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Ryuu is a college student, who got into a traffic accident (truck-chan). Then he found himself in a dark place, and there he met an old man wearing a white dress decorated with golden threads, and he said, "I will grant you 5 wishes."
●This Novel is a ff of Naruto but will not be 100 % accurate and will have some things changed .
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i feel like ive lost brain cells trying to read this it also felt more like a guide line then a story and feels like a lot of words are missing
World background: Naruto Character design: Pretty much the cover, black eyes, black, hair. Now the Mc is pretty naive, hes doesnt exactly safe everyone but he is pretty much typical shonen main charcter. The other characters are alright, not too different but not exactly. Danzo is not dumb, but the novel makes him seem dumb. The way mikoto and Kushina was written is plain and needs more work, honeslty in general the women in naruto are conplety terrible so it kinda fits. Now the Main Character is pretty much a child who knows the future, he is dense, tells his secrects in combat, really is simple minded. The way to fix this is to add more complexty, give more goals other than protect and grow stronger.
WQ: To be honest, it's better than a lot of works here (which isn't necessarily good), and in the relaxed reading I did, I didn't notice mistakes or anything that bothered me. US: very good. SD: You know, the usual. Nothing to comment. CD: good too. WB: well it's Naruto. And Naruto's WB isn't the best (far from the best) but who cares? Personal evaluation: "rise to the top" gives an idea of ascension, which we don't see when in the first chapter the protagonist gets 5 wishes, which, speaking of them, is the same as always. Powers that defy the power scale of the piece (since it's Naruto, it doesn't matter, the entire anime is broken in this regard), talents, etc. But again, who cares? I recommend reading, it's a lot of fun.
Now I am gonna be honest he gets 5 wishes which is fine but wishes for dumb stuff and he a dude who only spent 1 year with his dad and half of that was with his dad on missions who died and the mc did not 'expect' it in Naruto He has wishes that are considered OP in Naruto but all 5 wishes could have been better especially the last one Tbh this is just dumb and I quit at chapter 2 but overall better then most just Mc is dumb I am just giving this review based on my opinion
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-good idea, sub par execution -writing quality is 6/10 you just need to find a way to connect your wording -background story pretty average stuff mc dies reincarnated gets wishes you know the deal -if you can get over grammar mistakes then you will probably like this one good luck author
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Really good. I don't really know how to describe it since there's no such outlier in this whole fanfic. Characters have appropriate personalities. Writing quality is rough for a few chapters but smoothens out around chapter 7. Hiruzen is an actual good guy who's willing to protect innocents rather than a good old manipulator. Danzo is as usual. Minato was sidelined after the first few chapters since the show is about MC, not him. He's just there to follow MC like a sidekick in future chapters. All in all, a nice naruto fanfic with average potential to be in rank 10. Readers should read it casually not minding the mistakes since the author is still on his craft lol. I'll give it 5 stars to show my support.
i hope novel this next boruto next generation...............................................................................................
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read 9 chapters after getting 5 OP wishes. he does nothing , system is not useful at all , no quest , no attributes , no skills only simple jutushu without any level . not even used appraisal skill once ( i don't know he have it or not ) A BORING MC so what is interesting in this Novel that i didn't get it
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its a really good fanfic update more chapters and new readers give it a try before judging and ofcourse drop some stones and love ..........
A college educated adult gets inserted into a world of his choosing, at the time of his choosing, with the bloodlines of his choosing plus 5 wishes. What he do with it? Nothing. This MC has no hobbies doesn't train his wishes or play any games to pass the time. He is a lazy MC in a world of child killers during war time. And he does nothing. Apparently he has no reason to train. With all his memories of what is coming and being born with the best possible potential is not enough. The MC prefers to watch paint dry for 5 years.