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So I read both stories and only reviewed the newest story so here's a late review. Before let's get something straight, He is not 100% Johnny SilverHand, what I mean with this is that he is a guy who got transmigrated? yeah transmigrated into One piece and his new body is that of Johnny SilverHand. With that out of the way on to reviewing. 1-Writing Quality: I liked the writing on this story and so far all of Wicked's stories. There is little to no complications in understanding and most of the things people don't understand is mostly due to not paying enough attention. [So five stars here] 2-Story Development: The story has both slow moments and fast moments(Not in chapters, I mean as in skipping unnecessary things also labeled as timeskips or minor timeskips). The story in general has a good feel in it's development, this also includes the MCs interactions with the world and with it's inhabitants. For some it might have a slow development but it's to build the world, the characters and also building an understanding with the readers about the events and the characters (personal opinion, don't throw stones yet😂) [Again five stars] 3-Character Design: The characters are well designed so far, the author tried to maintain the personalities and speaking habits of some OG One Piece characters and succeeded so far. The MC I also consistent with his traits and goals, and we even see slight changes along the way in some of the MCs companions so that shows how well made the characters are. There is no forced change or moments, it's fluid and feels right. [D**n this is another five stars] 4-Updating Stability: As someone who's been reading since only 25 chapters I can say that the updates where consistent/stable. Key word being "where" because it isn't anymore, we'd get regular updates before but I can understand the motive for the lack of update right now as the newest story is taking the main focus of the author(Also go read it, it's a great read and is competing with Johnny SilverHand on my favourite of the month... Not that that changes anything to anyone 😅). Putting my personal opinion of five stars based on the previous updates and the constant updates on the new book(different books need different ratings) I gave the following rating. [Three stars for updates since Wicked didn't stay he stopped updating altogether] 5-World Building: The world feels like One Piece and that's the goal. There's no farfetched creations such as a island where they use cars and telephones, it's consistent with the OG world with some original islands and stuff since we needed a starting point. The description of the world or scenery on each moment is informative but also not excessive to the point it'd feel like an info dump. The areas are well envisioned and are not that hard to picture in some moments when you hear that MC went this way and you can imagine that that's where person "Y" is. Overall the world building is on point and super well made. [Five stars for World Building] Hope this review helps new readers, I recommend trying the first 10 chapters before coming to any rash conclusions about the story. Also see the tags, if it's not your cup of tea and you don't want to risk it then just don't read it.
I gave this another chance and look up CP2077 infos and kinda get it on my 3rd read. I read this on Fanfiction and the chapters are long there. The writing had lots of spelling errors, but it's still above average. The story is pretty mid, I like the beginning it has more original content than the latter half. The pacing could've been improved, too slow to my taste. Some characters are quite unneccessary like the Shimotsuki, Byron and Domino. They could be gone and not much would change. Author simply added these characters to force a connection to Kaido, Laboon & Mihawk. We never get to see Bob's backstory, and Triton is stupidly expensive yet useless. He already has a Legendary Sword Satori, the unbreakable sword. Author clearly have no idea of the backstory of the swords he put on his story and randomly put an expensive CP tag on them. Updates, well it's dropped. 4-3-4-3-2............................. . This fic really don't have much of a hook. MC is a musician and battles strong people a lot yet we never got the reaction we wanted from canon characters. Readers never got that dose of serotonin from all the troubles MC dived himself into. Every time we get a sneak peek of canon characters, it's just about future problems and that just built up frustrations from readers.
Dropped after mc bring random girl to team and every member vas angry about her wounds. I mean that the first time you see her. Chapter 28, before it was pretty good
The story is very interesting and i loved the beginning. I got bored after he got his devil fruit and a new implant from system. His original method chaged afterwards and got stale. However it is one of the best one piece ff I have read. A great find..
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I just wanna know what happened to this. It was one of if not the best one piece ff on webnovel
Enjoyed every moment only just caught up today and am bummed its not updating anymore but it was a blast while it lasted
Apparently you moved onto a new novel and I didn't even know it...and read it. Is this dropped or is it completed? I was going through trying to finish some stuff up and skipped to the end of the latest chapter and it says "for more chapters..." etc
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Ok so only reason i don’ like this book the main character hasn’ t set sea at chapter 42! I just can’ t it’ a slow book I just can’t
Its quite good. Especially the characters and the mc And i like the pace. The only thing i hate is the mc DF i'd rather have him be a martial artist+swordsmen instead of being a DF user He was quite talented to learn navy six style without even seeing them perform and i never saw a character performing navy six style by immitating them which means he's really talented Should have made the mc devour cool and flashy DF cus his current one dosnt look cool at all xD Anyway is this dropped?
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Very nice story, I like the design of the MC and the crew. He didn't start out too strong and you can see the growth of him and his comrades. Will this Novel continue or not? I am very sorry to not see more chapters, it was very entertaining and innovative....
First up i really love this light novel. It has everything that i usually find lacking in most LN, a character that physically is based of Johnny Silverhand from C77 the personality is completly different with a reincarnation system that I havnt seen before. The system dosnt just pump the MC with OP steroids and hands him everything on a silver platter, it gives him a helping start and he has to do all the work to progress. That isnt to say it dosnt give him some OP things cause it does, it just dosnt vomit them left right and centre. theyre rare. Also the side characters for the most part are unique, nice and refreshing then just copying and pasting the DD's of One piece into the crew. It makes for a fun chaotic dynamic. All in all the story is a fun take of the One piece world, if youre looking for a well fleshed out world where the MC does what he wants with over a longer period of time then this is your jam. If tho you are looking for a Fan fic where the MC goes from zero to worlds strongest in 100 chapters this isnt the story for you. Its a long haul story not a quicky. Love the idea and characters used, hope to see more chapters soon [img=recommend]
It's a good fanfic with great characters. My only complaint is that there is only one chapter with lemon content so far. There's also the fact that there seems to be no way for the mc to earn Character Points to buy perks and cyber ware from his system. I guess this would be addressed in his next system update.
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I got a question/spoiler. Did they meet Nico Robin?, and if they did, why didnt she join?` I'm up to chapter 192, and I forgot about this detail. Love the story.
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pretty good, I have a question tho. I'm on ch 66 so far and I wanted to know if mc ever gets a df? and i don't malind spoilers. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Well I am not good in expressing myself. Anyway since I like the story 5 🌟 from me. .....................................................................................................................
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ok lets do it writing quality- didnt see any spelling errors or anything like that so I guess 5 stars? stability of updates- superb, not only 1 chapter a day guaranteed but sometimes 2 so its 5 stars story development- the story develops and gives an original take on the journey of one piece, most stories focus more on power money or bounty but this story is about an adventure, 5 stars again character design- the author makes a lot of cool and original characters with original backstories and personalitys 5 stars world background- its one piece the author didn't really changed fundamental stuff but he added original things to the world again 5 stars basically, a must-read for one piece fans, unlike most stories on this website this story gives a story and not just wish fulfillment (which honestly I don't really like) give it a try
So I read both stories and only reviewed the newest story so here's a late review. Before let's get something straight, He is not 100% Johnny SilverHand, what I mean with this is that he is a guy who got transmigrated? yeah transmigrated into One piece and his new body is that of Johnny SilverHand. With that out of the way on to reviewing. 1-Writing Quality: I liked the writing on this story and so far all of Wicked's stories. There is little to no complications in understanding and most of the things people don't understand is mostly due to not paying enough attention. [So five stars here] 2-Story Development: The story has both slow moments and fast moments(Not in chapters, I mean as in skipping unnecessary things also labeled as timeskips or minor timeskips). The story in general has a good feel in it's development, this also includes the MCs interactions with the world and with it's inhabitants. For some it might have a slow development but it's to build the world, the characters and also building an understanding with the readers about the events and the characters (personal opinion, don't throw stones yet😂) [Again five stars] 3-Character Design: The characters are well designed so far, the author tried to maintain the personalities and speaking habits of some OG One Piece characters and succeeded so far. The MC I also consistent with his traits and goals, and we even see slight changes along the way in some of the MCs companions so that shows how well made the characters are. There is no forced change or moments, it's fluid and feels right. [D**n this is another five stars] 4-Updating Stability: As someone who's been reading since only 25 chapters I can say that the updates where consistent/stable. Key word being "where" because it isn't anymore, we'd get regular updates before but I can understand the motive for the lack of update right now as the newest story is taking the main focus of the author(Also go read it, it's a great read and is competing with Johnny SilverHand on my favourite of the month... Not that that changes anything to anyone 😅). Putting my personal opinion of five stars based on the previous updates and the constant updates on the new book(different books need different ratings) I gave the following rating. [Three stars for updates since Wicked didn't stay he stopped updating altogether] 5-World Building: The world feels like One Piece and that's the goal. There's no farfetched creations such as a island where they use cars and telephones, it's consistent with the OG world with some original islands and stuff since we needed a starting point. The description of the world or scenery on each moment is informative but also not excessive to the point it'd feel like an info dump. The areas are well envisioned and are not that hard to picture in some moments when you hear that MC went this way and you can imagine that that's where person "Y" is. Overall the world building is on point and super well made. [Five stars for World Building] Hope this review helps new readers, I recommend trying the first 10 chapters before coming to any rash conclusions about the story. Also see the tags, if it's not your cup of tea and you don't want to risk it then just don't read it.
I gave this another chance and look up CP2077 infos and kinda get it on my 3rd read. I read this on Fanfiction and the chapters are long there. The writing had lots of spelling errors, but it's still above average. The story is pretty mid, I like the beginning it has more original content than the latter half. The pacing could've been improved, too slow to my taste. Some characters are quite unneccessary like the Shimotsuki, Byron and Domino. They could be gone and not much would change. Author simply added these characters to force a connection to Kaido, Laboon & Mihawk. We never get to see Bob's backstory, and Triton is stupidly expensive yet useless. He already has a Legendary Sword Satori, the unbreakable sword. Author clearly have no idea of the backstory of the swords he put on his story and randomly put an expensive CP tag on them. Updates, well it's dropped. 4-3-4-3-2............................. . This fic really don't have much of a hook. MC is a musician and battles strong people a lot yet we never got the reaction we wanted from canon characters. Readers never got that dose of serotonin from all the troubles MC dived himself into. Every time we get a sneak peek of canon characters, it's just about future problems and that just built up frustrations from readers.
Dropped after mc bring random girl to team and every member vas angry about her wounds. I mean that the first time you see her. Chapter 28, before it was pretty good
The story is very interesting and i loved the beginning. I got bored after he got his devil fruit and a new implant from system. His original method chaged afterwards and got stale. However it is one of the best one piece ff I have read. A great find..
É uma fanfic que eu recomendaria que para ler pra um amigo se eu tivesse um que gosta de ler. -----------------------------------------------------
I just wanna know what happened to this. It was one of if not the best one piece ff on webnovel
Enjoyed every moment only just caught up today and am bummed its not updating anymore but it was a blast while it lasted
Apparently you moved onto a new novel and I didn't even know it...and read it. Is this dropped or is it completed? I was going through trying to finish some stuff up and skipped to the end of the latest chapter and it says "for more chapters..." etc
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Ok so only reason i don’ like this book the main character hasn’ t set sea at chapter 42! I just can’ t it’ a slow book I just can’t
Its quite good. Especially the characters and the mc And i like the pace. The only thing i hate is the mc DF i'd rather have him be a martial artist+swordsmen instead of being a DF user He was quite talented to learn navy six style without even seeing them perform and i never saw a character performing navy six style by immitating them which means he's really talented Should have made the mc devour cool and flashy DF cus his current one dosnt look cool at all xD Anyway is this dropped?
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Very nice story, I like the design of the MC and the crew. He didn't start out too strong and you can see the growth of him and his comrades. Will this Novel continue or not? I am very sorry to not see more chapters, it was very entertaining and innovative....
First up i really love this light novel. It has everything that i usually find lacking in most LN, a character that physically is based of Johnny Silverhand from C77 the personality is completly different with a reincarnation system that I havnt seen before. The system dosnt just pump the MC with OP steroids and hands him everything on a silver platter, it gives him a helping start and he has to do all the work to progress. That isnt to say it dosnt give him some OP things cause it does, it just dosnt vomit them left right and centre. theyre rare. Also the side characters for the most part are unique, nice and refreshing then just copying and pasting the DD's of One piece into the crew. It makes for a fun chaotic dynamic. All in all the story is a fun take of the One piece world, if youre looking for a well fleshed out world where the MC does what he wants with over a longer period of time then this is your jam. If tho you are looking for a Fan fic where the MC goes from zero to worlds strongest in 100 chapters this isnt the story for you. Its a long haul story not a quicky. Love the idea and characters used, hope to see more chapters soon [img=recommend]
It's a good fanfic with great characters. My only complaint is that there is only one chapter with lemon content so far. There's also the fact that there seems to be no way for the mc to earn Character Points to buy perks and cyber ware from his system. I guess this would be addressed in his next system update.
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I got a question/spoiler. Did they meet Nico Robin?, and if they did, why didnt she join?` I'm up to chapter 192, and I forgot about this detail. Love the story.
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Well I am not good in expressing myself. Anyway since I like the story 5 🌟 from me. .....................................................................................................................
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ok lets do it writing quality- didnt see any spelling errors or anything like that so I guess 5 stars? stability of updates- superb, not only 1 chapter a day guaranteed but sometimes 2 so its 5 stars story development- the story develops and gives an original take on the journey of one piece, most stories focus more on power money or bounty but this story is about an adventure, 5 stars again character design- the author makes a lot of cool and original characters with original backstories and personalitys 5 stars world background- its one piece the author didn't really changed fundamental stuff but he added original things to the world again 5 stars basically, a must-read for one piece fans, unlike most stories on this website this story gives a story and not just wish fulfillment (which honestly I don't really like) give it a try