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I really enjoyed the story in general it was a great concept I was getting super interested then it just ended I really hope the author will continue to write and my stones shall be devoted to this book.
does anyone know if there is a place to read this online that has more chapters? or is this the only place you can find it? Thanks in advance!
so far I really enjoy this series. I'm happy to find a more realistic pokemon story. does anyone know how often the author updates? I'm excited to see more
A fun and interesting take on pokemon and how they affect a world. The mc is rational and intelligent without being cold or uncaring and the characters have fun personalities.
I really like this Pokémon theme. Yeah it’ another transmigration story, but I really like the way the world is built. It’ not just another transmigration into the same world as the show or a multiverse version of the shows world. So author, whoever you are, please keep uploading your story!
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop plz do not drop this is amazing, a gold in the making!!!!!!!
Hey author! Was wondering if you are all well and if this story is dropped? Hope you are doing good. Just letting you know that I hope for an update everyday for the past 3 months. Your story is really nice, has a lot of potential and i wish it the best. Please do let us know if it's dropped, it would be terrible but a closure for us loyal readers🙏🏼.
Wow realy love this fan fiction this gives me monsters and gates from korean manhwa like solo leveling vibes I can predict that this novel will become famous in the future
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Contend for a total of $30,000！！！ Hi! Many authors have won big cash prizes in our SWA II. Now Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I is hot in progress. It is your turn to win with your suspense stories and thrillers this time. We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access to the grand prizes and publishing your books in hardcover. Just imagine your book on the shelf with a best-seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can join us. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves much more. Join us now! Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *). for more details.
OK so this story is dead? 😏👏🎶😏🙄😍😃🎶😍(😍😃(😍2😍(2😍🙄😏🙄😍😏🙄😍🙄😍😃😍🙄😏🙄😍😏😍🙄🙄😊😃😍🙄🙄😊😂🙄😊😃🙄😍🙄😍🙄😍😃🙄😍😂🎶😍😃😍🙄
no me gusto por una simple cosa fausto le da de todo a su amigo sin esfuerzos de el amigo fausto es tan compartido que le prestaria a su novia pero eso no quita el echo de que la novela esta genial
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Better than average, worth your time i guess, the only issue i have is the updates, it's sucks. The recent chapter now is 25, and it has been 8 days since it updated. Here the Mc is transmigrated in a teenage during a class a few days before receive his first pokemon egg, the thing is that i wanted it to be like that since he was born, but here he wakes up like a few days before receive his first pokemon, which is not a bad thing, but in my opnion i think it would be better if he transmigrated in a newborn. The story development is average, i don't feel much of the Mc evolving and learning more about himself as the story goes on, but this is compesated by the action part which is pretty decent. The dialog was obviously made by a amateur, but it's not that bad, i mean, i've seen worse. The world background is good, we feel when the eviorement changes and how it affects the characters, and the author often talk about other organizations around the world that the Mc is gonna try do avoid or use. the world build for me is more abotu the factions and powerhouses in the world than the biomes and enviorement itself, and the world background here use this as the story progresses. We still gonna have to see how the story is going to be later, now is pretty decent but who know? Most of the novels i saw started pretty well too, but later got bad because the author got lazy, hopes this doesn't happen here.
This is one of the very few novels I enjoy reading on the web. The story is fresh, I love the critical thinking of the protagonist, the worldbuilding is amazing and detailed.... and in particular, enjoy your writing style! You have potential, keep it up :)
OK I finished it until ch.7 it's was not bad but not that good either the story was kinda rushed and the way he flex his knowledge on Professor was not a good move now it's kinda messed up right now so I stop reading its have a good potential though BTW it's just my opinion if you plan to reading this u should try it like I say it's have a good potential but the way story goes was out of my taste l
Up to 6 chapters in and I find myself excited for how this story will pan out. Up to 6 chapters in and I find myself excited for how this story will pan out.
Wonderful story! I love the entire idea, the concept of the rifts, new world and developments in them which are common in the canon pokemon world! I know there are few similar stories but none as well written and engaging! And those other fics do something I despise, they create their own pokemon... I just never liked that u know..back to the review, story rocks!its awesome! Please dont give it up.
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it was great, just that I expected an adventure story instead of whatever this researching thing is. it's not a bad idea but my love of pokemon came from the adventures and encounters they had, which I deeply appreciate in the last couple chapters.
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a great start to world building and relly good writing as well. I'm excited to ride this train to the end. It's worth the read best pokemon fanfic iv read so far
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Very fun story of a harsh death world type Pokémon. Would have loved it far more if the author didn’t disappear. (2 years afk since last activity me thinks he isekai’d.)
I really enjoyed the story in general it was a great concept I was getting super interested then it just ended I really hope the author will continue to write and my stones shall be devoted to this book.
does anyone know if there is a place to read this online that has more chapters? or is this the only place you can find it? Thanks in advance!
so far I really enjoy this series. I'm happy to find a more realistic pokemon story. does anyone know how often the author updates? I'm excited to see more
A fun and interesting take on pokemon and how they affect a world. The mc is rational and intelligent without being cold or uncaring and the characters have fun personalities.
I really like this Pokémon theme. Yeah it’ another transmigration story, but I really like the way the world is built. It’ not just another transmigration into the same world as the show or a multiverse version of the shows world. So author, whoever you are, please keep uploading your story!
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop do not drop plz do not drop this is amazing, a gold in the making!!!!!!!
Hey author! Was wondering if you are all well and if this story is dropped? Hope you are doing good. Just letting you know that I hope for an update everyday for the past 3 months. Your story is really nice, has a lot of potential and i wish it the best. Please do let us know if it's dropped, it would be terrible but a closure for us loyal readers🙏🏼.
Wow realy love this fan fiction this gives me monsters and gates from korean manhwa like solo leveling vibes I can predict that this novel will become famous in the future
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Contend for a total of $30,000！！！ Hi! Many authors have won big cash prizes in our SWA II. Now Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I is hot in progress. It is your turn to win with your suspense stories and thrillers this time. We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access to the grand prizes and publishing your books in hardcover. Just imagine your book on the shelf with a best-seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can join us. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves much more. Join us now! Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *). for more details.
OK so this story is dead? 😏👏🎶😏🙄😍😃🎶😍(😍😃(😍2😍(2😍🙄😏🙄😍😏🙄😍🙄😍😃😍🙄😏🙄😍😏😍🙄🙄😊😃😍🙄🙄😊😂🙄😊😃🙄😍🙄😍🙄😍😃🙄😍😂🎶😍😃😍🙄
no me gusto por una simple cosa fausto le da de todo a su amigo sin esfuerzos de el amigo fausto es tan compartido que le prestaria a su novia pero eso no quita el echo de que la novela esta genial
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Better than average, worth your time i guess, the only issue i have is the updates, it's sucks. The recent chapter now is 25, and it has been 8 days since it updated. Here the Mc is transmigrated in a teenage during a class a few days before receive his first pokemon egg, the thing is that i wanted it to be like that since he was born, but here he wakes up like a few days before receive his first pokemon, which is not a bad thing, but in my opnion i think it would be better if he transmigrated in a newborn. The story development is average, i don't feel much of the Mc evolving and learning more about himself as the story goes on, but this is compesated by the action part which is pretty decent. The dialog was obviously made by a amateur, but it's not that bad, i mean, i've seen worse. The world background is good, we feel when the eviorement changes and how it affects the characters, and the author often talk about other organizations around the world that the Mc is gonna try do avoid or use. the world build for me is more abotu the factions and powerhouses in the world than the biomes and enviorement itself, and the world background here use this as the story progresses. We still gonna have to see how the story is going to be later, now is pretty decent but who know? Most of the novels i saw started pretty well too, but later got bad because the author got lazy, hopes this doesn't happen here.
This is one of the very few novels I enjoy reading on the web. The story is fresh, I love the critical thinking of the protagonist, the worldbuilding is amazing and detailed.... and in particular, enjoy your writing style! You have potential, keep it up :)
OK I finished it until ch.7 it's was not bad but not that good either the story was kinda rushed and the way he flex his knowledge on Professor was not a good move now it's kinda messed up right now so I stop reading its have a good potential though BTW it's just my opinion if you plan to reading this u should try it like I say it's have a good potential but the way story goes was out of my taste l
Up to 6 chapters in and I find myself excited for how this story will pan out. Up to 6 chapters in and I find myself excited for how this story will pan out.
Wonderful story! I love the entire idea, the concept of the rifts, new world and developments in them which are common in the canon pokemon world! I know there are few similar stories but none as well written and engaging! And those other fics do something I despise, they create their own pokemon... I just never liked that u know..back to the review, story rocks!its awesome! Please dont give it up.
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it was great, just that I expected an adventure story instead of whatever this researching thing is. it's not a bad idea but my love of pokemon came from the adventures and encounters they had, which I deeply appreciate in the last couple chapters.
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a great start to world building and relly good writing as well. I'm excited to ride this train to the end. It's worth the read best pokemon fanfic iv read so far
Es pokemon asi que toma tus 5 estrellas 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Very fun story of a harsh death world type Pokémon. Would have loved it far more if the author didn’t disappear. (2 years afk since last activity me thinks he isekai’d.)