. loads of unfinished questions like what happened to her sister? what happened to her so call parents? biggest question still unanswered " Who is Si Qian?" all we know is he's a super rich supposedly villain. but no background, you don't even get to meet his family except that they are rich. I guess as long as your rich, rich, rich you need no background to state where your rich came from and how powerful your aura is to overturn the ML and FL halo.
I Like This Type Of Short Stories You Can Read It In One Seating 😘😘 Although It Has Many Flows But I Like It Very Much😍😍 Ending Is Bit Rushed I Want To Know About Their Baby🤭🤭
The main idea of the novel is very good, my only problem is thatThe sister who was supposed to be the original protagonist is unhinged and reckless. She has no measure is her decisions and the melon eating crowd changes faces in less than three words.
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Its a good story.. I love this kind of story about transmigration and with the strong FL. Thank you to the author for sharing your creation to us readers .❤️❤️❤️
overall, a unique and interesting novel. A couple of slow burn areas, but enjoyable anyway.
best of all the books I read till now. the characters are appealing and story plot was new.
this is on of hot blooded story i have ever read, it feels like marathon, very exhausted but also burn your blood. need to read this until the end to avoid high blood pressure💔😖
I really enjoy reading this novel the excitement thrill and fun ...thanks authornim
Oh my word what a roller coaster. I enjoyed reading this book and didn’t take long for a happy ending.
This the second book I have read that could hold my interest. It is value for the money spent - light reading to relax. The storyboard did not drag or went around misc. plots
Started well but the warfare por was much too long. It’ a shame. it would have been a great story. Glad I could skip around and not have to buy the whole thing
A simple and light read with no major dramas. Author did a good job with the writing, with just enough information (not too much or not too little). Really satisfied!! I recommend this novel to the reader who are interested in simple and straightforward plots which is also a light and fast read. Hope to read more from your collection author. All the Best!! 😊👍🏻
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I loved the characters and the set-up. Kind of trope-heavy, but a very enjoyable read. Well-paced until the end, which was a bit rushed, but all the ends were tied up which I really appreciate and it was a good place to conclude the story.
Under 200 chapter I quite enjoyed it but unfortunately the ending seems to be rushed.. Ugh please im not satisfied with the ending.. Masih banyak pertanyaan yg belom kejawab 😓
very good read! slow build up but better than those who have 500+ chapters. worth reading and actually enjoying the whole book without waiting for updates!
I really love this novel that I would be secretly smiling while reading it that my older brother thought I was reading something perverted. .....
IIts a WOWWWWW!!!!. thank you dear author for making my two days full and complete. more power in making another story like this. God bless
I'm not sure if I like story or not, side characters are too delusional and crazy. FL character is ok, cause is AI, she lack of understanding emotions ML is okk... but can't decide if I like him or not, FL sister I just hate her, I'm just confused does people really have to hate others if their are extraordinary at something...
This novel’s premise and beginning had so much potential. The B-plot that was so unnecessary, very detailed, and lasted over 20 chapters. The conclusion/resolve felt extremely rushed and was just one chapter. The ending was extremely disappointing considering how the B-plot could’ve been shortened if not completely removed and replaced with a much more in-depth and satisfying conclusion/resolve.
A good story . Thankfully it finally ended. Author did a good job in capturing the interest of the readers. the best part is that it did not drag on endlessly with unlimited chapters . Transmigration, though not a human soul was transmigrated. The last line where Bai Jing admits her love for her husband was nice.
Not my type. FL was a robot who transmigrated. ML gave jewelries, antiques to FL but got seized by FL’s parents. If ML is strong, this scene doesnt make sense. Also, ML didnt let his friend knows that he married FL and giving FL an image that ML is chasing a married and loose woman.
The story was fast-paced for once. Development of storyline is well written. Characters development is good. Since I read it when it is completed already there is no lingering thoughts of being upset due to slow update. Nice short story.
Truly amazing! Beautifully written and it was definitely the, “perfect ending”!!! I hope there will be sequel [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
it was an interesting read. kept me quite intrigued. the ending felt really quick and sounds like it can probably continue. loads of unfinished questions like what happened to her sister? what happened to her so call parents? biggest question still unanswered " Who is Si Qian?" all we know is he's a super rich supposedly villain. but no background, you don't even get to meet his family except that they are rich. I guess as long as your rich, rich, rich you need no background to state where your rich came from and how powerful your aura is to overturn the ML and FL halo.
I Like This Type Of Short Stories You Can Read It In One Seating 😘😘 Although It Has Many Flows But I Like It Very Much😍😍 Ending Is Bit Rushed I Want To Know About Their Baby🤭🤭
The main idea of the novel is very good, my only problem is thatThe sister who was supposed to be the original protagonist is unhinged and reckless. She has no measure is her decisions and the melon eating crowd changes faces in less than three words.
Spoiler de révélation Its a good story.. I love this kind of story about transmigration and with the strong FL. Thank you to the author for sharing your creation to us readers .❤️❤️❤️
overall, a unique and interesting novel. A couple of slow burn areas, but enjoyable anyway.
best of all the books I read till now. the characters are appealing and story plot was new.
this is on of hot blooded story i have ever read, it feels like marathon, very exhausted but also burn your blood. need to read this until the end to avoid high blood pressure💔😖
I really enjoy reading this novel the excitement thrill and fun ...thanks authornim
Oh my word what a roller coaster. I enjoyed reading this book and didn’t take long for a happy ending.
This the second book I have read that could hold my interest. It is value for the money spent - light reading to relax. The storyboard did not drag or went around misc. plots
Started well but the warfare por was much too long. It’ a shame. it would have been a great story. Glad I could skip around and not have to buy the whole thing
A simple and light read with no major dramas. Author did a good job with the writing, with just enough information (not too much or not too little). Really satisfied!! I recommend this novel to the reader who are interested in simple and straightforward plots which is also a light and fast read. Hope to read more from your collection author. All the Best!! 😊👍🏻
Nice to read last action romantic little bit of everything good 👍 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅🥰🥰😅😅🥰🥰🥰🥰😅🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪
I loved the characters and the set-up. Kind of trope-heavy, but a very enjoyable read. Well-paced until the end, which was a bit rushed, but all the ends were tied up which I really appreciate and it was a good place to conclude the story.
Under 200 chapter I quite enjoyed it but unfortunately the ending seems to be rushed.. Ugh please im not satisfied with the ending.. Masih banyak pertanyaan yg belom kejawab 😓
very good read! slow build up but better than those who have 500+ chapters. worth reading and actually enjoying the whole book without waiting for updates!
I really love this novel that I would be secretly smiling while reading it that my older brother thought I was reading something perverted. .....
IIts a WOWWWWW!!!!. thank you dear author for making my two days full and complete. more power in making another story like this. God bless
I'm not sure if I like story or not, side characters are too delusional and crazy. FL character is ok, cause is AI, she lack of understanding emotions ML is okk... but can't decide if I like him or not, FL sister I just hate her, I'm just confused does people really have to hate others if their are extraordinary at something...
This novel’s premise and beginning had so much potential. The B-plot that was so unnecessary, very detailed, and lasted over 20 chapters. The conclusion/resolve felt extremely rushed and was just one chapter. The ending was extremely disappointing considering how the B-plot could’ve been shortened if not completely removed and replaced with a much more in-depth and satisfying conclusion/resolve.
A good story . Thankfully it finally ended. Author did a good job in capturing the interest of the readers. the best part is that it did not drag on endlessly with unlimited chapters . Transmigration, though not a human soul was transmigrated. The last line where Bai Jing admits her love for her husband was nice.
Not my type. FL was a robot who transmigrated. ML gave jewelries, antiques to FL but got seized by FL’s parents. If ML is strong, this scene doesnt make sense. Also, ML didnt let his friend knows that he married FL and giving FL an image that ML is chasing a married and loose woman.
The story was fast-paced for once. Development of storyline is well written. Characters development is good. Since I read it when it is completed already there is no lingering thoughts of being upset due to slow update. Nice short story.
It was short and enjoyable.A good short story with a perfect ending.