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Great rewrite so far, I really want to see how you rope in the primordial beings into the world. Hopefully it won't be forced but nothings perfect and I know that very well. Still rooting for you, this time however, have a good upload schedule or something lol.
Pretty Good, 4.6 The story before was okay but kind of bland but the rewrite however just made it better. The characters are nice.
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The story is slow paced and awesome. If you haven't read this fic then you are missing on a lot as it is one of the best arifureta fan fic out there😖😖
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Pretty good so far just wish author's would be more audio version friendly and not use tilda,dash,equals or greater than and less than so much just use "quotes" and () I want to bash my head in at work when it's like dashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdash or what not plz and thanks
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Great rewrite so far, I really want to see how you rope in the primordial beings into the world. Hopefully it won't be forced but nothings perfect and I know that very well. Still rooting for you, this time however, have a good upload schedule or something lol.
Pretty Good, 4.6 The story before was okay but kind of bland but the rewrite however just made it better. The characters are nice.
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The story is slow paced and awesome. If you haven't read this fic then you are missing on a lot as it is one of the best arifureta fan fic out there😖😖
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Pretty good so far just wish author's would be more audio version friendly and not use tilda,dash,equals or greater than and less than so much just use "quotes" and () I want to bash my head in at work when it's like dashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdashdash or what not plz and thanks
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