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The story is nicely written and the theme is good too but it's a little confusing at some parts and there are some grammatical errors too. But I know you will fix them soon and yeah I hope you do frequent updates. 3.8 might seems bad but it's a honest review~ so please don't feel bad about it and try harder. All the best Author
An extremely powerful story! This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power! <3
FABULOUS !! the start of chapter was catchy, which drawned me into this novel. The progression of story is great so far. Loved it !! upload more chapters!!
Releasing new chapters soon ....Sorry for the delay. I think I will release 8 chapters in one go . Do enjoy that . THANK YOU ....... [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp]
Thank you ☺️ for your reviews. I will be adding new chapters. Sorry for the delay.......................................................... 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Your story is really good. Characters are described very well.Do update regularly. Nice keep it up..........................................................................................................................
Good plot and characterization ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________'___'______________'_______'
Overall It's good and interesting. Must try! [img=recommend] Characters are beautifully described. Author has done a great job writing this book. This will help in everyone's reading and speaking skills as well.
I like the plot and the starting lines of the novel. The writer is creative and done her research, but the writing style is actually revealing the whole story of reincarnation. The same wonderful plot you are planning to write can be made more intriguing. In the same way, if the characters are explained during the plot, it would add suspense element too. This is just my opinion and a author to author suggestion😊 I am giving five stars as an encouragement. Keep Going!!
The plot and the characters' backgrounds were relatively okay. There were just some problems with the transition of scenarios, misuses of punctuation marks, and quite a number of grammatical errors. I hope the author would mind giving a little more details so that it won't be confusing.
It's good to read the chapter and the character has been described perfectly in the first chapter. Don't confuse the timeline work pls except that everything was nice
Greatly detailed ...........................................................................................................................................................
I love the way the characters are thoughtfully discribed. The different timelines make the story very interesting, although you make sure it won't become confusing to readers. I think the Author has done a great job and with some editing I think this book can atract a lot of readers.
I like your plot . You have described the characters in detail . Story has lots of potential . Your cover page is also attractive . Really a good work . All the best for your future work ☺️ .
I like it so far. Characters are definitely unique so I'm eager to see how they bounce off one another. I'm keen to see how it develops. It's a solid start. Can't wait to read more.
A colourful cast is certainly a welcome addition to any novel, and in 'I ENGRAVED YOU ME', you're certainly getting a kaleidoscope of characters. I'm looking forward to see how the remainder of the cast interact!
quute good, but will need some little touching here and there if possible. the story line is good but according to me will be better if you know the character fully expresses his or herself with words and thought which blend in simultaneously. well, if I will take it as your style, then it's totally splendid. it will make it a book with a different way of expression - that's if I said it the right way😅. thereby, making it unique, *whisper* i love unique. don't tell anyone that🤫🤫 good luck with you book, Author ♥️♥️
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PEOPLE WHO GAVE REVIEWS TODAY , IAM SO GRATEFUL 🥲 . I AM GONNA POST CHAPTER 2 TODAY . DO GIVE YOUR SUPPORT AND ALSO COMMENT YOUR THOUGHTS REGARDING THAT. THANK YOU 🙏. CHAPTER 2 COMING SOON.....
The introduction was mind-blowing 🤯🤯🤯 I really loved the way the story was presented that is to not to judge anyone, eagerly waiting for thr next part 🥳🥳💙
its good looking forward for other chapter. have a nice journey in writing [img=coins] it would be amazing i guess from characters introduction
Big applause for the great attempt. Best of luck with your success. Good work by u. Congratulations on growing more. That was interesting great
I love the way that the characters are described . The Prologue speaks about their persona , gives an outline of their interrelationships & the emotion each characters hold ❤ I like your perspective of self love & trust 🥰 I hope you are good in feeding " Honey coated pills "😅🙂 Eargerly, waiting for the upcoming chapters 🤗 Good luck Author 😇
AUTHOR'S SHAMELESS REVIEW ...... Thank you guys for your reviews . I will keep updating my chapters regularly if possible . If not please forgive me . Do comment your thoughts and correct my work if you find any mistakes . THANKYOU ....
Firstly , a big applause for the great attempt. Best of luck for your success. Gud work by u . It was a treat both visionary and imaginary, congratulations for growing more . That was interesting and was a treat also
You have posted only your synopsis and first chapter , still it is interesting. I like the story line like how you started . I rooting for your works in future . Best of luck .
The book is good..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Keep going... U doing great 🔥 I love the storyline and above all the way you personify life and our part of the universe and how love connects us as a thread..your thoughts are really impressive and it makes me ponder deep..keep it up..
Really nice . You have posted first chapter recently , it is super good . You have focused on every detail. You even described all characters in detail Iam looking for more chapters from you . All the best.
I am on the wait. The plot is very interesting, the age of the '70's are a good time to live without the modern days' technical help. So I am waiting for the next chapter. [img=coins]
Great. One thing that I do love is that when you introduced the characters we (as readers) would get to 'meet' in the incoming chapters, they are all different from each other. There is variety in your characters personality traits and I really love that. I did notice that they are a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed. Overall, I love the plot and setting. Honestly, keep up the good work. I'm definitely adding this to my reading list.
The story is nicely written and the theme is good too but it's a little confusing at some parts and there are some grammatical errors too. But I know you will fix them soon and yeah I hope you do frequent updates. 3.8 might seems bad but it's a honest review~ so please don't feel bad about it and try harder. All the best Author
An extremely powerful story! This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power! <3
FABULOUS !! the start of chapter was catchy, which drawned me into this novel. The progression of story is great so far. Loved it !! upload more chapters!!
Releasing new chapters soon ....Sorry for the delay. I think I will release 8 chapters in one go . Do enjoy that . THANK YOU ....... [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=exp]
Thank you ☺️ for your reviews. I will be adding new chapters. Sorry for the delay.......................................................... 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜
Your story is really good. Characters are described very well.Do update regularly. Nice keep it up..........................................................................................................................
Good plot and characterization ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________'___'______________'_______'
Overall It's good and interesting. Must try! [img=recommend] Characters are beautifully described. Author has done a great job writing this book. This will help in everyone's reading and speaking skills as well.
I like the plot and the starting lines of the novel. The writer is creative and done her research, but the writing style is actually revealing the whole story of reincarnation. The same wonderful plot you are planning to write can be made more intriguing. In the same way, if the characters are explained during the plot, it would add suspense element too. This is just my opinion and a author to author suggestion😊 I am giving five stars as an encouragement. Keep Going!!
The plot and the characters' backgrounds were relatively okay. There were just some problems with the transition of scenarios, misuses of punctuation marks, and quite a number of grammatical errors. I hope the author would mind giving a little more details so that it won't be confusing.
It's good to read the chapter and the character has been described perfectly in the first chapter. Don't confuse the timeline work pls except that everything was nice
Greatly detailed ...........................................................................................................................................................
I love the way the characters are thoughtfully discribed. The different timelines make the story very interesting, although you make sure it won't become confusing to readers. I think the Author has done a great job and with some editing I think this book can atract a lot of readers.
I like your plot . You have described the characters in detail . Story has lots of potential . Your cover page is also attractive . Really a good work . All the best for your future work ☺️ .
I like it so far. Characters are definitely unique so I'm eager to see how they bounce off one another. I'm keen to see how it develops. It's a solid start. Can't wait to read more.
A colourful cast is certainly a welcome addition to any novel, and in 'I ENGRAVED YOU ME', you're certainly getting a kaleidoscope of characters. I'm looking forward to see how the remainder of the cast interact!
quute good, but will need some little touching here and there if possible. the story line is good but according to me will be better if you know the character fully expresses his or herself with words and thought which blend in simultaneously. well, if I will take it as your style, then it's totally splendid. it will make it a book with a different way of expression - that's if I said it the right way😅. thereby, making it unique, *whisper* i love unique. don't tell anyone that🤫🤫 good luck with you book, Author ♥️♥️
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PEOPLE WHO GAVE REVIEWS TODAY , IAM SO GRATEFUL 🥲 . I AM GONNA POST CHAPTER 2 TODAY . DO GIVE YOUR SUPPORT AND ALSO COMMENT YOUR THOUGHTS REGARDING THAT. THANK YOU 🙏. CHAPTER 2 COMING SOON.....
The introduction was mind-blowing 🤯🤯🤯 I really loved the way the story was presented that is to not to judge anyone, eagerly waiting for thr next part 🥳🥳💙
its good looking forward for other chapter. have a nice journey in writing [img=coins] it would be amazing i guess from characters introduction
Big applause for the great attempt. Best of luck with your success. Good work by u. Congratulations on growing more. That was interesting great
I love the way that the characters are described . The Prologue speaks about their persona , gives an outline of their interrelationships & the emotion each characters hold ❤ I like your perspective of self love & trust 🥰 I hope you are good in feeding " Honey coated pills "😅🙂 Eargerly, waiting for the upcoming chapters 🤗 Good luck Author 😇
AUTHOR'S SHAMELESS REVIEW ...... Thank you guys for your reviews . I will keep updating my chapters regularly if possible . If not please forgive me . Do comment your thoughts and correct my work if you find any mistakes . THANKYOU ....
Firstly , a big applause for the great attempt. Best of luck for your success. Gud work by u . It was a treat both visionary and imaginary, congratulations for growing more . That was interesting and was a treat also
You have posted only your synopsis and first chapter , still it is interesting. I like the story line like how you started . I rooting for your works in future . Best of luck .
The book is good..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Keep going... U doing great 🔥 I love the storyline and above all the way you personify life and our part of the universe and how love connects us as a thread..your thoughts are really impressive and it makes me ponder deep..keep it up..
Really nice . You have posted first chapter recently , it is super good . You have focused on every detail. You even described all characters in detail Iam looking for more chapters from you . All the best.
I am on the wait. The plot is very interesting, the age of the '70's are a good time to live without the modern days' technical help. So I am waiting for the next chapter. [img=coins]
Great. One thing that I do love is that when you introduced the characters we (as readers) would get to 'meet' in the incoming chapters, they are all different from each other. There is variety in your characters personality traits and I really love that. I did notice that they are a few grammatical errors here and there, but nothing that can't be fixed. Overall, I love the plot and setting. Honestly, keep up the good work. I'm definitely adding this to my reading list.