Synopsis
This is just a beginning of a major story as to be precise a prologue of a vast universe and multiverse which I wish to share with you all
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- Contexte du monde
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Chapter 4: The day before war 3 years ago 
Looks good, I like your work but needs improvement as your work clearly reveals that your a rookie writer but don't worry you'll improve and get noticed by many. So yes good-luck on your world building and try to give more stable updates.