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So far I’ve read all the free chapters and it’s really good. For me it started off slow but nothing to draw my attention away. I’m not to big on romance but after reading some of it, it hooks you in. Keep up the good work.
I really love this book. How can revenge change to such a beautiful ending? Look like trust and love is really important from the point of view of the writer. Hoping for more books like this.
Come across this book when I read your other book. I love this! Hope you can make another mafia story again next time! Keep up the good work
I saw this book winning wpc contest silver award in the webnovel instagram and decide to give a try. I love the story. Hoping that it will continue to get interesting as it already does.
Keep up the good work. The story seem promising. I keep waiting for more chapter to be uploaded. Keep up the good work. The story seem promising. I keep waiting for more chapter to be uploaded.
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Love the story so far. Keep up the good work. Love the story so far. Keep up the good work. Love the story so far. Keep up the good work.
So far so good. Keep up the good work. Make me want to know what happen next. Will change rating if more chapter is uploaded. Whatever it is I enjoy all of your books.
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Im not a fan of normal romance or contempory things but just want to support the author. so I drop this comment. I like the first book better but this also one cool book
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Keep up the good workKeep up the good workKeep up the good workKeep up the good workKeep up the good workKeep up the good workKeep up the good work
It must be tough to make two book at the same time. But its look like you done a good job. Keep up the good work. Hope to see more of your book in the future.
I put a comment here because I don't know how to reach all of you that reading and supporting this book. I just want to say thank you very much for your kindness. To new reader please add this book to your library 😉 If you have some time, you can review/give your opinion which will definitely encourage me more. 🌹Thank you very much once again🌹
So far so good. FL development is slow but I can bear with it. Just want to drop some review after reading for a while. keep up the good work.
This work is so underrated! I hope more readers support this completed book. I like the flow of the story and the action scene also easy to imagine. Love this!
So far I’ve read all the free chapters and it’s really good. For me it started off slow but nothing to draw my attention away. I’m not to big on romance but after reading some of it, it hooks you in. Keep up the good work.
I really love this book. How can revenge change to such a beautiful ending? Look like trust and love is really important from the point of view of the writer. Hoping for more books like this.
Come across this book when I read your other book. I love this! Hope you can make another mafia story again next time! Keep up the good work
I saw this book winning wpc contest silver award in the webnovel instagram and decide to give a try. I love the story. Hoping that it will continue to get interesting as it already does.
Keep up the good work. The story seem promising. I keep waiting for more chapter to be uploaded. Keep up the good work. The story seem promising. I keep waiting for more chapter to be uploaded.
Spoiler de révélation Love the story so far. Keep up the good work. Love the story so far. Keep up the good work. Love the story so far. Keep up the good work.
So far so good. Keep up the good work. Make me want to know what happen next. Will change rating if more chapter is uploaded. Whatever it is I enjoy all of your books.
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Im not a fan of normal romance or contempory things but just want to support the author. so I drop this comment. I like the first book better but this also one cool book
Spoiler de révélation Keep up the good workKeep up the good workKeep up the good workKeep up the good workKeep up the good workKeep up the good workKeep up the good work
It must be tough to make two book at the same time. But its look like you done a good job. Keep up the good work. Hope to see more of your book in the future.
I put a comment here because I don't know how to reach all of you that reading and supporting this book. I just want to say thank you very much for your kindness. To new reader please add this book to your library 😉 If you have some time, you can review/give your opinion which will definitely encourage me more. 🌹Thank you very much once again🌹
So far so good. FL development is slow but I can bear with it. Just want to drop some review after reading for a while. keep up the good work.
This work is so underrated! I hope more readers support this completed book. I like the flow of the story and the action scene also easy to imagine. Love this!