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The only interesting things in my opinion that happen, is the MC's interactions with Jean Grey and the MC's slug fest with the Hulk. That said, no consequences seem to happen unless it involves the MC. So if you are into that, enjoy! No harems are in this story so far, so read on. Don't read this story expecting it to make sense. A lot is mixed and forced.
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what can i say? amazing story and mc, liked everything or almost everything. my problem is the harem but atleast this time it does feels a bit weird considering new 52 superman was married and already had two kids for i can remember wonder woman was thicc...
It's a nice Fan-Fic according to my taste but i still hope that you keep updating it fill out minor grammar mistakes.
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I remember reading this book on fanfiction.net and was really sad when it wasn't updated. great to see it here! Also it's good to see a Fanfic which isn't afraid of showing the truth about Tony Stark. really looking forward to more.
The author really needs to update more, the Story over all is really amazing and interesting
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really enjoy every aspect of it, romance doesn't seem forced like in other fan fics, the combination of personality's isn't to far from the original super man but at the same time different enough for it to be believable and it does a good job at it. the only complaint that I've seen people say is the upload schedule which idk if it's always like this but it has been 17 days since last uploaded
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Upload more dude, it's already been a day or 3. You have kinda just started posting new chapters from ch 18 so at least post 3 ch a week.....
New chapters have started from ch 18. God it was so good, I love this fanfiction. World building is perfect, relationships seems perfect and most of all the storyline is based on comic events rather than MCU so that's definitely a plus.
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Really good story. Just need an update for this story. Hope that the author will update this story soon.
The only interesting things in my opinion that happen, is the MC's interactions with Jean Grey and the MC's slug fest with the Hulk. That said, no consequences seem to happen unless it involves the MC. So if you are into that, enjoy! No harems are in this story so far, so read on. Don't read this story expecting it to make sense. A lot is mixed and forced.
Spoiler de révélation what can i say? amazing story and mc, liked everything or almost everything. my problem is the harem but atleast this time it does feels a bit weird considering new 52 superman was married and already had two kids for i can remember wonder woman was thicc...
It's a nice Fan-Fic according to my taste but i still hope that you keep updating it fill out minor grammar mistakes.
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I remember reading this book on fanfiction.net and was really sad when it wasn't updated. great to see it here! Also it's good to see a Fanfic which isn't afraid of showing the truth about Tony Stark. really looking forward to more.
The author really needs to update more, the Story over all is really amazing and interesting
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Upload more dude, it's already been a day or 3. You have kinda just started posting new chapters from ch 18 so at least post 3 ch a week.....
New chapters have started from ch 18. God it was so good, I love this fanfiction. World building is perfect, relationships seems perfect and most of all the storyline is based on comic events rather than MCU so that's definitely a plus.
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Really good story. Just need an update for this story. Hope that the author will update this story soon.