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So far the over all story premise is good and the ability of the MC is cool. But I am struggling to like the MC his personality is all over the place between a fun loving laid back guy one minute. The next he is a young master that disdain the world and everything is beneath him. Which gives me whiplash with his random mood swings.
So far the over all story premise is good and the ability of the MC is cool. But I am struggling to like the MC his personality is all over the place between a fun loving laid back guy one minute. The next he is a young master that disdain the world and everything is beneath him. Which gives me whiplash with his random mood swings.