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To be honest before reading this I really didn't think I would like this at all so I put off reading it . I'm so glad I gave it a chance I love it binge read the entire story so far. ps sorry for my writing and sentence structure
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First of all, I have to say is that this is one of my favorite db fanfic till now that has a good character backgroud story and nice character development. I see a lot of potential in this fanfic so keep up the good work author. HANGGANG SA MULI PAALAM🖐🖐
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I've definitely read this before I'm not saying that you copied it cause I have no proof but you definitely took inspiration from another fanfic.
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To be honest before reading this I really didn't think I would like this at all so I put off reading it . I'm so glad I gave it a chance I love it binge read the entire story so far. ps sorry for my writing and sentence structure
NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE! NICE!
First of all, I have to say is that this is one of my favorite db fanfic till now that has a good character backgroud story and nice character development. I see a lot of potential in this fanfic so keep up the good work author. HANGGANG SA MULI PAALAM🖐🖐
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I've definitely read this before I'm not saying that you copied it cause I have no proof but you definitely took inspiration from another fanfic.
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Spoiler de révélation Shameless author here! This is my first time writing so any comments, thoughts and reviews are much appreciated. .
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