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can you continue this book i personally loved it, it had a unique story if you don't like the book you wrote then why don't you rewrite it so it is the same in the beginning like the digi king but have the digidestin hear a legend and have were they showed the story on the island they find a story about the digi King and his story but they don't know what happened to him and where he came from
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is this not gonna get an update? also I like how this book is going so far but it feels like not much has happened in it like all he's done so far is gathered soldiers showing up soldiers and all their interactions go something like this mc shows up -> saves digimon -> recruits them -> leaves but Kingdom building is in the tags so hopefully he takes a break from kingdom building at some point and starts interacting with tie and friends or he starts doing it more often though I feel like I might have a bias since I would find it funny if the MC showed up and π€‘ ing on the digidestined
amazing pls upload amazing please upload amazing please upload more chapters more chapters more chapters please It is really great story please upload more chapters
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what'sup whith mc in your recent OP and digimon fics? do thay have some kind of identifycation problemsοΌ like transformpeople nowdays, that second person perspective is realy weird. good old βi amβ is not trendy now i gess.
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Really good Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
more please I need more,............................................................................................................ .....
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Great story, hope you feel betterβ¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!//////::/:::::::::::::::////////://
Get well soon!!! Love your stories!!! ........................................................................................................................................
this is less of a review and more of a question to those who know the answer... what does it mean for contributing to the book??? does it mean the stones or something else???
i like this story and your other works keep it up i do have to ask if you are just uploading to this site or are you working on new chapters
From what I have been able to observe from this story, it is that like most of your work it is interesting. It has a lot of potential.
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A very interesting digimon fanfic.ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
i wish i could give u full marks but i cant u never seem to finish any of your stories if u did id love to give u full marks i mean i loved the rosary vampire fan fic but u dont update any more
great story just like all the others just one question is there a discord acc so i can join [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Angewoman and lilithmon, maybe add other humanoid digimon and or human females cause that would be spectacular too read. Also welcome back dude.
Can you continue the story because I like where you're going with the story. So please keep going and don't give up the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
can you continue this book i personally loved it, it had a unique story if you don't like the book you wrote then why don't you rewrite it so it is the same in the beginning like the digi king but have the digidestin hear a legend and have were they showed the story on the island they find a story about the digi King and his story but they don't know what happened to him and where he came from
Good..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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is this not gonna get an update? also I like how this book is going so far but it feels like not much has happened in it like all he's done so far is gathered soldiers showing up soldiers and all their interactions go something like this mc shows up -> saves digimon -> recruits them -> leaves but Kingdom building is in the tags so hopefully he takes a break from kingdom building at some point and starts interacting with tie and friends or he starts doing it more often though I feel like I might have a bias since I would find it funny if the MC showed up and π€‘ ing on the digidestined
amazing pls upload amazing please upload amazing please upload more chapters more chapters more chapters please It is really great story please upload more chapters
Spoiler de rΓ©vΓ©lation what'sup whith mc in your recent OP and digimon fics? do thay have some kind of identifycation problemsοΌ like transformpeople nowdays, that second person perspective is realy weird. good old βi amβ is not trendy now i gess.
ββββββββββββββββββββββββββββββππββββββππππππππββββββββββββπππββββββπππββββββββββββββββββββββπππππππββββββββββββββββββββββ
Really good Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
more please I need more,............................................................................................................ .....
Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update please Update
Great story, hope you feel betterβ¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦β¦..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!//////::/:::::::::::::::////////://
Get well soon!!! Love your stories!!! ........................................................................................................................................
this is less of a review and more of a question to those who know the answer... what does it mean for contributing to the book??? does it mean the stones or something else???
i like this story and your other works keep it up i do have to ask if you are just uploading to this site or are you working on new chapters
From what I have been able to observe from this story, it is that like most of your work it is interesting. It has a lot of potential.
βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ βββββββββββββββββββββββ ββββββββββββββββββββββ
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A very interesting digimon fanfic.ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
i wish i could give u full marks but i cant u never seem to finish any of your stories if u did id love to give u full marks i mean i loved the rosary vampire fan fic but u dont update any more
great story just like all the others just one question is there a discord acc so i can join [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Angewoman and lilithmon, maybe add other humanoid digimon and or human females cause that would be spectacular too read. Also welcome back dude.
Can you continue the story because I like where you're going with the story. So please keep going and don't give up the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!