Naruto: The Chosen Undead

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MeButBetter

I've never so genuinely hoped a story doesn't get dropped. I can only assume it was fate that I found the absolute gem because I decided to re-read your TODAG fic(also amazing btw). Hate to sound like a cornball, but this story genuinely evokes emotions unlike many others that I've read. Along with that, everything else is also incredibly high quality, it's incredible. Seriously, if I wasn't so broke I'd wanna give you my whole paycheck to get my hands on more of this. All glazing aside, please, please, please don't drop this.

LV 4

DaoistuBDitW

Good start, nice way of blending the world. I don't have much knowledge about Dark Souls, but it is quite intriguing. The only problem I felt was the use of "Oh Kami", it just destroys the flow of the story, as the rest are delivered in English and "Kami" is japanese. There is nothing wrong with using it, but as a reader I felt it disrupts the flow of the content as I read.

LV 4

Rayama

One of the Best, if not The Best beginning I've ever read in all my time in Webnovel. Sentences roll Smoothly, Long satisfying chapters, No Repeating Sentences and Characters have actual Depth and Morals. From what I can see of this promising fanfic is that the author of this fanfic is truly passionate about his work, I hope you continue that way. 🤙

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DaoistcaxvL7

It would be better if the story flowed more according to the original story. ...................... . .......... ......... ........ ......

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Kayapan

Absolute PEAK finally a good ds fic, keep cooking author, you're making a lotta people really happy hehe . . .. .. . .. . ... . . . . . .. . .

LV 4

CasualReader1

good stuff. well written and the story is interesting. sadly it's not a premade novel. so i have to wait for the update.

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daniel_rivera_2588

Es interesante en el desarrollo de personajes con ñas tramas que ofrecen este autor..................................................................................................................................

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Goku_6277

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Dinesh_Panda

gret love it [img=gift][img=strong][img=update][img=recommend][img=golden ticket][img=disgusted][img=exp][img=nervous][img=strong][img=thinking]

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Patrick_Hardy

So far this story is really good keep up the good work