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AUTHOR THANKS A LOT FOR WASTING MIEN'S TIME WITH YOUR DUMB NOVEL. ACE AND THE GIRL ROMANCE IS DUMB WEIRD..THE MC IS A DUMB MARRYSUE,, DO NOT READ THIS DUMB NOVEL
I SAVE YOUR LIFE AND TIME DO NOT READ THIS NOVEL BECAUSE THEIR NO END TO THIS NOVEL STORY..THE STORY IS DUMB THE FEMALE LEAD IS DUMB, AND FIRST ACE AND THE FEMALE MC HAVE NO LOVE CHEMISTRY THEIR LOVE FEELS LIKE WEIRD PARAPHILIA AND ACE CHOSE HER OVER LUFFY. THE BROTHER ACE GREW UP WITH IT WIERD ACE NEVER QUESTIONED THAT PSYCHO MC BEHAVES LIKE KILLING KIDS. SECOND THE FEMALE MC IS SO DUMB SHE IS SCARED OF BIG MOM THAT SHE RUNS TO ANOTHER UNIVERSE WITH ACE TO THE HERO ACADEMY UNIVERSE AND SHE ACTS LIKE DUMB VILLIAN. CAN SHE NOT KILL BIG MOM WITH 2 DEVIL FRUITS? BUT THE MC NEVER THINK OF THAT...WEIRDLY, LUFFY HAS MORE BACKBONE THAN SPINELESS MC ..THE MC FEMALE IS SO DUMB AND THIS IS NOT A ONE-PIECE NOVEL BUT MULTIVERSE THAT MADE NO SENSE.SO DO NOT READ THIS NOVEL AND SAVE YOUR HEAD BLOW UP WITH RAGE AT THE END. I have never read another of this author's works because he those not finished the novel.
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i really liked the oneshot story in chapter 1, and to be honest i didnt read the actual novel. ......................................................................
Sérieusement j'ai adorai , même si pas lu sur se site, un peu moins la partie MHA par contre, j ai trouver étrange que au lieu de passer dans un monde plus dur au contraire elle va dans un ou elle et casi invincible. ps:d'ailleur j'ai pas tout lu la parti MHA sa ne me plaisait plus
Like i said in the comment.. Trully love the big mom AU instead of any others series. even Kara and diana, they are to stuck up. thats MY opinion, dont take to heart. also, For you, readers who love refreshing story then read only Chapter 1 and chapter 71. its good read.
We...,., .,,., ., .., .,.,..,. ,.,.,.,., ., ., ., l.... L,... .. .,.,, ,. ,. ,. .,,., ., ,.,. Go,.,. ., . .,. . .,. ,.,.,,.,.., .,.. ,..,. ,, ,, .., ,, uwu
honestly one if my favorite fanfictions. Gotta love a good one piece/world domination story.________________________________________________
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Where is the Big Mom chapter ______________ _____________________ ___ __ _________ _ \ _ ___\____________________\________ ______________|\ _ _\\\\\\\
I am the exp of my sword… Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood… I have created thousands of useless reviews… Unknown to authors, nor known to readers… Have withstood pain to create thousand of reviews… Yet these hands never type anything… SO I PRAY UNLIMITED EXP WORKS!
The story is an entertaining read if you want an op main character that still has struggles against the best. A bit of a spoiler if you keep reading: Some downsides are that the main character has too many vastly different abilities, and story progression has a hiccup at the end of volume 1.
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Ok so we finally have an ending so I feel like I can make a rather impartial review now I'll try to keep things concise here. This has some of the most fantastic writing quality I have seen in quite some time here on this site and I quite recomend reading the story for that alone. things I loved here was a female main character and a genuinely good romance subplot that felt quite realistic. If I had to pin down two things I rather detested was the original plot was taken as fate and any major turns away were resisted from on high, and the evangelionesque ending with the mc getting kicked in the face down a tunnel with ace as she no joke "did too much damage to the plot" which happened litterally out of nowhere just like evangelion. Either way if you can stomach the downsides I positively loved the characters in this and would still recomend it overall I do think it was worth the read just like eva was worth watching I'm really not sure I will come back for the sequel though after those events.
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Awesome book! love it! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Finally at Big Mom arc! I know it'l only get better from here. Loved it so far. I read all your works! Grammar's pretty good, story's nice, and development could use more but it's fun either way! Will Anarchy be posted on web?
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bro this is so good compared to other one piece fanfics, where the MC makes their own crew or they join someone elses. but this one has the MC born into an Emperors crew which is a really cool change, i really hope you keep this up👍👍👍👍👍👍
It’s really interesting story. You can’t find a lot of story about One Piece with female oc and also without yuri🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰. Please, author, don’t drop this ff🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
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This one's the one on wattpad right? It's pretty consistent and the grammar's not bad. Minor mistakes along the way but meh. I like the story as it goes past the Marineford war. It gets much better with the Dressrosa arc in my opinion. Hopefully this is the actual author and not some copy.
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Hello! Author here I'm new to Webnovel so I've been going around reading some other stories and having fun as I upload. I found a lot of stuff like 'obligatory author review' so I decided to do the same. But since it's unfair to just have my own story rated by myself, I'll be taking questions here. Comment some questions about the story (or my other ones for some of you) and I'll try and answer as best as possible. For you dedicated readers...I'll even give spoilers for Hope Dies Last should you ask. Hehehe
AUTHOR THANKS A LOT FOR WASTING MIEN'S TIME WITH YOUR DUMB NOVEL. ACE AND THE GIRL ROMANCE IS DUMB WEIRD..THE MC IS A DUMB MARRYSUE,, DO NOT READ THIS DUMB NOVEL
I SAVE YOUR LIFE AND TIME DO NOT READ THIS NOVEL BECAUSE THEIR NO END TO THIS NOVEL STORY..THE STORY IS DUMB THE FEMALE LEAD IS DUMB, AND FIRST ACE AND THE FEMALE MC HAVE NO LOVE CHEMISTRY THEIR LOVE FEELS LIKE WEIRD PARAPHILIA AND ACE CHOSE HER OVER LUFFY. THE BROTHER ACE GREW UP WITH IT WIERD ACE NEVER QUESTIONED THAT PSYCHO MC BEHAVES LIKE KILLING KIDS. SECOND THE FEMALE MC IS SO DUMB SHE IS SCARED OF BIG MOM THAT SHE RUNS TO ANOTHER UNIVERSE WITH ACE TO THE HERO ACADEMY UNIVERSE AND SHE ACTS LIKE DUMB VILLIAN. CAN SHE NOT KILL BIG MOM WITH 2 DEVIL FRUITS? BUT THE MC NEVER THINK OF THAT...WEIRDLY, LUFFY HAS MORE BACKBONE THAN SPINELESS MC ..THE MC FEMALE IS SO DUMB AND THIS IS NOT A ONE-PIECE NOVEL BUT MULTIVERSE THAT MADE NO SENSE.SO DO NOT READ THIS NOVEL AND SAVE YOUR HEAD BLOW UP WITH RAGE AT THE END. I have never read another of this author's works because he those not finished the novel.
Spoiler de révélation i really liked the oneshot story in chapter 1, and to be honest i didnt read the actual novel. ......................................................................
Sérieusement j'ai adorai , même si pas lu sur se site, un peu moins la partie MHA par contre, j ai trouver étrange que au lieu de passer dans un monde plus dur au contraire elle va dans un ou elle et casi invincible. ps:d'ailleur j'ai pas tout lu la parti MHA sa ne me plaisait plus
Like i said in the comment.. Trully love the big mom AU instead of any others series. even Kara and diana, they are to stuck up. thats MY opinion, dont take to heart. also, For you, readers who love refreshing story then read only Chapter 1 and chapter 71. its good read.
We...,., .,,., ., .., .,.,..,. ,.,.,.,., ., ., ., l.... L,... .. .,.,, ,. ,. ,. .,,., ., ,.,. Go,.,. ., . .,. . .,. ,.,.,,.,.., .,.. ,..,. ,, ,, .., ,, uwu
honestly one if my favorite fanfictions. Gotta love a good one piece/world domination story.________________________________________________
Spoiler de révélation Where is the Big Mom chapter ______________ _____________________ ___ __ _________ _ \ _ ___\____________________\________ ______________|\ _ _\\\\\\\
I am the exp of my sword… Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood… I have created thousands of useless reviews… Unknown to authors, nor known to readers… Have withstood pain to create thousand of reviews… Yet these hands never type anything… SO I PRAY UNLIMITED EXP WORKS!
The story is an entertaining read if you want an op main character that still has struggles against the best. A bit of a spoiler if you keep reading: Some downsides are that the main character has too many vastly different abilities, and story progression has a hiccup at the end of volume 1.
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Ok so we finally have an ending so I feel like I can make a rather impartial review now I'll try to keep things concise here. This has some of the most fantastic writing quality I have seen in quite some time here on this site and I quite recomend reading the story for that alone. things I loved here was a female main character and a genuinely good romance subplot that felt quite realistic. If I had to pin down two things I rather detested was the original plot was taken as fate and any major turns away were resisted from on high, and the evangelionesque ending with the mc getting kicked in the face down a tunnel with ace as she no joke "did too much damage to the plot" which happened litterally out of nowhere just like evangelion. Either way if you can stomach the downsides I positively loved the characters in this and would still recomend it overall I do think it was worth the read just like eva was worth watching I'm really not sure I will come back for the sequel though after those events.
Spoiler de révélation Awesome book! love it! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Finally at Big Mom arc! I know it'l only get better from here. Loved it so far. I read all your works! Grammar's pretty good, story's nice, and development could use more but it's fun either way! Will Anarchy be posted on web?
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Really good, funny seing ace like that shjsshhsdvdjfbfnf fbfnfnfnfjfjfjfjfjfjfbfjhfjfbfbfbfbfbfbfjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfjfjfjjfjfjfjfjfjfkfnfnfnfn for if d’le du fkf FBI fkf je fkf fkf fkf je fkf fkf fkf fkf k
Spoiler de révélation bro this is so good compared to other one piece fanfics, where the MC makes their own crew or they join someone elses. but this one has the MC born into an Emperors crew which is a really cool change, i really hope you keep this up👍👍👍👍👍👍
It’s really interesting story. You can’t find a lot of story about One Piece with female oc and also without yuri🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰. Please, author, don’t drop this ff🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
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This one's the one on wattpad right? It's pretty consistent and the grammar's not bad. Minor mistakes along the way but meh. I like the story as it goes past the Marineford war. It gets much better with the Dressrosa arc in my opinion. Hopefully this is the actual author and not some copy.
Spoiler de révélation
Hello! Author here I'm new to Webnovel so I've been going around reading some other stories and having fun as I upload. I found a lot of stuff like 'obligatory author review' so I decided to do the same. But since it's unfair to just have my own story rated by myself, I'll be taking questions here. Comment some questions about the story (or my other ones for some of you) and I'll try and answer as best as possible. For you dedicated readers...I'll even give spoilers for Hope Dies Last should you ask. Hehehe