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I don't know what to write. It's really hard to describe. Their relationship are messy, but it made the story mysterious especially about the rose man which I have a suspicion (Mason). But I will wait until the author complete this novel before the story revealed the mystery. Anyway, this is a great read, but I need more.👀
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I like this Novel. This Novel is just so chill. I can't get frustrated with it like other novels because the FL is dumb in other novles. I thought it would be boring at first but I got hook up. I'm at chalter 138 lol Logan has a fetish with Em acting like a cat in front of him. I hope Logan to be the Male Lead rather than Mason. I prefer Logan because Em is more honest to Logan than Mason. And dudeee Mason creeps me out. But it's fine if its Mason because he is handsoem LOL. BUT STILL LOGAN for me while I'm currently reading this Novel.
💕💕💕❤️Please post more chapters❤️💕💕💕 And I don't know my it's feel like most sweetest bunny guy is the creepy red rose guy😬😍 Love the story 💓
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This novel is interesting. At first I thought it to be pretty boring with only revenge and all . But boy I was wrong . It have many interesting and mysterious secret elements that I can't wait to uncover. Everything at this point is confusing ...but Emmy do handle things fine. I am waiting for the day when all the mystery would be exposed . I recommend this fun novel. it's more than just any petty revenge novel.
Great story, I just hope she doesn't suddenly 'move on and forgive the bullies'. The story is great so far and it has been building up for her to actually play the role of the villainess through her revenge.
The plot is very well thought out and although the FL is vindictive she´s still down-to-earth and caring when it comes to her family. After going through such extreme bullying and going back in time, not only is she good at planning out how to crush her different targets, but she´s also learning from her past experience. Learning to adapt quickly, to behave and dress differently, and to judge people better. Some grammatical errors can be found here and there but the story development will make you forget those. The author added some mystery and bone-chilling moments that leave you wanting more.
I really love this novel.. I love how the characters are well built and the story plot! And I'm in Love with em(lol) I'm reading both your books and ngl you have a great writing style, I look forward to what's in store in the future ^^
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Writing Quality: It has some typos, but it's not that many, you can still understand it. Story Development: I like it. It goes step-by-step. Character Design: I love it 🥰 The author gave me details and ideas of how they look, and the expression they make, which makes me love and hate the characters more. Updating Stability: The author updates everyday. When she takes time off, like for example she's sick, she takes a break and after she has healed, she posts multiple chapters to catch up to the time she lost. World Background: It's pretty good. The story takes place in the modern era. This is the first novel I've read, and I'm so glad I clicked on it. I got hooked by the cover and the title. 🤧
Our school also has cases of bullying, but not as intense like this. Mostly, the people back in my old school uses the verbal type of bullying, or teases. They would usually give embarrassing nicknames to the ones they're bullying. I was also a victim of this. I only lasted for a few months before I broke down and cried to my momma. The next day, my momma went to school and talked to our class adviser about this issue. The ones who bullied me were my friends. After they settled the issue, we didn't talk to each other again. If we ever did, there would always be that awkward silence. I think it's because they're ashamed of what they did before. They say it's the foolishness of their childhood.
Really intriguing overall like i like the revenge it’s well-deserved and her plans are intricate the only thing is Mason better not be the ml cuz i know it wasn’t his fault she died but like after helping her he despite knowing the effect of his actions like his psycho fangirls hunting her down he kept at it like he knew and afterwards did nothing when she suffered because of it you’d think she’d get a grip and her crush would be gone but she still likes him also Mason seems sketchy like stalkerish yandere he acts all sweet but secretly he’s rough and extreme Logan he’s rough but gentle and respects her boundaries he’s also hot and rich and yeah Mason is rich but he’s lying about it also he’s dangerous so
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I have a feeling the male lead is Mason. but can she please have both? I want Logan too. I always have a soft spot to bad boys. I just can't accept that she would end up with only Mason. Logan needs some love too 😭
Absolutely a great story, I find myself waiting for new chapters every day. At the end of every chapter, I wish I could skip to the next day and read more 💕
This novel has a very interesting plot. The main character(after dying), goes back 3 years into the past to get revenge. Em(fl) is a evil but not evil at the same time, a very nice character design. She is just a bullied girl that wants her revenge. It is overall a very interesting story.
I love this character, she pulls you in and makes you feel like she does. The author has a wonderfully clear writing style that makes it easy to keep reading 😁
It is awesome. I love how the author is tackling a bullying issue and how the author frames the character . Overall very well executed! 5 star quality!
The latest chapter went better than I expected, but I worry for her(Em) mental state, her vengeance is justified but will it be worth it the end and what will she do next after is said and done, she just push the only friend she had I fell sad for her.
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This Novel is good because it made people aware more of bullying and this EvilLupa first novel but the writing is super smooth and the stability of the update is great it encourages me to create another novel. I love your work EvilLupa~
As someone who was bullied, even though not as terribly, I really appreciate living vicariously through Em as she seeks revenge. I am rooting for her love life too. She deserves happiness.
This is great!!! Updates seem to be coming daily, can't wait to see how the story unfolds!!!! BTW IS THE ML MASON IM SO CURIOUS I THINK SO BECAUSE WE MEET HIM FIRST BUT STILLLLLLLLLLL!? [img=update]
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I personally enjpyed this book as it was extremley cathartic to me since i have been bullied for a couple years before, and im really looking forward to later chapters (wrote this when chapter 40 is the latest) however im looking at some things and im pretty sure (spoilers) that the MC is just going to jail Keira and not make her her blackmailed pawn which is odd for me.
Never had I loved a novel this much before, the plot is great, the main character’s (Emmy) revenge are interesting, and the story development keeps the readers entertained. I used to not enjoy these types of novels, but this novel really catched my eye. Great work! 👍👍👍👍🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍
I really like this character, about how straightforward she is and how she doesn't hesitate unlike the other stories I've read. In conclusion... This story is really good![img=recommend] I hope I can read more of this story in the future!
I started reading it yesterday and read all 33 chapters ( which is the last chapter until now). well this story is different from other Revenge stories because in others there are lots of family or love story drama it's more of a drama which can happened with anyone in our daily lives and I love the whole story concept. till now I love the whole story and looking forward to it. the FL is not depending on some special power or ability she is just using her brain n will to fight to manipulating the bullies to give them their own medicine and I really love the idea.
Bullied girl turns against the mean girls of school, a change from the eating their depression. I would like to see Gordon Ramsay poisoned though. It will be really funny. A high school revenge novel :) - just don’t do anything I wouldn’t do.
I hope this novel will get more attention from readers, so that many people are aware of bullying. I also wrote about bullying in one of my novel volumes. Our weapon as writers, of course, is writing.
First of all, I have to say this is different from my pupa's style of writing.....but I love it!!! Although I wasn't bullied in school - trust me, I got quite a fist - but through this book I empathsize with other bullied kids out there in the world. Bullying should never and would never be encouraged. Kudos to my evil pupa for writing a wonderful book like this. Keep up the good work
An mc who has been bullied and accidentAlly killed by her bullies Goes back in time. so what do you expect her to Do? Ah, reveNge SoundS too evIl so maybe We should just say, time For her to return the favor. 😂😂😂😂😂
This novel is dedicated for those who have been bullied during their school years, you'll not regret reading this. Thank you for checking the story, love you all. -Pupa.
I don't know what to write. It's really hard to describe. Their relationship are messy, but it made the story mysterious especially about the rose man which I have a suspicion (Mason). But I will wait until the author complete this novel before the story revealed the mystery. Anyway, this is a great read, but I need more.👀
Spoiler de révélation I like this Novel. This Novel is just so chill. I can't get frustrated with it like other novels because the FL is dumb in other novles. I thought it would be boring at first but I got hook up. I'm at chalter 138 lol Logan has a fetish with Em acting like a cat in front of him. I hope Logan to be the Male Lead rather than Mason. I prefer Logan because Em is more honest to Logan than Mason. And dudeee Mason creeps me out. But it's fine if its Mason because he is handsoem LOL. BUT STILL LOGAN for me while I'm currently reading this Novel.
💕💕💕❤️Please post more chapters❤️💕💕💕 And I don't know my it's feel like most sweetest bunny guy is the creepy red rose guy😬😍 Love the story 💓
Spoiler de révélation demanding another chapter demanding new chapter demanding new chapter demanding new chapter
This novel is interesting. At first I thought it to be pretty boring with only revenge and all . But boy I was wrong . It have many interesting and mysterious secret elements that I can't wait to uncover. Everything at this point is confusing ...but Emmy do handle things fine. I am waiting for the day when all the mystery would be exposed . I recommend this fun novel. it's more than just any petty revenge novel.
Great story, I just hope she doesn't suddenly 'move on and forgive the bullies'. The story is great so far and it has been building up for her to actually play the role of the villainess through her revenge.
The plot is very well thought out and although the FL is vindictive she´s still down-to-earth and caring when it comes to her family. After going through such extreme bullying and going back in time, not only is she good at planning out how to crush her different targets, but she´s also learning from her past experience. Learning to adapt quickly, to behave and dress differently, and to judge people better. Some grammatical errors can be found here and there but the story development will make you forget those. The author added some mystery and bone-chilling moments that leave you wanting more.
I really love this novel.. I love how the characters are well built and the story plot! And I'm in Love with em(lol) I'm reading both your books and ngl you have a great writing style, I look forward to what's in store in the future ^^
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Writing Quality: It has some typos, but it's not that many, you can still understand it. Story Development: I like it. It goes step-by-step. Character Design: I love it 🥰 The author gave me details and ideas of how they look, and the expression they make, which makes me love and hate the characters more. Updating Stability: The author updates everyday. When she takes time off, like for example she's sick, she takes a break and after she has healed, she posts multiple chapters to catch up to the time she lost. World Background: It's pretty good. The story takes place in the modern era. This is the first novel I've read, and I'm so glad I clicked on it. I got hooked by the cover and the title. 🤧
Our school also has cases of bullying, but not as intense like this. Mostly, the people back in my old school uses the verbal type of bullying, or teases. They would usually give embarrassing nicknames to the ones they're bullying. I was also a victim of this. I only lasted for a few months before I broke down and cried to my momma. The next day, my momma went to school and talked to our class adviser about this issue. The ones who bullied me were my friends. After they settled the issue, we didn't talk to each other again. If we ever did, there would always be that awkward silence. I think it's because they're ashamed of what they did before. They say it's the foolishness of their childhood.
Really intriguing overall like i like the revenge it’s well-deserved and her plans are intricate the only thing is Mason better not be the ml cuz i know it wasn’t his fault she died but like after helping her he despite knowing the effect of his actions like his psycho fangirls hunting her down he kept at it like he knew and afterwards did nothing when she suffered because of it you’d think she’d get a grip and her crush would be gone but she still likes him also Mason seems sketchy like stalkerish yandere he acts all sweet but secretly he’s rough and extreme Logan he’s rough but gentle and respects her boundaries he’s also hot and rich and yeah Mason is rich but he’s lying about it also he’s dangerous so
Spoiler de révélation I have a feeling the male lead is Mason. but can she please have both? I want Logan too. I always have a soft spot to bad boys. I just can't accept that she would end up with only Mason. Logan needs some love too 😭
Absolutely a great story, I find myself waiting for new chapters every day. At the end of every chapter, I wish I could skip to the next day and read more 💕
This novel has a very interesting plot. The main character(after dying), goes back 3 years into the past to get revenge. Em(fl) is a evil but not evil at the same time, a very nice character design. She is just a bullied girl that wants her revenge. It is overall a very interesting story.
I love this character, she pulls you in and makes you feel like she does. The author has a wonderfully clear writing style that makes it easy to keep reading 😁
It is awesome. I love how the author is tackling a bullying issue and how the author frames the character . Overall very well executed! 5 star quality!
The latest chapter went better than I expected, but I worry for her(Em) mental state, her vengeance is justified but will it be worth it the end and what will she do next after is said and done, she just push the only friend she had I fell sad for her.
Spoiler de révélation This Novel is good because it made people aware more of bullying and this EvilLupa first novel but the writing is super smooth and the stability of the update is great it encourages me to create another novel. I love your work EvilLupa~
As someone who was bullied, even though not as terribly, I really appreciate living vicariously through Em as she seeks revenge. I am rooting for her love life too. She deserves happiness.
This is great!!! Updates seem to be coming daily, can't wait to see how the story unfolds!!!! BTW IS THE ML MASON IM SO CURIOUS I THINK SO BECAUSE WE MEET HIM FIRST BUT STILLLLLLLLLLL!? [img=update]
The FMC novel I've read Didjdjrkdkdjdkdd6dugvhfudu6tfiyddugcrs6rugfd7tf7yr5r7rt6d7yff7duvkvkvjlbivobkvibkbgouobkbkjbjvkjbifugfiyf7gviuvugciug7yd8yg8ydy7gicugf8hvufiug8v
I personally enjpyed this book as it was extremley cathartic to me since i have been bullied for a couple years before, and im really looking forward to later chapters (wrote this when chapter 40 is the latest) however im looking at some things and im pretty sure (spoilers) that the MC is just going to jail Keira and not make her her blackmailed pawn which is odd for me.
Never had I loved a novel this much before, the plot is great, the main character’s (Emmy) revenge are interesting, and the story development keeps the readers entertained. I used to not enjoy these types of novels, but this novel really catched my eye. Great work! 👍👍👍👍🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️👍👍👍
I really like this character, about how straightforward she is and how she doesn't hesitate unlike the other stories I've read. In conclusion... This story is really good![img=recommend] I hope I can read more of this story in the future!
I started reading it yesterday and read all 33 chapters ( which is the last chapter until now). well this story is different from other Revenge stories because in others there are lots of family or love story drama it's more of a drama which can happened with anyone in our daily lives and I love the whole story concept. till now I love the whole story and looking forward to it. the FL is not depending on some special power or ability she is just using her brain n will to fight to manipulating the bullies to give them their own medicine and I really love the idea.
Bullied girl turns against the mean girls of school, a change from the eating their depression. I would like to see Gordon Ramsay poisoned though. It will be really funny. A high school revenge novel :) - just don’t do anything I wouldn’t do.
I hope this novel will get more attention from readers, so that many people are aware of bullying. I also wrote about bullying in one of my novel volumes. Our weapon as writers, of course, is writing.
First of all, I have to say this is different from my pupa's style of writing.....but I love it!!! Although I wasn't bullied in school - trust me, I got quite a fist - but through this book I empathsize with other bullied kids out there in the world. Bullying should never and would never be encouraged. Kudos to my evil pupa for writing a wonderful book like this. Keep up the good work
An mc who has been bullied and accidentAlly killed by her bullies Goes back in time. so what do you expect her to Do? Ah, reveNge SoundS too evIl so maybe We should just say, time For her to return the favor. 😂😂😂😂😂
This novel is dedicated for those who have been bullied during their school years, you'll not regret reading this. Thank you for checking the story, love you all. -Pupa.